SS : Jab Se Tere Naina! Part 14 on Page 63! Up on 9th Sept! - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
Omg just read the first series and then this!
I'm loving it!
Please pm me
Can't wait for more!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congratz for new story !!
Yippie Jab se tere naina ..waiting to knw hw much planing khadus khurana did to bring geet in his life while maintaing his image ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 1

Beautiful start :)!!!!!
Maan toh geet ko 1st time dekhkar his flat ho gaya ..
hehehe ..very bad feeling jealous frm ur own younger brother ..😉
hayee ..yeh maan toh bada fast hai ..he strted imagining dancing with geet keep hand on her waist ..😳
im alreay loving this SS & waiting for nxt part ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 2. THE PRELUDE TO DHOOM DHADAKKA!

From the day of the sangeet, Maan had only one wish and that was to talk to angel who changed his life with one glimpse of her face. Her beauty entranced him, her smile stole his breath and her innocence made a place in his heart unknown to him. Yes; unknown to him! Maan did not know why he was stupefied the moment she was in front of him, but all he knew was that he had to see her, talk to her once atleast! Maan did not know that he was falling for her; all he knew was that he wanted to know more about the angel who had entered his life and turned it upside down.

So the very next day after Sangeet, Maan got up with only one wish; talk to his angel once! By the time he got dressed and ready for the day, the haldi function had started. He entered the hall and watched as his brother was put haldi. He was amused at how funny his brother was looking but refused to show any expression on his face. Afterall, he had an image to maintain. At first he searched the hall for a glimpse of Geet but after a while it struck him that Geet would be attending the bride's haldi! He sighed as he realized that the girl side haldi was going on in another room and hence, he won't be able to see Geet right away! As he turned to walk back to his room disappointed, someone called for him. He turned around to see his Daadima standing there with a smile on her face, "Maan Beta! Humaara ek kaam kardijiye!" Maan looked at her curiously and she handed him a bowl filled with haldi, "Humaare yahaan riwaaz hai ki wahi haldi ladki ko lagegi jo ladke ko lagi hai! Toh kya aap jaake ladki waalon ko yeh shubh haldi de aayenge?"

Maan felt happiness burst in his chest as he realized that his Daadima was unknowingly fulfilling his wish to see Geet! He would have hugged his Daadi and kissed her cheeks if it hadn't been for his image! He looked at his Daadi sternly. Even though inside his heart firecrackers were bursting, outside he refrained from showing his happiness. He had to give a token protest to maintain his image, right? So Maan folded his arms against his chest and looked away with stern expression on his face, "Aur kisi ko bhej dijiye Daadima! Main nahi jaaunga!" Daadima pouted, "Maan bete! Yeh shagun ka saamaan hai! Parivaar waale ke haath hi jaana chaahiye!" Maan frowned and pointed at his sister who was prancing around her brother teasing him by applying haldi all over him, "Annie ko bhejiye phir! Main hi kyun?" Daadima huffed, "Theek hai! Hum use bhej dete hain! Lekin yaad rakhiye Maan aap humaara dil dukha rahe hain!"

Daadima turned to walk away and Maan's eyes widened. O Teri! Yeh kya hogaya Maan! She was supposed to force him more, not walk away. He grabbed the bowl from Daadi's hands and mumbled, "Aap bura kyun maan rahi hai Daadima? Main jaata hoon na!" Daadima smiled at him proudly and Maan walked away with the bowl of haldi in his hands.

As Maan entered the room the first person he saw was Geet who was just coming towards the door, smiling at someone nearby, not noticing him. Maan stood still as he stared at her. Dressed in a yellow salwar kameez to match with the haldi theme, she looked as beautiful as sunbeams lightening the room. His eyes widened as he realized that he was thinking like a poet. As she neared the place where he was standing, her eyes took notice of him and she stilled; her eyes, her smile, her expression froze as if in shock. She looked away from him, her eyes darting around rapidly as if she was nervous. Nervous? But why would she be nervous? Maan dismissed the thought and spoke up, "Woh... Daadima ne haldi bheja hai!"

Maan's voice jerked her out of her thoughts violently and her wide eyes stared at him with fear. Yes! Maan was sure now. It was fear and nervousness he saw not only in her expression but also in her body language. But why is she scared of me? Before he could think anymore, she grabbed the bowl from his hand and scrambled off in hurry. Definitely scared of me, par kyun? Maan had no answer.

Maan did not see Geet again the whole afternoon but not for the want of trying. He had sneaked around, eavesdropped conversations, snooped the whole place but she was either not in the place itself or was actively hiding from him. And remembering the fear and nervousness in her eyes, Maan had his bets on latter.

Finally in the evening, Maan had a glimpse of Geet again when he went with his Daadima as Ladkewaale for the NT's mehendi ceremony. He was again mesmerized as Geet danced on various hindi bollywood songs related to mehendi. But he also noticed her hesitation as she came near him to serve juices and snacks. He had to do something. This was getting ridiculous. How was he supposed to speak to her if she was kept on scrambling away the moment she saw him?

As the mehendi function ended and Daadima went to speak with NT's mother about the wedding next day, Maan sat beside NT who gave him a smile. Having known him from the time she dated Dev, she knew that behind his hard exterior there was a soft hearted man. Of course, Geet refuse to believe it when NT told her that! But NT could not fault her. Maan had that commanding and intimidating presence that put everyone around him immediately on guard and scared for their life.

After a while, Maan could not stop himself from talking to NT about Geet.

"Yeh tumhaari behen thodi ajeeb hai!"

"Veerji! Aapka matlab?"

"Matlab... Pata nahi kyun mujhe dekhke door bhaag jaati hai!"

"Woh... Veerji! Anjaan logon se humaari Geet bahut darti hai! Gaaon mein pali badi haina!"

Maan wanted to shout; he was not anjaan was he? He was her family through her sister. Ab main kya karun? NT let out a giggle, "Par hum aapko ek ajeeb baat bataayein?" Maan was not interested in idle gossip but he could not tell his sister-in-law to shut up, right?

"Geet ki ek badi ajeeb aadat hai!"

Maan's ears perked up at any information on Geet.

"Woh na ghusse mein kisise bhi lad padti hai! Jis insaan se use darr lagta hai usi se bhi ladegi agar uss insaan ne use ghussa dilaaya toh! Ek baar use ghussa dilaao sab darr varr gaayab!"

Soon, NT's attention was diverted by her friends and Maan was left with his own thoughts. And think he did! So Madam tum ghusse mein kisise bhi lad padti ho? Toh kya tum mujhse bhi ladogi? Ya darke bhaagogi? Kal pata karna padega ki kya yeh Angel jhagadti bhi hai?

Buddy me if you want PMs!

Thanks, take care and have fun,

Kalpana

P.S. As usual, I read your reviews daily, but they will be liked or liked and replied slowly!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
aur banayiye apni image
due to that only she was afraid of you
but then she is afraid of strangers
really aap geet ke kya lagte hain
its not like aap unke directly kuch lagte hain
thats what i should have said
waise toh rishta hain tedha medha
iss liye toh janab aap se hain woh door door
hmmm he was so waiting to run and see his angel
but no he didnt show it
teri image ki toh
beta geet teri image ki dhazziyan uda sakti hai ab
well she has the right ammo naa
anyway thats for later
dadi gave him reason to see his angel
but bhai sahab over karr baithe
if only dadi knew right
but best she dont
we dont want her fainting do we
so he starts to make her angry with him
this way he can talk to her
and she too will respond
thanx NT you are a life saver
cheers for pm
so he fell in love with her and didnt know
awww so cute naa
and geet avoiding aru
that sure was cute
man he was stalking her
haila who that this day would happen either
Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
Finally u updated lol!😉 Love hw this story is proceeding n cannot get enuf of it! 😊Fantabulous update! superbly written!👏 Maan cannot stop thinking abt his angel! Wants to meet her! Maan realises she will b at the bride's haldi! He is disappointed! Maan watches Dev bt masks his expressions! Dadi asks Maan to go n give the haldi to NT! Maan on cloud nine! Bt cannot show his happiness! He questions dadi n refuses! He has an image to maintain! Dadi sends she will send Annie! Maan stunned! n den gives in! Maan goes n is ecstatic seeing his angel! Maan realises he nw saying poetry! Maan notices her expressions of fear n nervous! He wonders y! He gives her the haldi n leaves! At the mehndi she is also nervous! Maan makes small talk with Nt abt Geet! Asks y she is so strange! Nt explains! Nt knws Maan is a soft hearted person! Maan gives the info he needs! Geet is scared of strangers as she is frm a village! Bt when she is angry the person had it - she fights! Maan armed with this new info decides to test it! update soon! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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MAAN IS TRYING TO FOLLOW GEET BUT SHE KEEPS RUNNING AWAY FROM HIM
WANT TO SEE HIM TRY GETTING HER ANGRY AND SEE HER REACTION
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Posted: 11 years ago
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so now he is going to fight with her. 😆
nice update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
lolz .. Nautanki Maan !!
Nice ...

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