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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: BDayGal-11Jan


Actually its a nick ! My org name is Sharmeen 😃

Sharmeen? That sounds more beautiful!😃 What does it mean?😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Mina420

Hi Kalpana,

Well firstly sorry for never really commenting on this story 😭. I have been following 😊 it but my studies kept me too busy 🤢. So, here is a summary comment to make up for it 😳.


No probs dear! I understand!😊

I love that you continued your previous story in this 👏. Geet and Maan, ❤️ both are sweet and understanding towards each other. Geet is shy 😳 but also the sherni ☢️ Maan loves so much and he also accepts her and Rajji as his own.
Their bond is getting stronger by the day, spending many moments with each other ☯️. And now that Khushi needs looking after, Maan has a good excuse to ask Geet to move in with him 😛.

As for Arnav and Khushi, I guess egos result in this situation 💔.


Your guess is totally right!

Initially, when you had introduced Annie and got us to know that she has interest in Arnav 😡, I knew she would turn bad. Either you are totally selfless no matter how much it hurts or you become jealous like Annie. Not only did the jealousy plan backfire on Khushi but it also landed Khushi into this accident .


I already told anyone who asked from the start itself that Annie was gonna turn bad.😳

But as the last update showed, the accident had its positive side as well 👍🏼. Khushi finally realised that Arnav was honest about his feelings and he also made that clear. And seeing his sincerity, I guess she will also accept her feelings for him 😉. Plus, I trust Geet and Rajji to make her understand and give her a little push if needed.


This is something I told every reader who asked, "While in DFL, the hurdles thrown in front of them separates the lovers, DP will have opposite impact. Every hurdles thrown in front of them will make them and their love more stronger!" This is one fic where every reader will want problems to come so that they get the chance to see the couples get more closer!😆

Now, I am looking forward to see Annie's truth come out in front of Arnav 🤡. Since she doesn't know that Khushi survived, I guess she might say something to Arnav that will make him suspicious or even reveal what she did. I do feel sorry for her but killing someone is surely not acceptable 👎🏼.


Annie's truth won't come out this soon! It will take time! But when it will come out, it will come out spectacularly, like some Bollywood drama scene!😆 And go ahead and hate her! I delibreately made her such a hateful character!😳

I wonder when Maan will come❓ to know about the two and what role he will play in their love story. I guess, I will have to see in the coming chapters.


Maan won't be playing any role in Arshi's love story! He will be too busy with Geet being in his house and allowing him ample time to romance her, to notice that something is brewing in his sister's heart. Maan may be smart, but in the end he is a man! And men tend to be clueless about feelings sometimes! 😆 Waise bhi, he does not have to do anything! All cards will fall into place in next few chaps!

Till then, waiting for more 😳!
Mina

Thanks for the review Mina! It means a lot to hear from you!

Take care!
Kalpana
Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: archa2810

who the hell gave arnav a cell phone?? hamesha galat time pe bajta hai... huh

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ShahSAIR

finalyyy finalyy Khushi ko b kuch kuch hota hai..

and i like one particular line of Arnav in this update where he said my only wish motive is to give u happiness whether with me or with some1 else..
love is name of giving.. how much u want to give fir b akm padh jaataa hai..
love is nt trade where we use terms like give n take.. its js a feeling of belongingnes feeling of having someone close, feeling of giving only whether we recieve it back or nt..
and nvr love anyone on this condition that i wil love u 50 prcnt u wil love me 50 prcnt.. that is rubbish...'
baashan zydaaa hogaya naa..
lots of luv n big hug..
post double soon

Arre waah! Kya badhiya bhaashan diya! Mazaa aagaya!
That line is my fav. too! Bahut sar phoda to get the perfect lines for Arshi scene! That is why it took so much time updating it!
Glad you enjoyed the update so much!
A big waala hug for you too!🤗

Take care
Kalpana
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome fantastic update...keep it up
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi post in the new thread dear...

FF Daily Updates Thread 12

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/4115693/ff-daily-updates-thread-12
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 23
is it 22 or 23?
edit ur title dear...

awesome dear...
nice...
Khushi is realizing now...
and Arnav now he doesnt care about anything...
he has confessed his feelings and Khushi too is melting now...
Annie's plan backfired so badly on her...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Well first of all sorry for this late reply

You wont believe I was typing this on my way back to London on the plane

Weird or what but then anything for this

Lord finally it happened

What you may ask

Dhak dhak dhak for khushi

Dhanya ho babaji and DM

How did you do this so smoothly I still cant understand but you did

Wow kappa kya baat hai

Hum toh aapke aur bade fan ho gaye

That was cute with maan and his wife to be and sister

Damn he is so right

If he had remained there inki toh image ki dhajjiya udd jaati

Well what else did he expect from them

Dude you and aru will have to get used to this

After all they are your life these women

Maan really why will geet be with khushi

Did he really ask that from her

Hell yes he did

He is so funny at times

And I cant believe he said that to geet

Am glad geet set him straight

Agar khushi aap ki behen hai toh geet ki bhi kuch hai

Kuch nahin bahut kuch hai

So never say that again please

That was cute when maan got how much geet cares for khushi

And he managed to make her agree to come stay with him

Well with rajji too

Sahi jaa rahe ho maan babu

Sab samajh rahe hain hum

Kyun aap chaah rahe the ki she come over and stay

But he made her agree so effortlessly didn't he

Have to give it to him right

Ahhh now lets talk about arhi

Well can I just say how happy you made me about them

She is feeling for him something more than disgust for him

And he finally gets it that his love for her isn't selfish anymore

But selfless too

Awww the way he said he will love her no matter what had me just wanna say that he finally gets it too that this is true love

What could be better right

She was wondering is aru is hers or not

Well he was is and always will be

No doubts about it

Sorry annie but he will never be yours ever

Even if khushi is no more

As if annie could have aru anyway

Hmmm another kiss miss huh

Why always them I wonder

But this time she wanted him to kiss her

Hey DM what was she thinking

Bhaiy yeh toh pyaar ka jadoo hai jo aap parr bhi chal gaya

Peeps realised that they are nothing without the other

This is progress for arhi

And another step for maneet

Well loved this convo between the two couples

And so happy with aru too

Its not just about making her his but letting her do that on her own

And am sure she will be yours sooner if not later

Kyun arhi ke doosre ke liye banne hain

Jaise ki hamare maanet

Cheers for pm damn missed my first post spot due to my inability of stalking this story

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

Well first of all sorry for this late reply


Seriously? You are sorry? Sorry for what? Going on a trip with your family? Now you are being ridiculous! Stop feeling sorry and come online once you have reached home, slept a night, relaxed and unpacked!😃 Samjhi?


You wont believe I was typing this on my way back to London on the plane


WHAT? Seriously girl! Now you are making me want to hit on the back of your head! Ghar pe aake aaraam se review nahi lih sakti thi! Plane hi mila tha likhne ko! Seriously! Airport bhi samajh sakti hoon but plane? God! My stories have made you crazy!


Weird or what but then anything for this

Lord finally it happened

What you may ask

Dhak dhak dhak for khushi

Dhanya ho babaji and DM


I know! Not only you, the other readers and even I was thinking the same thing! Finally! Arshi shippers must have heaved a sigh of relief!


How did you do this so smoothly I still cant understand but you did


Even I cannot understand! It was defo one of my best updates!


Wow kappa kya baat hai

Hum toh aapke aur bade fan ho gaye


Haaye!😳 Thank you!😃


That was cute with maan and his wife to be and sister

Damn he is so right

If he had remained there inki toh image ki dhajjiya udd jaati

Well what else did he expect from them

Dude you and aru will have to get used to this

After all they are your life these women

Maan really why will geet be with khushi

Did he really ask that from her

Hell yes he did

He is so funny at times

And I cant believe he said that to geet

Am glad geet set him straight

Agar khushi aap ki behen hai toh geet ki bhi kuch hai

Kuch nahin bahut kuch hai

So never say that again please

That was cute when maan got how much geet cares for khushi

And he managed to make her agree to come stay with him

Well with rajji too

Sahi jaa rahe ho maan babu

Sab samajh rahe hain hum

Kyun aap chaah rahe the ki she come over and stay


Samajhdaar ko ishaara kaafi hai!😉


But he made her agree so effortlessly didn't he

Have to give it to him right

Ahhh now lets talk about arhi

Well can I just say how happy you made me about them

She is feeling for him something more than disgust for him

And he finally gets it that his love for her isn't selfish anymore

But selfless too

Awww the way he said he will love her no matter what had me just wanna say that he finally gets it too that this is true love


Glad you loved it!😃


What could be better right

She was wondering is aru is hers or not

Well he was is and always will be

No doubts about it

Sorry annie but he will never be yours ever

Even if khushi is no more

As if annie could have aru anyway

Hmmm another kiss miss huh

Why always them I wonder

But this time she wanted him to kiss her

Hey DM what was she thinking

Bhaiy yeh toh pyaar ka jadoo hai jo aap parr bhi chal gaya

Peeps realised that they are nothing without the other

This is progress for arhi

And another step for maneet

Well loved this convo between the two couples

And so happy with aru too

Its not just about making her his but letting her do that on her own

And am sure she will be yours sooner if not later

Kyun arhi ke doosre ke liye banne hain

Jaise ki hamare maanet

Cheers for pm damn missed my first post spot due to my inability of stalking this story

Its ok! You were out of country!😉
But have to say, thanks for reviewing as soon as you could as your review cheered me a lot! Had horrible last few days due to certain problems happening in life, lost all motivation to write, but read this one review, and I suddenly want to get back to story writing! Thanks for reviewing so soon dear!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalpana_Writer


Arre waah! Kya badhiya bhaashan diya! Mazaa aagaya!
That line is my fav. too! Bahut sar phoda to get the perfect lines for Arshi scene! That is why it took so much time updating it!
Glad you enjoyed the update so much!
A big waala hug for you too!🤗

Take care
Kalpana


hug acptd bt stil i m angry..

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