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Bhanu

@Cherishh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#261

Chapter-51

Finally, happiness has knocked on the door of Khuranas...the life and light of house is back

So happy to see all the family members cherishing this joy of happiness and sharing it too in a way with the help who need it

Awww thats such a cute and serene moment where Maansi sweet childish acts making everyone laugh and smile

Happy to see Geet kinda relaxed and trying to know more about her baby and her antics

it indeed was a wonderful and beautiful update

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tammana

@tammana.m

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#262

waitinggg when will u updateee😭

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Bhanu

@Cherishh

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#263

Chapter-52

wowww...a sweet family time, par yaar hospital mein...too much hai😆😆

oh yes Maansi don't need a partner for her cute devil antics

The way u didn't miss out anything makes your writing more interesting. Like here Geet's pain of seeing herself and making her down and sad...showing the effects of surgery thru this and her lean and pale self is becoz of exhaustion, pain of days, but Maan being with her like always and supporting her and being her strength is a relief

the pain and relief which Maan got doesn't seem to like to be with him so easily and is testing him like hell

Now finally know the reason behind Geet's denial to go Mansion, but never thought in these terms..thought it could be some of her innocent reasons...liked this unexpected turn dear

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Bhanu

@Cherishh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#264

Chapter-53

Relieved that she at least agreed to be in farmhouse what if just with her small sweet family

Its like a new beginning of life for Maaneet...where one is knowing oneself and the other living those happy moments again and refreshing life with a smile and being with each other and finding, giving and accepting comfort and presence of love is marvelous

The cute childhood facts which made them laugh yet making one sad, but the other supporting and bringing out of the grief going thru pain himself...the respect and love for his love and the relationship Maan has just amazing to read

One thing was nice that is Geet can feel his longing, though she is unsure but thats a good sign I guess where she will try to understand and come to terms with things not so late😳

ohhhooo the devil...how much she makes Maan run and oh my the way she scolds him...awww so cute

Happy to see Geet happy and Maan happy seeing his angels happy😃

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Bhanu

@Cherishh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#265

Chapter-54

A sweet start to the update...with lovely moments of mother-daughter and Maan cherishing it and being content

omg..glad Maan was around and saved her...really as he said no more pain now, but at the end of it he did make things worse in anger. Well, till when can he bottle up his emotions😳, but yes his words did hurt Geet a lot, she isn't aware of anything about her life and is trying to come to terms with everything, pain and guilt eating her up and only maansi was her solace though she was secured and a bit relaxed and comfortable around Maan and now being accused has left her more vulnerable

Geet pov was so emotional...though her innocence still present she is more lonely than before trying to find herself or come to terms with her present life

I just hope she doesn't take any step in haste and talks to Maan

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Bhanu

@Cherishh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#266

Chapter-55

Yeh kya ho raha hai yaar...wasn't the pain they went through, mostly Maan. enough that now this...how is he gonna live. What Geet going thru is also not less..she is so confused and lost that she is speaking her mind but not putting it out correctly for Maan to understand

Maaneet are so broken...Geet want him to happy and not to live and give hope to that hope in him and here Maan is seeing this Geet to b his old geet and taking her words to heart and not understand her condition, but can't say its his fault..seems like his patience and pain is playing with his senses

all this lead to him leaving but keeping Maansi with Geet till she turns 2...where is this gonna take..will he come back the next day or won't..how will geet deal with all this, now that she started feeling for him and I guess she realizes it as love

Hope she does and goes back to her Maan and manofyies him...plzz no more pain now...want bubbly geet, though what she doesn't remember anything but trying to come in terms with her life and shares her confusions and all with him and hope that he doesn't turn to hard to reach😳

Didn't think u will bring this big emotional twist...when we feel its a happy time, everything is back to square one, the pain...gosh its a big roller coaster journey for sure

Looking forward for the second series and waiting with hope

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Bhanu

@Cherishh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#267

"Kya inka alag hona hii.. Waqt ka fasiala hai"

These words at the end is hard to take, but the last few lines of the update leaves a hope

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Bhanu

@Cherishh

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#268

I really wanted to read Maaneet childhood past and in addition to it young Mansi...wowww so very excited for the next series😃

Edited by Cherishh - 11 years ago

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sumaiyariya

@sumaiyariya

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#269

ye kya hogaya hay 😲😲😲

geet ne bola aur maan chala gaya

mansi ko geet ke pass chorke nooo 😭😭😭

maaneet separation 😭

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SANJH

@Snowy_Secret

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#270

Beautiful ff,Love maan-mansi-geet bonding,finaly all evils r punished bt geet had to suffre most into all this with little mansi,love meera the way she always their for mansi like a mother,they share a cute special bonding,bt mansi also got her mother love directly or indirectly geet was always with her baby princess.And now when geet lost her memory parmanently I m egarly waiting for a new begining.Maan,mansi and geet all desrve happinerss atleast now,they suffred so much,Our doll want both her mom and dad's love,hope maaneet sort out their diffrences soon,waiting for new waqt joureny now:)