MG(SS)~Bezuba~ #3, NEXT THREAD ADDED - Page 26

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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow Maan looking at Geet's photo like a teenager in Love. Wish he realize it soon. that last part is very very wow the hug. can't wait to read next update. hope Geet shares her problem wid Maan.
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 21
awesome dear...
lovely...
stupid Maan if its hurting why are u behaving like this?
poor Geet...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful update
maan came for geet
hope geet tell him everything
maan pls express ur love
pls update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
glad he made it for kc geet was not expecting him to come poor girl got a shock and she thought he did not care thats why he did not want her to touch his feet and glad he started thinking about her awesome update thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
i know... im late... very late... to comment though the update was for me... sorry 😒
but,,,,,, thankyou thankyou thankyou sooo much... love u for this... 🤗
yes i loved the update too... ❤️
pyaar ka jhalak to dikha... hayeee... (me dreaming more of these things now hayeee... hayeee... osheen... its so dreamy )

ok... from the start...
who is dia??? n why MAAN was friendly with her??? sry if i dont remember... but do let me know...
aahaaa... majnu ko ab samaj aaraha hai... vuski galti!!!! GEET ko itna bura bala kehte hue nahi aaya!!!! 😡 gadha!!!!
GHSP ka dilaogue yaad aarha hai muje... jab chaha tab paas bulaliya... aur jab chaha tab dur kardiya!!!! sab iski hi marji hai 😡

but i loved that part... that he has taken her pic... how cute... awweee... 😳
OMG!!!! he went into mall to bring her gift... ab to muje chakkar aaraha hai osheen... jara pakadke rehna... 😆 actually thats too much change in a day for MAAN!!!! 😛 but that was so beautiful 😳

dadima aur GEET ki rshte ne to phir se dil jeet liya... how sweet of dadi to send her sargi... 😊
jab tumne likha ki GEET kept MAAN's pic in puja thaal... muje pata ta... MAAN aane wala hai... par ek doubt ta... kahi vuska dimaag phir se na goom jaye...
but when he came... GEET to shocked ti... ab to me behosh hogayi hu... aur phir vutke pada... 😛 😆 (vutna natak nahi kiya... bus aiveyi likhdiya... 😆)
i loved when she poked his arm... n he stared at her... n they both blushed... i read those lines 2-3 times ...
MAAN's line to make her feel better... (Tumhari tarah mera bhi first time hai. And don't worry, if you did a blunder I won't even know.) was too good... though it might be true... but sahi time pe bola to sahi... 😛

Mai waise bhi inn sab baato aur rituals me believe nai karta. I came just for you.
loved that just for u... ( me again into dreamland)
n from the start of MAAN coming on terrace.. till the end... i loved everything... each n every line...
One by one she did all the rituals and he stood patiently through it. Honestly, he didn't have any knowledge of time. He was lost in her. She was doing everything so carefully totally involved with all her heart. He almost felt bad. Almost. In reality he was selfishly feeling blessed.
As she looked him through the sieve there was cute little smile playing on her lips as if it was the most exciting thing to do. The softness and whatever else it was there in her eyes stole his breath away.
In the end Maan had to make her drink water and feed her a piece of sweet. So he took the glass to her mouth and cupped her cheek to support her face while she drank. She felt jitters by the small touch. It was the gesture that made her heart swell. 😳

but that disappointment she got... even i felt hurted... not bcoz MAAN did that... i know he didnt want her to touch his feet... bcoz he doesnt deserve... or may be he doesnt like if she touches his feet... normally... but i was hurt bcoz she started to feel disappointed at his every act... not want to hope ... thats bad... she should hope... but she is not able to... i guess,,, now MAAN HAS to do something... but pata nahi kya karega ab... ab tak to teek ta... aur aage... jaise MAAN ki nahi nahi... jaise teri dimaag goome... 😡 😭

i liked this line... it was actually cute... 😃
Geet tightened her lips together giving him an accusing glare.

i loved that he understood her disappointment without even her telling him,... 😊
loved these lines also...
Mujhe batao hua kya hai? He felt extremely restless, not feeling good about her giving him the cold shoulder. He couldn't take it. Mai help kar sakta hu.

hmmm... so finally he asked... abt the college... n she cried hugging him... aweee... end to awesome ta,... yeaaahhh... they hugged 😳
ab aage padne ka maja aur badgaya hai... waiting so excitingly for the next update...

last update me... i dont remember if i mentioned or not... but u wrote... she is trying to impress him in all ways... i loved this... ab to armaan bi aagaya hai... Armaan's soft corner for GEET... GEET n his friendship... MAAN burning in jealousy... n trying to come close to GEET bcoz of armaan... n GEET indirectly trying to impress MAAN... everything would be so damn interesting to read!!!!! i dont know how u r planning... par meri dimaag me jo aaya... wo me likliya... i know u would make it more interesting... but want happy updates... like this update 😃

now waiting for after hug reaction n also to see what gift he bought... update soon... i mean on 7th 😃
All the best for ur exams dear... rock the exams... n update this soon... waiting... waiting... Waiting... 😊
Edited by deepthich - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hope she shares with Maan and he solves it... Geet deserves it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
I don't know how I missed 3 beautiful updates of this ss!! I loved all of them! Grr arman and his friends are horrible!! Pinky is so cute! I hope they apologize to geet or maan finds out and teaches them a lesson! Geet is too cutee! The karwachauth scene was beautiful! Love all the parts!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hmm...Maan restless as he knows tht Geet is in some kind of worry & she is nt even attending her clg..
Whoa...Maan on time in the house fr karwachauth...tht was shockinggg...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Waiting for twists 😳
update khumari pls
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Posted: 11 years ago
Please please please please please pretty please
update soon

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