REVENGEFUL LOVE #8 LAST NOTE /NO MORE UPDATES( PAGE1/30-4-2014)

INDEX

PART - 56

MAAN's whole world is shattering. Geet is not in mood of changing her decision at any cost and with every passing day baby grows inside. Which means increasing danger to her life. Every second is important. Her craving is incresing as much she think about her baby whice definately rosing his tentions. All give up in front of her.

Arpita arranged best gyno for her. She too told that abortion is better option but Arpita told her the situation. Her treatmment is started. All alerted when it comes to her. Not only Maan Arpita and Somya make sure she get proper care this time. Both take care of her diet, medicines and exercises. Geet get full pampering from all. They all spoiled their lifes to make her alive. Next 7 months were is going to be the toughest time period of Khurana's. They all are handling a small baby in form of Geet. She feels like a princess. Evevry member bowed to her but not Maan. He still have a little hope in form of Singhanias. Though they cut off with them still he have a hope may they convience her,so he went to them.

Morning time,Maan entered in SM. Everyone is astonished seeing him there. They were definately not expecting him. Avantika calmed Brij and signaled him not to mess with him. She went to him and asked the reason for his arrival. Deep inside everyone wants to know about Geet but because of RP's command no one showing their feelings.

'i need your help to save the life of Geet.',Maan's begged almost ib broken voice. Her eyes are wet and face having a tense lines.

Avantika doest get him. But before she asked Brij came and fists his collar. 'Ab kya kiya hai tune uske sath?' his bigges fear taking shape. They believe that she aint b safe with him and now for any reason this going to happen soon.

'Brij leave him.' RP saw them from upstairs and commands his son authoritively.

'but Dad Angel.' Brij is deeply scared for her,but the glaring eyes of RP made him shut. He leave Him.

Maan told them about her condition and begged them to convience her. RP came down and asked him to leave.

'Mr. Khurana you may leave now.' his voice is flat and cold.

'aapne suna nahi usne kya kaha?' Avantika couraged to raise voice but he glared her too.

'i think you might forgot we dont have any relation with you and your wife. So dont dragged us in your personal matter. She is no one to us.' ,RP make his intension clear in a rude manner. 'i think i clear myself. So you may leave now.' He showed him to way out.

Maan's eyes glancing Avantika and Ayesha in a hope last time but they are helpless too. His last hope shattered down. He stepping out with heavy feet.

'Brij lets go we are getting late for office.' RP moved out fusriously folowed by Brij. Hearing about Geet all are weltered and longed to see her. Every sec tormented them to death. No one gulp even water properly.

At dinner table all came and sit only but no one have a wish to have it. All leave one by one making excuses.

(guys ab jo sce hai wo paralle chalega. So dont be confuse. Convo between Brij and Somya/RP and Avantika is running same.)

Brij is laid on his bed but sleep is far away from him. Ayesha came and laid next to him. She keep her silence. Dont raise her voice this time. She is actually waiting for him to react but Brij is only stirring. Whole night spend in restlessness. Ayesha knows him. She aware which agony he is going through but she too decided unless he gave voice to his feeling she wont touch the topic,no matter how much she is weltering.

Next morning Brij is all set to went office when Ayesha came with his tea. She was leaving but he stopped her. 'Ayesha tum agar jana chaho to aaj chale jana.' He said fastly.


'kaha?', Avantika doubts.

'wo wo...' His words strucking in his throat.

'Kya hua? Kehne me itni jijhak. Beti hai wo apki. Aap jitna chahe koshish kar le sakht hone ki usse alag nahi ho skte. Apka hissa hai wo. Apka gurur.' Avantika shaken his soul. She knows he is only pretending to be harder but deep inside his heart is bleeding from the moment he hear about her.

'Dekho mujhe koi clerification nahi dena or na wo meri kuchh lagti hai. Par tum or mom kal se pareshan ho janta hu main,isliye tumhe nahi rokunga.' His voice is not even convicing him but he cant go againt of RP's wish. He left the room without even glancing her for once.

'aap kitna hi chhupa le Brij par aaj b apki jaan basti hai apki Angel me. And i knew aap bi tadap rae hai use dekhne k liye.',Ayesha talked to herself. She is aware of his agony very well.

Now both the women get permission so withour wasting a sec botth went to KM. Both felt hesitated but get a warm welcome by Khurana's. Samarth and Piyush is about to leave when they reached. They was amused seeing them there and welcomed them happily.

PART - 57

MAAN'S last hope was also shattred down. Geet's family proved failed in convincing her. They were too trapped in her words and bowed. Now only thing they can do is just praying to God for her safty. Maan is broken and felt so helpless but his mother strengthen him. After spending time with her both greet Arpita and ask for the permission to leave.

Avantika and Ayesha was so worried for her but aware of her stubbornness. In evening both Brij and RP arrived. They were waiting for ladies to speak something but they also behaved stubborn. Waiting for their patience to be broke down.

In night Ayesha can easily sensed his restlessness. Though he doesn't utter a word but his every gesture is enough showing his disturbed mind. She turn off the lights and pretending of sleeping. She herself even cant able to sleep peacefully. After one hour when she turn to his side she found bed empty. Ayesha switch on the light and found room empty. He was not there. Suddenly she just noticed his pillow and checked it to confirm her doubts. It was slight wet,might of his tears. Ayesha come out of her bed and went to balcony. He was there standing alone. She just went behind him and placed a soft comforting hand on his shoulder.

Sensing her he quickly wiped off his tears,dont want to show her. 'nahi mani na wo?' He asked flatly glancing towards dead guys. Something is died inside him. She clenched his shoulder hard but dont replied. He slanted back and glance in her teary eyes. 'i knew it already,no one can convience her if she determined for anything.' he was shattered and cried silently. She turned him around and embraced him. As he rested his head on her delicate shoulder she feels wetness on her back.

'kuch nahi hoga apki Angel ko.',She can feels his uneven heartbeat and whimpering sound of him. She broke the hug and wiped his tears. 'meri ek baat maanoge?' She asked doubtfully. Brij nodded only. 'please Angel se ye narazgi chhod do. Use humare pyar or blessings ki zarurat hai. Bahut miss karti hai wo apko or papa ko. Aaj pura time wo sirf apki hi baat karti rahi. She is craving to see you back.' Ayesha pleads to leave his ego and fake anger because she knows he too crave for her like she do. He again push himself in her embrace. His turn silent and blank.

Days passed with a jet a speed and soon her first trimister completed. Now the abotion topic is closed in KM. Though her cravings to have him rosing day by day. She tried harder but Maan is determined and manage to keep distance with her. From past three months he avoide their proxcimity,which craved her more for him. Geet wants him around her all the time. Sometime she get hyper with his ignorance,then his soft kisses proved soothing to her. Maan start with foreplay and get involved her in conversation related to baby. Her bad temper calmed suddenly and she tto devour the moment more sply when Maan showing intrest in baby. Then she forgot everything else.


Maan tricked her from past three months. Geet is limp and he have to controlled. Though there is nothing spl today but Maan get up early and leave for office without awaking her. She was awaken by Somya when she brought breakfast for her. She glance all around.

'Maan ko dhoond rahi hai. Sorry sweetheart wo office gaya.' Somya informed her seeing her restlessness.

'to mujhe uthaya kyu nahi?' She cribbed cutely.

'kyunki teri neend zada zaroori hai. Now common finish it uske hume doc k pas b jana hai.' she commands her.

'aaj appointment hai?' she asked in a childish manner.

'yes sweety aaj appointment hai so common finish it,' she gave her a spoon feed. When she done,Somya took her to hospital. Doc examine her. After all tests Geet make excuse and send Somya alone KM. She straight went to KGI(Khurana Group of Industeries). She always waiting for day to end soon so she can be with him. And now when dont even saw him in morning its now unbearable for her. Adi welcomed her. Geet asked for him.

'mam he was in meeting. Aap unke cabin me wait kariye main sir ko inform karta hu.' Adi make her comfortable and send her to his cabin. Adi entered in a conference hall. Maan,Samarth and Piyush were busy with clients. Maan giving presentation,so Adi told Piyush about her arrival. Piyush alerts and replace Maan instatntly so he leave and attend her. He whisper and told him to leave. Maan asked for permission from Samarth. All become extra protective for her. He too alerts and feels concern. He wasnt aware why she is there but they cant risk when it comes to her. Samarth signaled him to leave.

Geet was sitting on a couch with her eyes closed. She was only imagining about him. His mere thought is enough to make her wet. She smiled on her helpless condition. Her mind cant get enough of having wild fantasies about her hot husband. She was so lost in thinking about him when pair of strong hands clapsed her forearm. He pulled her up to her feet. Geet opened eyes gradually drooling over his sharp edged face.

PART - 58


MAANEET lost in their paradise when his mother's call disturb both. Maan ans her call and she summoned both immediately to KM.

Caressing her temple tenderly he whispered softly,'lets go love,mom summoned us.' Maan kissed to bribe her.

She firmed her treasure and kissed on his chest place exact over his heart. Geet glance in his intoxic eyes,always made her vulnureable to him and she loved loosing all the time,sply when she get him after a long three months. 'its really necessary?' seeking for the loops of escaping,Geet asked in ittiation filled manner. Maan's yes increased it more. She pouts and hit his chest showing her recent to him. Maan chuckled on her gestures ad pulled her in his bone creush hug. He sealed her luscious lips with his,sucking all her remaing energy. She calmed and both left the place.

Soon they were in KM. 'kaha the aap dono? Or beta aap theek hai? Apke papa ka phone aaya tha kya hua?',Arpita showered her question as she scared regarding Geet's health.

'mumma mumma dont get hyper main theek hu.' Geet held her shoulders and assured her that she is fine.

'mom wo Geet ko drive pe leke gaya tha as she is not feeling well. But now she is ok hai na Geet btao mom ko.' Maan stare her and winked secreatly,to which she flushed furiously,lowering her long lashes.


'mumma wo chhodiye apne urgently bualaya kya hua?',Geet turn the tables.

'are ha aap dono ki baato me hum btana hi bhul gaye. Geet chaliye koi aaya apse milne.' her eyes sparkled showing her happiness while telling her.

Geet get curious and moved towards main hall. She a saw familiar human figure from back. Geet's beats runs fast so her feet. Hearing er voice he stood up and swng to her side. Geet's eyes sparkled and she start running towards him.

'Angel aram se.' he cautioned her but Geet wasnt listen and rush to him. She hugged him tight,felt solace after ages. He embraced her and kissed on her forehead. 'abi tak tera bachpana nahi gaya na? Angel is halat me bhagte nahi hai.' He reminds and alerts her.

Geet glance upwards in his concerned eyes,showring all his love he hide behind his fake anger. 'main apse bahut gussa hu. Itna narza ho gaye apni Angel se ki muh hi mod liya.' Geet complaints in a baby voice while pouring tears, as he is ignoring her which is unbearable for her. She missed his pampering to her.

Brij hugged her more. One drop escpaed from his eyes too secreatly. 'i am sorry Angel. Please forgive me.' Brij apolozise for his rigid and rude behaviour. Geet continue with her long list and Brij all hearing impatiently. He hearing her chimming voice and smiled on her antics which are still cute as it before.

Both get involved in each other and Maan adoring her. He felt light as their rift finally get over. Maan know that she is more attach with Brij and Ayesha and missed them so much. Brij saw Maan,standing far away. Brij stood up again and Geet feared. She still wont aware rather he forgive Maan or not. Maan too had the same feeling so he decided to left them alone. But Brij stops him. He called Maan to him. Arpita too boost him. He stepedd towards him having doubts in his mind. Geet clench Brij's arm,wasnt aware what he gonna say.

'aap Geet se baat kariye main ja hi raha tha.' Maan doesnt want him to leave Geet because of him.

'nahi waise b kafi der se hu yaha. Ab jana hai.' brij took her hand and gave it in Maan's hand. 'apni zindagi tumhe saup ra hu. Dhyan rakhna iska. I trust you.' his last sentence overwhelemed Maaneet and giving happiness with no bound. For a sec he just not believe on his ears.

'aap? I mean you forgive me?' Maan wants to confirm.

Brij nodded and opened his arms for him. He hugged Maan and Geet herself joined them. Brij blessed both and left. He smiled for her,though after viewing her his fear raised more. Geet's health is falling which reflecting through her body.


Maan and family try their level best to take care of her. Afterwards Maan become hard and maintain distance with her. He completely avoid their intimacy. Geet's infection create problem and she is anemic too. She doesnt feel like eating anything. Whatever she forcily intake come out in form of vomiting. Morning sickness irritating her,but she wont stop loving her baby. Her possessivness and love increased more with the time. Her 7th month is start. She doesnt feel like doing anything. Both families trying their level best to make her happy. RP to give up and accept Maan whole heartedly. They came to meet her after short interval of time.

It was Maan's birthday when both laying in their room. Geet kissed him and wish too. She wants to celebrate but her condition not allowing her. "Maan I am sorry aaj tumhara b'day hai or main koi preprations b nahi kar pai." She said meakly.

Maan slipped her side and kissed her lovingly. "Sweetheart your wish is much important than any other thing. So don't stressed yourself. Bhabhi ne sari preprations kar li hai." Hepecked on her lips and gave smile. Maan again indulge himself in his files when she screamed in pain suddenly. It was so painful for Maan to see her in a state. She is weltering like a fish without water. Maan paniced and summoned all members while embracing her. All came inside and view scared them too. She is bleeding. Maan informed his mom.

"Dont waste time took her to hospital immediately.", samarth instruct all. Maan lifts her and Piyush starts the car. Samarth instantly informed to hospital staff and later to Geet's family.

All reached to hospital. Doc admitt her start their treatment instantly. Meanwhile all Singhanias reached there.

"How is she?"Avantika asked first as they reached to them.

"She is inside. They examine her.", Arpita told worridely.

Brij turn dumbstruck and Piyush giving strength to him. Meanwhile doc came outside and Maan rushed to her. "What happened doc? Kaisi hai wo?" Maan shower his question on her.

Her eyes were blank. "Look Mr. Khurana her condition is serious ye aap b jante hai. Geet ki body ab baby ko carry nahi kar pa rahi hai. Isliye hume abi delivery karni padegi." She get all aware of the situation. Maan's heart sinking gradually.

"Par doc abi to sirf seventh month hai.", Ayesha asked worridely.

"I know but we dont have any other option but to do ante partum. It means patient start bleeding at or after 28 weeks of pregnancy thts 7 months it leads to pre term labor." Doc cleared the situation and went to do the arrangements.

Maan completely broke down this moment. Every heart is scared and only praying fir Geet and baby. Their fear taking shape but they just wish not to face it. After few hours doc came out. Her eyes were blank and face stern. Wrinkled lines scaring all more.

Maan again repeats the same question. How is his Geet? He doesn't care about the baby. Doc scann all eyes glancing her in hope. She scared in telling them the truth but when Maan's patience give up and he yelled almost doc broke her silence. "Dekhiye main apko koi false hope nahi dena chahti. Humne delivery to kar di hai par Geet or baby..." she paused felt her voice lacking telling them the truth.

"Doc saaf saaf boliye bat kya hai? Angel or baby kya?" Brij to asked strongly.

"Geet or baby dono ki hi jaan khatre me hai. Geet is sinking or baby b bahut zada weak hai... dono k hi survival k kitne chance hai kehna mushkil hai. I already warned you about the consequences. Please be strong all I can say only.", she added lowering her head.

Her words killed almost everyone standing there specifically Maan and Brij. RP is silent but shattred feom inside. His strong and rude image broke down and he falls on floor. Piyush and Samarth supports him. All eyes are wet.

"Geet kaha hai? Mujge use dekhna hai.", suddenly Maan reacts stubbornly.

"Please control yourself. Aap abi use nahi mill skte humne use icu me shift kia hai. She is under observation." Doc cautioned him strongly.

"Or baby kya hum use dekh skte hai?", Avantika asked while sobbing.

"We keep baby in incubator. Par ha aap durr se use dekh skte hai. Agr waha baby ne respond kar diya to shyad hum use bacha paye.", she allowed them to glance the baby atleast.

"Maan chal.", Piyush asked him, but Maan flinch off his hand jerkly .

"Nahi dekhna mujhe us manhoos ka chehra. I dont care wo jiye ya mare.", He poured our his agony rudely.

"Maan... khabrdar jo aise bola to. Isme us masoom ka kya kasoor hai?", Arpita scold him for his bad mouthing regarding the baby.

Maan wont in a condition to understand anything. He turn dead from inside. His eyes pouring tears and heart bleeds. He is on the verge of loosing his life on the day of his b'day. What an irony of his life that he cant be happy. His baby born on the same date of his but on the cost of his breaths which was Geet..

Geet and baby both fighting for their lifes and here Maan broked badly. He waved out in his frustration...

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