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aditi

@aditi_2010

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Posted: 11 years ago

#531

Beautiful!!! Loved the dance, it was so beautiful!!! So Geet is feeling something? And she only heard the last par of Maan's confession and was disappointed. Wow!!! Waiting for more😃

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vandy28

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Posted: 11 years ago

#532

nyc updte...chngs in geet feeln thts really nyc bt nw listn to hlf tlk n assumn thng...hope she dnt restrct herslf

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#533

Originally posted by: fariya20
awsum update deaar
maaneet k dance say lekar
geet ki feeling tak
n then maan song wow
so shekar made confess maan about his love to geet
geet did not listen fully
n mistook it well agar woh pori bath bhi sunti tab bhi waoh maan ko galat samjti
k he love her before their it sin for her think other men xpect yash
like the twist

Thanks Fariya

you are right here

it's better that Geet did not heard his full talk.

it will be better if Maan says to her directly when Geet realizes her love for his

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#534

Originally posted by: aditi_2010
Beautiful!!! Loved the dance, it was so beautiful!!! So Geet is feeling something? And she only heard the last par of Maan's confession and was disappointed. Wow!!! Waiting for more😃

Thank Aditi..for your comment.

I m little imperfect in writing these types of scenes. I can write emotional scenes well but romantic scene likhne me meri band baj jaati hai😛

don'rt worry it was good that she heard only last part.

sara sun leti to gadbad ho jaati😆

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Gudiyeet

@Gudiyeet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#535

maaneet saw lost each other geet was excepting some movements from maanall welcome maan and geet both are made homepage for yash portrait allare enjoy party chat and dance maaneet dance ramantically geet some feeling for maan geet toughed her heart maan sing the song maan share to his friend feeling love for geet last part heard geet she thought maan only her friend awesome update finally both each other felling love

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change12

@change12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#536

wonderful update i'm enjoying how their relation is developing ...

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sessy

@sessy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#537

wow what an update.the song beautifully potrays maan's feelings.geet is slowly getting effected by maan and his behaviour.they both are trying to hide their real feelings for each other.looking forward to read more.pls continue soon.

thx for the update,loved it.

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tanubag

@tanubag

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Posted: 11 years ago

#538

Wow lovely and little romantic update. So Geet raising some feeling for Maan in her heart. Though Maan know that he is in love with Geet but can't be able to understand her feeling for Maan. Oh ho she didn't hear the full conversation between Maan and Shekhar onle hear the last part and she thought Maan think her only a best friend. Poor Geet doesn't know that our MSK is deeply in love with her.

Waiting for the next update.

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shebs786

@shebs786

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Posted: 11 years ago

#539

i dont know wht to say starting ki tareef karo...ya last part ki burayee karooo
why didnt geet heard whole conversation...but still i trust u...
starting was awesome ...geet is expecting from maan to praise her...
cant wait for next nw...update jaldi dena plzzz

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nishamna

@nishamna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#540

it was superb. maneet's dance and their intimate part was beautiful. maan sang a song for geet. but she can't able to recognize his love. now both are getting beautiful feelings for each other but both are not able to express. i am thinking who will take first step. last part was really bad. now geet will leave to think about their relationship. please dear next part jaldi dena. waitiiing.

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