MG~ SS~The Torment-Thread- 8 ~ UPDATED Pt 64 / Pg 100/ 18 Apr . .. . - Page 9

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Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.





Part - 60


Maan was tongue tight nd helpless in front of this sweet devil who was playing her pranks on him from last two days ,, how smartly she was playing her tricks nd nobody saw her , he was in deep thoughts with closed eyes nd recollecting d incidents of last two days ,, kab kiya Geet ne ye sab ? Getting no response from Maan Geet decided to apologise Nakul nd Satish who got unnecessary scolding bcoz of her .

Geet took out d Prasad from her bag nd went to kitchen ,, though Nakul nd Satish was listening all d talk but they wr smiling knowing that Geet ma'am did that to trouble Chote Saab nd he was unable to say her anything ,, both wr enjoying his plight ,, Geet entered d kitchen nd gave them Prasad which they took happily nd ate .

Geet: Nakul bhaiya aur Satish ,, plzz mujhe maaf ker do ,, meri wajha se tum dono ko bahot dant khani padi aur tumhara bhi mood kharab hua ,, mujhe aap dono ko ussi waqt bata dena chahiye tha ,, i'm sorry .

N&S: arre aap esse ku maafi mang rahi hei humse ,, koi baat nahi .

N: aapne bata diya etna kaafi hei humare liye ,, aap maafi matt mangiye.

S: haan ,, hume ab bura nahi lag raha ,, aap maafi matt mango ,, waise aaj hum bahot khush hei ,, koi to hai jo chote saab se panga le sakta hei ,, Dadima ko to chup ker dete hei nakhre dikha ker .

Both giggled remembering Maan's plight .

N: Geet Ma'am ek baat punchu ,, saab ne aapko danta nahi ?

Geet smiled nd nodded in a NO but Satish said,, Ma'am ke paas saab ka control button aa gaya ,, wo kuch nahi kehenge.

N: ma'am chodna matt plzz ,, Dadima ko bahot tang kertey hei saab ,, ab pata chalega .

Geet: jyada mje matt lo ,, chalo khana lagao .

N&S: ji ,, both giggled .

N: Geet ma'am ek baat kahun,, Chote saab hume kabhi KV se nahi nikalenge ,, wo bas gusse mei kahatey hei ,, aur essa gussa humne jane kitni baar dekha hei ,, wo jitna gussa kerty hei utni humari care bhi kerty hei ,, aapne bas unka ek hi roop dekha hei gusse wala, dusra nahi ,, saab aur Dadima hume kabhi koi takleef nahi hone dete .

S: ji ma'am N dada theek kaha rahe hei ,, humare pariwar india mei hei aur unka bhi dhyaan ye log rakhyey hei ,, jo bhi madad unhe chahiye unhe time per mil jati hei ,,,, hum khud KV se alag nahi ho saktey ,, aur saab jab bhi dantey hei essa hi boltey hei ,, lekin jane kabhi nahi denge.

Geet was awed with this reality ,, both love nd respect Maan too much ,, they didn't feel bad of his scolding even praising him ,, she was touched with their respect nd bond for Maan nd Dadima * she passed a smile saying ... tum dono ki feeling unke liye jo bhi ho lekin tuhe daant to meri wajh se padi na ,, galti maine ki thi ,, i'm sorry .

N&S moved back to their work with a smile ,, Geet came back nd give Prasad to Dadima nd then forward to Maan who was avoiding to look at her .

Geet: ye Babaji ka Prasad hei ,, esme maine kuch nahi milaya ,, tum kha saktey ho .

Maan quietly took that nd ate giving her a quick look ,, with Geet's tricks on him , his mind was running in diff direction ,, he was busy thinking something else .

Dadima nd Maan had their diner nd Geet left to her room saying that she had lunger Prasad in Gurudwara * she changed in her nyt dress nd roaming in d corridor enjoying rainy weather nd cool moist breeze lost in her thoughts ,, suddenly she felt a tug on her dupatta ,, she turned nd find Maan there holding d corner of dupatta,, he was looking at her with instance look which shuddered her ,, she clutched that fabric nd turned to go but he pulled her back nd his this act startled Geet ,, she gulped nd spoke in a low voice .

Geet: chodo .

Maan: nahi chodunga to ?

She froze at her place nd her her breath stuck in her throat ,, d fragrance of his colon playing with her senses nd tingling her ,, with a thudding heart she turned her face side way nd find him just behind her .

Maan was looking at her serene face lost in her beauty ,, d corner of her fabric was still in his hand ,, her silky hair wr moving with d blow of cool air nd touching his face ,, very softly he removed them to get d clear view of her ,, enthralled he was drawing nearer her ,, d dropping sound of rain with cool breeze casting its magic over them nd making d night more alluring ,, both wr standing lost in each other proximity.

After dinner Maan decided to talk to her ,, her devilry provoked him to meddle her but in diff way ,, she was coming out from her shell nd pouring her anger on him ,, which he want ,, blocking of emotions nd anger cd damage her * he came there nd found her strolling in d corridor ,, her back was towards him ,, open hair wr playing freely with d cool air ,, her dupatta was flowing in d air like calling someone to hold that ,, he slowly moved toward her nd held her dupatta ... A loud thundering broke d spell nd they realised that both r standing in last end of corridor nd d cool drops of rain wetting their legs * Geet moved to go but he stopped her with a fake anger though inwardly he wanted to crush her in his aching arms .

Geet: jane do mujhe .

Maan: Geet tumhari CD ek hi word per ku atak gai hei ,, aur ab to tum open fight ke mood mei ho ,, fir bhaag ku rahi ho ? bas etni hi himmat thi ?

Geet: mai nahi bhaag rahi hu ,, tum galti per dusro ko KV se nikal sakty ho to mujhe ku nahi nikal rahe?

Maan: agar wo dono jane hote to kab ke chale gaye hote ,, lekin na wo kahin jayenge aur na tum .

Geet: ku apne din kharab kerwana chahte ho ,, do din kaffi nahi kya ? she gave him a wicked smile .

Maan: nahi ,, ye dil mange more (he smiled naughtily),, ye to kuch bhi nahi Geet agar tum meri jaan bhi le logi to bhi mai tumhe yahan se jane nahi dunga .

She looked at him stunned ,, he held her shoulders ,, jerked her lil close to him nd spoke in husky voice which gave her a shiver.

Maan: tum kuch bhi ker sakti ho Geet ,, kuch bhi ,, ab ye ghar bhi tumhara hei aur mai bhi ,, mera aur ess ghar ka accha ya bura ab tum per hei ,, mujhe sab manjoor hei ,, aur agar tumhe mujhse koi prob hei to mai ess ghar jaunga ,, tum nahi , samjhi ,, i'll wait for ur next prank and remember one thing i'm MK nd i know how to reply back .

Saying this he winked at her nd came back in his room showing her a thumbs up with a naughty smile .

Geet stood there rooted ,, he was openly accepting this accidental relation ,, kya karu mai ? etni jaldi sab kuch kaise badal gaya ? uske dil mei kya hei, guilt ya kuch aur ,, mai kaise jaanu ? aur ye rishta kis base per tikega ? Maan's lil confession threw her in d pit of many questions ,, she herself was shocked nd confused about her feelings ,, his closeness steered her inner self * she dragged herself in her room dazed nd slumped on bed ,, things wr changing very fast for her to accept .

Maan was watching her in her room he was still feeling her closeness nd wanted to go near her again seeing her like this ,, wanted to pour out his heart ,, his feelings for her but he was helpless ,, he sighed nd mumbled,,, kaise kahu mai apne dil ki baat tumse ? tum yakeen hi nahi karogi mujh per ,, kaise ehasaas dilau tumhe apne pyaar ka ?

He lie down on bed ,, clutching d pillow in his embrace with closed his eyes,, a smile adored his lips remembering d beautiful moments he spent in her closeness few min back .


How simple my life is now you are here,
How I cherish each breath,
How I crave the light and laughter you have brought me.
I have fallen in love without taking a step,
Fallen into the sweetest of dreams,
How I hope no one wakes me.
The simplest gesture wraps itself around my heart,
Where I will hold it forever.


Precap - Maan teased Geet...


Part - 61
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awesome update😊
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😊 dona update dalne ja rahi hu..
tum kis trd per ho..??

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Originally posted by: singh24


😊 dona update dalne ja rahi hu..
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lakshmi di k chitra katha k thread pe hu di ud daal kar aajao
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babie main aa gayi... tum kahaan ho
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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

babie main aa gayi... tum kahaan ho


😃 Hi lakshu..🤗
guests gaye kya..??😆
tum to kafi der se green thi..😲
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😃 Hi lakshu..🤗
guests gaye kya..??😆
tum to kafi der se green thi..😲



kafi der se?? abhi abhi tho aayi main... lappy bhi off tha

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