~GUROOR~maaneet SS pt11 last pt pg69/76 apr24

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saadi88

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

amazing concept muskaan...read all the parts in 1 go... and then reread them again...u r such an awesome writer...hatts off.👍🏼 talkng about the story, i am jus hating this maan...he has no ryt to treat geet like this..poor geet.. shes suffering so much..i jus want her to leave maan and go..then he will come to know, wat he did... will be waiting for further updates..will c how story unfolds.but di plz cont. to give updates..thanks

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GBR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#92

awesome story...but maan seems sooo spineless n pooja seems tooo useless...

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#93

hi js read parts 3-6 nw! Feeling 4 Geet! Her her MIL! They are nw married 5 years! Geet needs his love n attention rather than money n expensive gifts! Maan has reached his heights of success bt at the expense of his marriage! Geet using drugs! Maan notices the changes in her! Hope he finds out soon n helps her! update soon! Superbly written! Any possible chance of aparachit updates??? Sorry 4 continuously asking!

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Mayamaan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#94

awesome as usal dii u describe all emotion so perfectly ..just love it

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_Maaneet_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#95

eagerly waiting for more...

update soon!!!!

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vrinda22

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Posted: 11 years ago

#96

dont know what to say

its sweet surprise to see a new story from u

how is ur health now

n coming 2 ff

that was ossum as always

my heart beat was fast feeling for geet

poor girl what she did

she left everything for maan n married him

his mom didnt accept her

n she was beside him in all ways thru this 5 yrs

but he gv the credit to his family

to reach heights he forgot the real love n happiness of geet

more over his mom is back after seeing him success

n taking the responsibilities from her too

she is questioning her for her expenses

maan doesnt acknowledge her family

when they hv come back for their daugh

geet is slippping in darkness

he is still unaware of it

very emotional n heart wrenching parts..

why is media now there

did maan got any award or anything else

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vrinda22

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Posted: 11 years ago

#97

how much updates u may give in one go

but yeh dil maange more from you

w8ing eagerly for next parts

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Love2read

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Posted: 11 years ago

#98

this story tells the truth how families and relations get spoiled when a flood of money pours into family...

it is truth that sometimes people start to chase money more more and more and never look behind them, what they are leaving...they will be leaving their loved ones who are looking for the love , care and affection..

beyond a level they start to think that money can buy everything ...

but when they start to realize their mistake and their loses like love and affection it will be high time to collect everything they lost...

poor geet she is lost now...actually don't know who to blame...

geet's dad ashamed maan by his word igniting the fire.

slowly the fire started and now it is burning his geet...

its better maan realize everything before geet is fully burnt in fire

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sdlife19

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Posted: 11 years ago

#99

Congrats for the new story...

Maan getting marrried to geet in such condition proved tat he never wanted to stay away from geet.. but then suddenly his mom being so nosy.. looks like she never wanted maan to marry..

then Maan getting success and there starts everything.. he gave her all but he lost her in tat success... and his family why does Pooja sounds like she is mean and wants to control maan.. she never did like geet and now being away she did not get happiness...

back to pooja why did not she say anything to annie as she was the one who sold her pendant and maan is so lost in his success tat he failed to see geet is moving away from her.. she is into drugs and still being his husband he does not know tat his geet is dying a slow death...

when pooja asked about her expenses he did not even support her and she gave the keys too but still pooja taunts.. she was almost dead fainted and no one knew about it.. tat geet was not at all in her sense.. and this sudden noise.. why media did anything happen to maan or did they come to know about her drugs taking.. if so than pooja will have one more chance to show her down..

somewhere her father was right tat maan was not meant for her.. she left every relation for him but when it came to tell world about his family and success he did not even mention her.. wat else she needed just small bit of love but he is doing nothing... she is in a state of losing everything but she does not say anything and i suppose its too late for maan as even though he can see the pain in her eyes he does not care for her