MG(SS)~Bezuba~ #3, NEXT THREAD ADDED - Page 9

Created

Last reply

Replies

791

Views

128.4k

Users

191

Likes

3.6k

Frequent Posters

deepthich thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#81
hmmm... 😒 no much of MAANEET in this also
missing MAANEET yaar... kab batayegi MAAN ke baare me ye to bata!!!

but but but... loving this college track 😉
this seems so interesting... but muje kahi na kahi ye dar hai kahi MAAN aur GEET aur dur na hojaye iske wajase!!!

waise ye fresher? guy hai kaun??? i hope he is armaan 😛
and i also hope he make MAAN jealous 😉 😆

par yaar... tumne is update me gifts se dil jeet liya... aur MAAN ki ek dialogue se... ofcourse lambi wali (pehli baar achi wali bi 😳)
GEET dur jaarahi hai... ye soch kar hi itna pyaar aagaya MAAN ko..
gifts were awesome... but MAAN's lines made them more worthable!!! 😳

You look beautiful and the laptop matches your stole. It's a gift since you are joining college and would need these. And it's also to say that I am there with you. He cleared his throat uncomfortably. If you need anything, anytime. Did you... like it?
hayyeee... that seems dreamy...
GEET ka sawal bi teek hai...
Kis haq se unhone mujhe yeh dia? Apni patni nahi maante, khud ko swarthy kehte hai... aur mere lie yeh sab karke mujhe chota bana dete hai.
but when he asked u like it??? i loved when she nodded her head... its not that she should obey him... its just toda sa pyaar dikhgaya dono ke beech me vus wakt... which i loved the most...

She caressed the laptop with wet eyes and big smile. Despite whatever he said, she did mean something to him. The gestures that he put in so much effort to hide said so, his eyes said so. The way he had asked if she liked it, Geet knew that expression... it was of hope.
awww... this is too cute... n i loved the whole para... but comment bada hojayega... isliye post nahi karrahi hu... 😛

Her smile broadened even more when a naughty idea came to her mind. She would make him teach her all their functions and if he tried to deny she would say it was his own doing since he only brought the them. That way she could spend some time with him, hayeee... she blushed grinning like a fool.
hope this happens... 😳

Fresher? One of them asked and Geet bit her lip. She didn't want to get ragged. Nai. She said but they probably already knew she was new so instantly nodded her head. hehe 😆 this so real...
ooo... pinky GEET's friend!!! 👏

vus annie kutti 😡

i dont know how u r planning to move this story ... but this is so exciting... so much that i start to think... next ye hoga... ye hoga... ye hoga to kitna acha hoga... hope devil osheen ye hone de... its really nice yaar... ab college layi ho story... to me expect karrahi hu... aaj ki update se... kahi na kahi MAANEET ka love story shuru hoga...

last line seems more interesting 😉
but seriously MAAN jo bi ho... missing MAAN in GEET's life 😭 jaldi kuch karona... pulleeejjj 😃
update next part soon... waiting for it
Edited by deepthich - 11 years ago
mila1 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#82
So she got lovely gifts from her hubby n expensive too not because they cost a fortune but because they are gifts of love from her husband. Oh he was drooling at her. Cant believe he actually said she was looking beautiful n the laptop matches her stole! Maan was hurt not seeing the signs of marriage.

"He waited for her response and she nodded after few still seconds, relief flooded him. He had personally selected the design and had it custom made. Obviously it had costed him a fortune but he wanted to give her everything special. The best person deserved the bestest of things. Geet signed a thank you and left with the laptop hugged to her chest. For a moment he wanted to be there in her arms but as she walked away he reminded himself of the mountain of reasons why that would always be a dream, never to come true." Awww

Geets first day was mixture of anxiety, annoyance, little embarrassment n thankfully finding friendship. Who was the guy will he become her friend n make MSK give up this saint benevolent Avatar of letting her go🤣 Oh no want that spoiled brat Annie doing in that College😡 and the way she behaves with Geet why doesnt it happen in front of Maan? I want him to give her a tight slap but he wont do it😡..ragging in next update?
PS: I would hv quoted some other lines as well but not doing so as deeptich has already qouted those above😆
Edited by mila1 - 11 years ago
idunno thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#83
😊...😉''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''😃;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;⭐️
prerna1 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#84
Congrats on the new thread
Nyc part
liked it...
crazydream thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#85
Waiting. Wen r u updating next????
paponecon thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#86
both lvs each othr...madly wtng fr ech othr...eagerly wtng to spend tm wth ech othr...lvd geets naughty idea most..wtng fr tht nw...
taahir004 thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#87
Geet has made a friend at college ... well thats good
but what exactly is Annie's problem
I felt Maan really stepped up this time by gifting Geet and at the same time he feels soon she'll will leave him and pursue her life
again another awesome update
impoojaverma thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#88
congrats for new thread
man! he is thinking she will leave him, but can't he see the love she had in her eyes for him
his little effort for her bring a million dollar smile on her face
uff this annie!!!!
rajnishah678 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#89
nice update do continue soon
nd pls pm me
tabby999 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago
#90

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

11 years ago

Priya Fan fiction - Update thread /pg 121-31 july

hello friends... am not able do pm regularly... so please my all friend follow this thread... i post the link here... so you get link easily of

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

2 years ago

thread #2 Kuch Rang pyaar ke ase bhi/pt21/22/23 -pg31/33/34- 28 may

Concept This is story about two strangers which tied in sacred bond and one partner fall in love with another at first sight. Two individuals...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tammana.m

3 years ago

Maaneet New SS - Dillagi Thread 2 -Part 88 Page 49- 27/5/25

Dillagi Dil ki Lagi Jab Dil kho jata hai kisi aise mein Jo apna na hoke pe apna sa lagge. Jiski ek jhalak ke leye yeh nighein tarpati rahe Or...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tammana.m

3 years ago

Maaneet New SS -Dosti ya Pyaar Thread 2-Part 62 page 40 24/6/25

Prologue Zindagi ke kuch faisle hum lete hai or kuch yeh zindagi humse karvati hai.. kabhi hass ke to kabhi is dil pe pathar rakh kar!! but is...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Queen0fDarkness

2 years ago

The Devil in the Dark Thread 2||Chapter 70 pg 24 Updated 26/01

As mentioned in the notes in the other FF threads that I had created the other ID at a time when I wanted to be anonymous and avoid raising...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".