MG SS : HAWAS - A DESIRE TO MAKE YOU MINE:Mod note Pg23

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Maan looked at Geet who was sleeping peacefully in his arms. He had crossed every limit with a girl who had no idea as to what a physical relation is!! His HAWAS for her led him to bed her!!
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Intresting start😊
Waiting for the story to start!
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😆 I think you either want to write on Maaneet or the other couple . If its Maaneet change the names 😳
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Interesting concept... And About title I can't say because I'm still waiting to read the story
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congrats on another SS! Lovely banner! fab intro! update soon
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interesting but this was harika's concept. is this her new id????
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PROLOGUE

In Lucknow,

Maan Singh Khurana's car stopped in front of a beautiful mansion. He noticed the name plate where is written 'Geet MANSION'. He entered into the mansion. A maid came to him.

Maid : Sir good morning. Sir will you like to have a coffee?

Maan: No. Is Geet ready?

Maid : Yes Sir. Madam will come here in few minutes.

Maid left from there. He saw Mr. Handa's photo. He drifted into his past. Mr. Handa was his business partner. He treated him always like his son. Today K.C is No.1 and he is No.1 business tycoon in Asia which is not possible if Mr. Handa helped him. Mr. Handa died before 3 days. Maan remembered what he promised on Mr. Handa's death bed.

Flashback Start

Mr. Handa : Maan I want a promise from you, My Son?

Maan : Ok. Uncle I promise you I will do whatever you ask

Mr. Handa : I want you promise me you will look after my daughter Geet. Geet does not know how cruel the world is. She has none except me. I am very scared what will happen to her after my death. Maan promise me you look after my Geet

Maan : Ok. I promise from today Geet is my responsibility

Flashback End

Now he is legal guardian of 17 years Geet Handa. His thoughts broke by a melodious voice. He turned behind hearing his name "Maan". When Maan looked at Geet, he could not stop himself from looking at her admiringly. She is coming toward him wearing a black top and an orange capri.




She was looking very beautiful in this dress. He was lost in her divine beauty. He found her very innocent cute and beautiful. Geet came near Maan and again called his name "Maan".

He came back to his sense.

Maan : Lets go to the car. Our flight after an hour

Geet nodded her head. They both sat into the car. The driver drove the car to the airport.

After reaching the airport, he could see the little fear in her eyes as she was getting conscious of stares which she was getting from people around her. He looked around and noticed people staring at her. He did not like people's stares at her. He placed his hand on her slim waist and pulled her to him by her waist indicating people around him that she is his. He himself did not know why he was being possessive for her. Seeing Maan Singh Khurana with Geet people moved their eyes from her as they know that MSK could do anything if someone keep eye on something which belong to him. Nobody can escape from his world famous anger. Seeing Maan's hold on Geet's waist, anybody can tell she is precious to him.


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interesting prologue! update soon, pls post cs! Thanks
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Interesting... He's geets guardian n lusts her ...

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