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Posted: 11 years ago
what kind of love is his he is demeanibg her love by just giving her material things but not even a second of his time if he cant give her a little care why he married her he is even unaware of her physical changes
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Posted: 11 years ago
after 5 years MK regret tht he did not give anytime and all
and geet feeling sad andmore pain
hope once she says what she is going through
b,z now only MK lv can bring her back
and pls give bk to bk updates like intial ones
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Posted: 11 years ago
poor geet...hope maan wl realise her condition very sooon
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Posted: 11 years ago
ENDLESS WAIT FOR MAAN AND THE UNHAPPY AND TENSE ATMOSPHERE IN THE HOUSE PUSHED GEET INTO DRUGS
AND NOW SHE CANT GET OUT OF IT
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update! Maan really loves her! He wants the best 4 her as she comes frm a rich family! Bt money does nt mean happiness! Geet needs his love! Geet hopes she is nt pregnant! Wen wil Maan realises she is addicted to drugs! update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sad update... Both of them r suffering in one way ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG !!!!

I missed sooo much...

Amazing Muskan...

Read all the parts in one go...

U rocked as always...

Feeling Bad for both Maan n Geet...

Maan determined to give her all that she left behind for him...

He wants to ensure more to himself than her that she doesn't regret her decision to leave all those comforts to be with him...

But in the middle of all that he forgot the whole essence of their relationship...

Poor Geet... now is even scared to get the hope that he wants to offer...

Be it ... in the form of his time or their baby...

Hope their love brings them out of their miserable, shallow worlds...

n together... they fight against their respective addictions...

Beautiful story... Please continue soon...
Edited by its_me - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
PART 9

It was just one of the party when one of her friend offered her. Initially it was just fun. Then it began to feel nice. She enjoyed it. She didn't know how the time just flew. The waiting that felt never ending seemed cool & now she was an addict. She did try her best to get out of it. But situations push her right back into it.


Now with money constraints she began to sell the expensive sets one by one. Her addiction had reached a peak. She realized it when her nose didn't stop bleeding that night. Her dress size had probably dropped again. She was at the verge of having a nervous breakdown when she missed her date. No that can't be even possible.

She was at an all time low. She had taken an overdose & the outcome was all on her. She didn't know what she was supposed to do. She some how managed to get the needle that day. She knew nothing made her feel better. She had sold even the set that Maan presented her on their 5th anniversary. She tied the lace around her waist & restlessly injected the needle. The feeling that kicked in was mind blowing. She was in 7th haven. For first 10 mins she just sat there blankly staring at the wall. That was pure bliss. But soon the effect faded & she needed more & more.
She had lost it. She was trembling. Her fingers were shaking when Maan came & hugged her from behind. He turned her around. For a minute.. he felt he touched something that was so fragile. He shrugged the thought.

Maan - I love u so much
I managed to crack that deal
let's have a party tomorrow. Please tum sab plan kar lena. Wo, don't forget to invite t bajajs
she snapped - & the tatas.. & the.. birlas.. but not HANDAS right
Maan - jaan
geet - kyun Maan?
How is it fair to me? You have your mom with you & I don't?
Why can't you accept my parents like I do yours, inspite of wat they have said to me
Maan spoke without thinking - no I can't
geet - even I can't any more

Maan was not sure what she meant
Her inner frustration was something totally different. She was scared & horrified with her deteriorating health & the fear of what if she was carrying. Even worse than that was that she wanted her shot right now & she didn't have any money. She held her stomach that ached suddenly with a horrible pain. She pushed him away with no strength.

She trembled down the steps
Maan called her but she just zoomed down the steps.
He banged his hand against the door. They never fought all this years. Most of the time he raised his voice she would just leave it. Today he didn't know how to handle when she spoke back.
Was he supposed to keep quite like she used to always.
What just happened?
He was dying the whole day to be with her & when she snapped like this he just lost it.
What did he just say out in his guroor?


She just walked out of the Mansion at that hour. It was raining crazily. She told the driver to drop her to handa haveli. Even he was taken aback. Never in last so many years she went there.

She stood out at the gate of haveli contemplating whether to go in or not. She was soaked wet when one of the maids in the house saw her like that. She screamed in horror, maam, saab, geet baby

Rano & mohinder came down horrified still in their night suits. Geet just collapsed in their arms.
The sight infront of them could have made any parent want to kill Maan. Their princess, their only daughter; she was nothing but skin hanging loosely on a skeleton. No cheeks, they probably couldn't even recognize her in that shape.
Mohinder just scooped her in his hand & rushed her to the hospital.
Geet cried in their arms.. papa help.. mera bacha
save my kid papa please
Maan mujhe kabhi maaf nahi karenge
please papa
thanks for likes & comments
THANKS AVI FOR EDITING
love
muskan
NEXT PART 10
Edited by muskanp - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
ab kya hoga

maan kya karega
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great...

So heart wrenching...

May be now the cruel reality bring them out of their illusions... especially Maan...

I m sure ... It'll shake his entire being...

Already waiting for more...😉


Edited by its_me - 11 years ago

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