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Suhana HaI MaUsAm

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Posted: 11 years ago

HII FRIENDS I AM BACK WITH ANOTHER FF...😊

DID YOU KNOW THAT I AM STATED NEW FF NAME- MY SECRET LOVER BUT NOT UPDATED...

HOPE U LIKE THIS DARK AND INTENSE FF.

I AM RESERVED SOME POSTS TO POST PART HERE.

PLEASE LIKE AND COMMENT.

CHARACTER SKETCH BELOW.

AS I WRITING I THOUGHT SOME PEOPLE LIKE NOT THIS FF SO 15+ ALLOWED RO READ THIS FF.

BCOZ AS STORY GOES IT BECOME MUCH DRAKER1

SO I WARN YOU 😊

AND IF U WANT TO YOU READ IT THEN GO BLEOW!😉 ENJOY 😆

AS I SEEING MANY PEOPLE WANT PMS OF FF. BUT THAT IM POSSIBLE FOR ME DUE TO TIME PERMITTED. SO NOW I CREATED NEW THREAD WHERE I POST MY WORKS AND DATE OF FF. SO BOOKMARK MY THIS FOR UPDATE OF FF. SORRY GUYS! BUT IT'S IMPOSSIBLE FOR ME TO PM U.

THREAD-

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4131521/my-cent-percent-and-update-thread

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Suhana HaI MaUsAm

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Posted: 11 years ago

HAVAS-A DARK TRUTH

MAAN SINGH KHURANA-

30YRS OLD BUSINESSMAN. MD OF KHURANA CONSTRUCTION. ARROGRANT, RUDE, AND POSSIVE OF HIS THINGS. 2^ND MEMBER OF FAMILY.

LOVES HIS DADIMAA A LOT. LIVE IN LONDON.

DADIMAA-

65YRS OLD GRANDMOTHER OF MAAN, DEV AND ANNY. LOVELABLE AND SUPPORTIVE OF CHARACTER.

ANNY-

18 YRS OLD NAUGHTY SISTER OF MAAN. AND SYUDIES IN U.S.A.

DEV-

BIG BROTHER OF MAAN. HANDICAPPED AND HELP MAAN IN MANAGE BUSINESS IN INDIA. 31 YRS OLD.

GEET'S FAMILY-

JUNGU MAMA-

46 YRS OLD MAN . WORKS IN FACTORY . LIVES IN HOSHIYARPUR.

SHILA MAMI-

40 YRS OLD. HOUSEWIFE AND GRADE SHADE . POOR FAMILY BACKGROUND.

NAINA-

18 YRS OLD . DAUGHTER OF JUGU. BUBBLY. AND INNOCENT.

SHAMSHER-

BIG BROTHER OF NAINA AND GEET. ANGRY YOUNG MAN. FOLLOWS TRADITION.

GEET HANDA-

18 YRS OLD BUBBLY COUSIN OF NAINA AND SHAMSHER.

STUDIES IN B.A. BUBBLY , INNOCENT, TALKTATIVE AND W8NG FOR HER KNIGHT PRINCE.

ALL THIS ARE CHARACTER IN THIS STORY.

THIS STORY WILL BE MORE DARK AND INTENSE. IF YOU FIND CONSIENCE IN THIS STORY THEN PLEASE TELL ME. BEACAUSE THIS IS MY ORIGINAL CONCEPT.

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Suhana HaI MaUsAm

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Posted: 11 years ago

INDEX-

PART 1-

BELOW

PART 2-

BELOW

PART 3-

BELOW

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Suhana HaI MaUsAm

@great_love

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Posted: 11 years ago

PART 1 -

"GEET BETA, UTTO. AAJ TUMHE LOG DEKHNE AANE WALE HAI" SHILA SAID LOVINGLY TO GEET.

"NAHI MAMI, MUGHE NAHI UTHANA, AAJ TO CHUTIYA CHALU HO GAYE HAI. BUS DO MIMNUTE SONE DO NA"GEET TOLD SHILA WHILE SLEEPING AGEIN.

"GEET, UTH JAA. MAI TUZE AKHIR BAAR KAH RAHI HUI. GHAR MAI KITNA SAARA KAAM PADA HAI" "ARRE USE SONE DO NAA. AHIR WO DO DIN MAI SASURAL JANE WALI HAI" SAID JUGU MAMA WHILE COMING IN THE ROOM.

"AAP, CHUP BATHIYE. GHAR INTNE SAARE KAAM WO KAREGA? MAHARANI,TO SO RAHI HAI" SHILA TATUNTED TO GEET.

"OYE, MAHARANI UTH JAA AUR JALDI NICHE AA JAA. NASHTA BANA HAI AUR SHAMSHER KO TERE SASURAL WALO KO LENE KE LIYE JANA HAI" SHILA TOLD ANGNGIRLY TO GEET.

JUGU MAMA SAW GEET SADLY AND WENT TO HALL WITH MAMI.

GEET WOKE UP AFTER HERING RUDE REMARK OF MAMI. AND STARTED CRYING.

"BABAJI, HAMESHA MERI SAATH ASIA KYON HOTA HAI. AAJ MERE PASS MAA-BABUJI JINDA HOTE TO AISI NOBAT MUJH PAR KABHI NAHI AATI."

"MAA, MAI AAPKO MISS KARTI HUI. AAP XHALI GAYI AUR MAI YAHA PAR AKELI PAD GAYI." SAYING SHE WENT TO BATHROOM TO GET READY.

AFTER THAT SHE WAS GOING TO KITCHEN BUT 10 MINTUES LATE SO SHILA MAMI AGING SAID "HA HA, MAHARANI AA GAYI NICHE WO BHI PURE ADHA GHANTA. GEET, YAHA AAO." GEET WENT NEAR HER WHILE FERING THE CONSEQUNCES.

"GEET, TUME PATA HAI NAA MUZE AUR SHAMSHER KO DHERI ACHI NAHI LAGTI. TO PHIR HAMESHA WAHI GATILYAN HAMESHA KYON KARTI HUI. AAJ TUMHE IISKI SAJA MILENGI. TUMHARA HAATH AAGE KARO". GEET GAVE HER HAND TO MAMI AND MAMI HER PUNISHEMENT.

"AAPNA HAATH AAGE KARNA AUR RIGHT NAHI LEFT." GEET NE APNA LEFT HAND AAGE KIYA AND MAMI GAVE HER HOT COAL IN HER HAND. "TUM YE JALTA HUA KOYLA AAPNE HAATH MAI RAKH KAR NASHTA BANAUGI AND SHE CLOSED HER HAND WHILE GIVING KOYLA AND USING BANDAGE."

"AUR HA TUM CHULE PAR KHANA PAKAOGI. AAJ AALU KE PARATHA BANANA" AUR PHIR SHAM SHER KE LIYE NASHTA PARSHONA. JAB TAK YE KAAM KHTAM NAHI HO JATA TUM YE KOYLA NAHI NIKALOGI SAMJHI!"

"HEE MAMAI," SAID WHILE SOBBING. HER HAND WAS BURNING BUT WHAT SHE COULD DO? SHE WAS SO HELPLESS LIKE HER MAMA INFRON OF MAMI.

SHE SHUDERED RAMAING LAST WEEK INCIDENT.

PAST-

IN LAST WEEK WHILE COOKING GEET BURN VEGETABLES. SEEING THAT MAMAI WENT WILD.

"GEET, TUMHE PATA HAI EK VEGETABLE KITNA MAHANHI HAI ISEE PURE 100 RUPESS KILO HAI AUR TUNE PURE SAU RUPAYE BARBAAD KAR DIYE"

"AAJ, TUMHE ISKI SAAJA MILEGI" "MAMI, MUZE MAAF KAR DO. PLEASE ASIA MAI AAGE NAHI KARNGI. "GEET PLEADED TO MAMI BUT MAMI DIDN'T HEAR OF GEET.

"JAKAR PICHALE AAGAN KADHE HO JAO AUR HAA APNE SAATH RASI LANA."

GEET WENT TO BACKSIDE YARD AND STAND THEIR. MAMI CAME AND ASKED TO GIVE HER ROPE .

USING ROPE MAMI TIED GEET TO KHABA IN HOT SUMMER.

"GEET, TUM AAJ PURE DIN YAHA KADHI RAHOGI AND AAJ TUMHE KHANA NAHI MILEGA. AUR HAA YE MAT SAMHJNA TUMHARA KAAM MAU KARUNGI. SAB KAAM TUMHE KARNA HAI "

"BUT GEET STARTED AGING PLEDING TO MAMI MAMI, YESE MAT KARO. MAI SAB KAAM KARNGI. PAR MUZE ...'

BEFORE SHE COULD COMPLETE SENTENCE MAMI USED RUMAL TO GAGGED GEET."ABHI ACHA HAI ABB TUM BOL NAHI SAKTI" "JYADA RO NAA TU ISSE BADA PHATHAR HAAL KAR DUNGI"

GEET STOOD ALL DAY AND MA MAMI DIDN'T CARE ABOUT IT.

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GEET CAME OUT HER PAST AND WENT TO KITHCHEN FOR MAKING BREAKFAST.

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Suhana HaI MaUsAm

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Posted: 11 years ago

😡PART 2-

GEET COME IN THE HOUSE AND DONE WITH THE MORNING BREAKFAST. IN THAT TIME SAMASHER COME TO THE DINING TABLE.

"GEET, GEET KITHE HAI TU? KITNA TIME LAGA RAHI HAI?"

SAMASHER CALLED IN ANGRY VOICE.

GEET COME IN HALL SHIVERING DUE TO FAER FROM HEAD TO TOE.

" JI VEERAJI AAPNE BULAYA?? " GEET ASKED MEEKILY.

"HA, PICHALE EK GHANTE AWAJ LAGA RAHA HUI? SUNA NAHI DETA?.. JA JALDI LEKAR KHANA LAGA DE.. MUZE TERE SASURAL WALON LEKE JAANA HAI"

GEET TURNED TO LEAVE "GEET KHANA TIKHA HONA CHAHIYE.. MUZE YE VEG KHANA PASAND NAHI HAI.. USKE SAATH OMLETE AND CHIKEN WOH ROASTED HONA CHAYIYE"

"PAR VEERAJI, MAMI AAJ VEG KHANA BANA LEKIYE BOLA THA.."

"GEET, MAA J BHI BOLEGI TO KARTI HAI NAA? TO MAI JO BOLATA HUI WO TUZE KARNA PADEGA, AUR HAA APNA SAR DAK LENA"

"KHADANI LADIYAN APNA SAR ASIA KHULA NAHI CHODATI" SAMAJI" SAMASHER RUDERLY ODERED GEET.

GEET MADE ROSTED CHICKEN AND OMLETE BUT DUE COSTANT CALLING OF SMASHER SHE BURNED THE CHICKEN.

GEET CAME IN THE DINING HALL WITH SAMASHER'S BREAKFAST. SHE STATED SERVICING BREAKFAST TO SAMASHER. BUT WHEN VEERAJI TESTE CHCICKEN HE EXPLODED...

"GEET, YE CHICKEN HAI YA STONE HAI? KITNA JALAYA HAI? APNA MOOH KHOL.."

GEET DENIDEN PELAED " PLZ BHAIJI, MUZE MAAF KAR DO"

"NAHI GEET, TUNE YE CHICKEN JALAYA HAI NA TO YE GARAM CHICKEN KHAYEGI..."

HE FORCEFULLY FEED CHICKEN TO GEET AND EAT HE REAMING BREAKFAST..

AS HE LEAVING VEERAJ SAID " GEET, MAI TUZE SASURAL WAALON KO LENE JARAHA HUI LEKIN USE PHELE MUZE 1GHANTE BAAD STORE ROOM MAI MILANA..."

"JI VEERAJI" AS HERING HIS REQURIED REPONSE HE WENT FROM THEIR.

AND GEET SOBBED SITTING OF FLOOR WITH HER ALL HEART.

"BABAJI ASIA KYON... MAMI JO JULM KARTI HAI WO MAI SHELO GI" BUT BHAJI JII KE JULM KAISE SAHOON KARRON?"

PRECAP: 🤢🤢🤢 GEET AND SAMASHER'S PAST 😡

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Suhana HaI MaUsAm

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Posted: 11 years ago

chotoku note!

there r some people wating the update! so i made list on page 10! check ur name in that! if ur name not appaer then please mention in ur comeent! replies to comment from page 9 & 10.

part 3-

🤢 precap change wo samasher geet's past baad aayega!

abhi to hamare maan baapu ki entry! 😳😳 bahot rona dhona hogaya! ab ek action sequence ho jaaye!! 😉😉 what say!

Maan Singh khurana! crown prince of khurana empire! world don't know him!!!!!!

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"part 3- (unedited)

"1,2,3" " flight now taking off! please put ur seatbelt! we are now going to london!"

airhostes" sir, plane has now take off! "

sir"hmm... okay!"

airhostes " sir, what can i bring for u?"

sir" one red wine after that send some model in the cabinet!"

airhosts" sure , sir!"

sir" one moment, before u bring that model she should be blind! i don't want know about myself to her!"

airhostes" okay!"

airhostes went to paterny and came with his red wine!

model" hey you called me! "

airhoses" yeah! sir calling ypu! but first put this blindfold! and here is ur drink!"

model drank her drink and put blindfold.

airhostes served drink and model to her sir.

sir" A1, please closed the door and don't distrub for hr now!"

airhostes locked his door and went to her room.

here in sir room,

after model drank her drink she had drugged. in that drug stage sir and model completed his business.

after that sir made called his personal assistant.

sir" hello, michel yeah put the money on xyz model account. don't tell about my name"

m for michel from this on.

m: yes sir i put the money on her a/c.yeah my name is used"

sir"okay. and i am going to ..."

sorry for filler chapter and short updating.

bada update next time. 😊

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sessy

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Posted: 11 years ago

wow what a start.part 1 made me hate mami 😡.how can some one be soo cruel.

looking forward to read more.thx for the update,loved it.

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aglaeca9

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Posted: 11 years ago

nice... continue n do pm...

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anmirza

@anmirza

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

Sounds nice but I had problems grasping the roman Hindi. If u could please use all English then it Would be easier to understand

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Suhana HaI MaUsAm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#10

Originally posted by: sessy
wow what a start.part 1 made me hate mami 😡.how can some one be soo cruel.
looking forward to read more.thx for the update,loved it.

THANK U.😊

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