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Posted: 11 years ago
part 36
awesome dear...
lovely...
Geet is confused why Maan is doing this...
hope she gets to know everything soon...
and can u make Brij to be positive in this?
i dont feel he will be really negative in this...
cont soon dear...
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wonderful updates...

one thing is making me little relieved that Brij is not so bad...he wants to help Geet but DCP is very cunning...he has planned to kill Geet if she failed...

so noe Geet knows that maan is her Warrior...and she is now to her true self showing him her Choti Rani avataar...it means her mother and her brother is also dead and who Handa wanted to kill Maan and Geet's family in past and why...

waiting for next part...


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Posted: 11 years ago
brilliant update...😃...sorry for late reply...
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Mission Impossible: The Don N The Diva

Part 37



Maan and his Clients where standing under the sun shade abit away from the vacant field and was waiting for Geet to bring the lunch, Maan looked at his watch and it was 2.00, "what is taking her so long," Maan thought and turned around to see Geet coming with a basket along with another guy from the Handa mansion and he too was carrying a basket, they both came up to them,

"Sorry for the delay Mr.Malik," Geet said with a smile, "No problem, Ms.Geet, it's only 2.00," he said and Geet took a blanket and spread on the ground and asked them to sit and she too sat down, and Geet handed them the plates and started serving the food for them, "Mr.Khurana, we eat in big restaurants with hi-fi dishes but this happiness of sit down on the ground on the field after an long day of work and to eat the desi home cooked food, wow, it's incredible, thank you for this Ms.Geet, if you weren't here, we would have stayed in an hotel and ate up something,"

"But because of you, yesterday we enjoyed a Punjabi traditional wedding and awesome food and today an great lunch, thank you," Mr.Malik said, "Please sir, don't embarrass me, you are our client and it's our duty to see towards your comfort, I am really thank full that I got an chance to make you happy," Geet said and Maan was staring at her adorably, "such an sweetheart" he thought looking at her and Geet too saw him staring at her, "Maan sir, please, eat" she said,

"Hmmm, and you," Maan asked, "I will eat after wards, you eat na sir, I cooked everything myself please say how it is, whether you like it or not," Geet said and Maan nodded, and Maan took a spoon and kept it in his mouth, and as soon as his taste buds got hit by the taste, he looked at Geet, who was smiling at him and looking at his face eagerly, Maan slowly chewed his food and he was frozen up as it gave the familiar taste and his eyes filled up,

"Wow, Ms.Geet, Wow, awesome food, you are an amazing cook, where did you learn to cook like this," Mr.Malik's Voice made Maan to turn away from Geet's gaze, "I learned it from an Great cook, who taught me to cook not with items but with love, to make it tasty, My Mammu, she taught me everything when I was little" Geet said looking at Maan and her eyes filled up and Maan looked at Geet, who was looking at him with tears, he can't believe that Geet had cooked the exact way that his mother cooks these dishes for him,

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"Choti Rani, I am telling you, My mama is the best cook, and only she knows how to cook for me according to my taste," Maan said holding his little Geet in his arms, Geet pulled from his hold and rushed towards Maan's Mom, Mannat, "Mammu, teach me how to cook for my Warrior, so I would also cook for him tasty like you cook for him, please, Teach me na," She pleaded and Mannat pulled her little cheeks lovingly,

"Oh My Choti Rani, it's no big deal, he likes less spicy food, will teach you when you grow up abit bigger," Mannat told her, "No, No, I want to learn it now, teach me Mammu, please," little Geet pleaded, "Maa, teach her na, or else she won't leave you, such an adamant girl," Maan said with a smile, "Ok, ok, Choti Rani, you sit near me and watch, I will tell you while I am cooking the dish, you can see how I am doing, ok" she said, and Geet to sat near her and his mother started cooking while she was explaining the items and the order, and method and Geet was looking at it seriously,

Maan was looking at his sweet princess eagerly watching his Mom and lay down on the string coat and was watching the cooking class, "Ms.Geet, can I have some more," Mr.Malik's voice pulled Maan from his past, and he looked at Geet, "You remember it still now," Maan asked surprised knowing that Geet still remembers his mother's teaching, Geet looked at him making him realize he was MSK now and not her warrior, "I mean the methods, you said you learned when you are little," Maan said trying to hide his emotions,

"Those things never went inside my mind but it went inside my heart, I will never forgot anything related to my warri, I mean, my past," Geet said looking at Maan, and Maan stood up unable to take it anymore, "Sir," Geet too stood up, "Mr.Malik, I am done, will wait for you on the field, I will check the sensor now," Maan said and went away, and Geet looked at him going away, "Run as far as you can but I am leaving you, Warrior," Geet thought, after a few minutes, Mr.Malik and his associate too finished the lunch, "Ms.Geet, atleast now, you can eat right," Mr.Malik said went away thanking Geet once again, Geet then sat down and had her lunch looking at Maan,

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It was 4.30 when Geet, Maan and His clients came back to the mansion, "Sir, wait here, I will make tea for you all," Geet said, "No," Maan stopped her, "Geet, we have to reach the Amritsar airport at 8, as our flight is at 8.25" Maan said, "Oh, then we have to get ready," Mr.Malik said, and then Maan asked everyone to get ready,


Maan went to Geet's room as he got ready and Geet was standing near her window and was looking out, "Geet," Maan's voice made her to turn, and Maan saw her upset and sad, "What happened Geet, feeling bad to leave your house," Maan asked and Geet nodded a no, "So can we go," Maan asked and Geet nodded and as she walked away, suddenly she stopped as some thing was holding her dupatta and she turned back and looked that her window was holding the corner of her dupatta,




It was like this house doesn't want her to leave again, and Maan too saw this, and Geet looked at Maan with her tear filled yes and Maan could understand her feeling, Geet then turned around and went to pulled her dupatta off from the window, and Maan too went close to her, Geet's dupatta was held in a screw, and she looked how to remove it without damaging the dupatta, Maan looked at it, "Geet," He called and Geet turned around, and looked at Maan, who was standing close to her, "Let me," Maan said and leaned forward,





Maan was trying to take the dupatta carefully, but he missed to see that he was so close to Geet and his hot breathe was hitting Geet's neck making her shiver, Maan leaned more closer and Geet held his shoulders and closed her eyes melting in his closeness, Maan was working carefully as he pulled the dupatta away, and Geet was floating in another world, Maan as he released the dupatta realized how close her was to Geet and Geet's hand on his shoulder,




Maan moved slightly and Geet opened her eyes and moved her hand a bit and Maan slowly pulled away, and looked at her, and Geet eyes shinned still with the tear lingering there, "Geet, feeling sad to leave your house," Maan asked again, and Geet looked at him, "it was once my house, but it's no longer mine, once this house was my world, with my family, with people who loved me, but now, it's not a house, but my past memory,""Memory of happiness, tears, fear and love, everything," Geet said




Maan felt bad for her, "This is not my house any more, I don't belong here," Geet said and looked at Maan, "My Place is where, my love is, where people who loves me are there, who cares for me are there, but I don't have that place now, I don't know where I belong now," Geet said looking down sadly, Maan wasn't able to take her sadness, and held her chin and pulled her face up, "in my place," Maan said and Geet looked at him surprised, "I mean, my house, my Dadi maa, My Dev, they love you and they care for you, right, so that's is your place now, right" Maan said hiding his feeling but his eyes said it all,




Geet smiled at him, "not in your place, but in your heart," Geet thought looking at him with love and Maan looked at her smile and smiled back, and pulled back, "Can we go," Maan asked and Geet nodded and then they walked away,

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Maan, Geet and their clients, reached Amritsar and then they started to Delhi, and reached Delhi in at 9.45 and from there they went to the Khurana Mansion, saying bye to Mr.Malik and his associates, Maan's ride was waiting for them outside the airport and as soon as Maan and Geet came out, Rishi rushed to them and got their luggage's, "welcome back Maan sir, hello Geet Madam," Rishi welcomed and took them to the car,

Geet and Maan reached home and Dadi maa and Dev was waiting for them eagerly, Geet felt an unknown happiness as she reached the mansion, "it's Maan's, it's hers," Geet thought as she walked besides Maan, "Maan, Geet," Dadi maa's voice beamed as she saw Maan and Geet, "Dadi maa," both of them said together and went toward her together, "Dadi maa, look at them walking together, looks like an perfect couple right," Dev whispered in Dadi maa's ears, and Dadi maa nodded up and as they went near Dadi maa, Maan and Geet together touched her feet to get her blessing,

"Sorry" Geet said as she saw Maan besides her, and stood up and Maan too stood up, "Oh, oh, no hurry, my bless is for you both, you two always be happy," Dadi maa said holding Maan's face and Geet's face in her both hands, and Geet blushed up high, "Hello, some one look at me yar," Dev said and Maan saw him and hugged him tight, "How was the trip, bro," Dev asked, "It was fine Dev," Maan said,

"Ok, you two go and refresh and come, I will arrange the dinner for you," Dadi maa said and they both nodded, "Geet give your suitcase, I will take it to your room," Dev said, "No Dev," Geet refused but Dev didn't listen to her, "Come on," He said and took it as he walked away and Geet too walked up, as they reached the outhouse, Dev walked her to the room, "Geet, you are ok right, I mean, you and bro, I mean, he didn't yell at you, or scold you, or, make you upset," Dev asked worried,

"No Dev, Maan was," Geet started and Dev looked at her shocked, "I mean, Maan sir was so sweet, he took good care of me, as always, and by the way his yelling and shouting is his birth right na, we can't stop it and I am already so used to it as it doesn't matter it now, so I am not upset too," Geet said and Dev laughed out, "hmm, that's right MSK with yelling, na, impossible, ok Geet, good to see you happy, I am leaving, you get refreshed and come to the dinning soon," Dev said with a big smile and went away,

"God, looks like everything is ok with Bro and Geet, please make my hope turn true, did she really say Maan, god, did they become that close, I am so excited, have speak with Meera now," Dev said as he was jumping up and running towards the mansion,

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Geet got refreshed and walked back to the Mansion, as she walked in, she saw Maan already sitting in the dining with Dadi maa and Dev sitting beside him, "come on Geet," Dev called as he saw Geet coming, and Geet to went and sat with them, and Dadi maa started serving to Maan and Geet, "Dadi maa, you are not eating," Geet asked, "No Geet, me and Dev already ate our dinner, now you two have," Dadi maa said, and Geet nodded,

"Geet how was your trip, would have been boring na," Dev asked, "no, no Dev, it was full fun, I saw my childhood friend there, and we went to her sister's marriage, it was such an great fun," Geet started to say about the marriage function with so much of interest and Dev was too hearing it with same interest, and Dadi maa was looking at them with a smile and Maan was enjoying the dinner with these two grow up kids talk, "Then what happened Geet, the next day," Dev asked when Geet paused, "enough, let her eat, after that you can ask whatever you want to ask and she will too tell everything in detail," Maan said stopping Dev,

"Yes, Maan is right, let her eat Dev," Dadi maa said and Dev said an cute sorry and turned silent, but that silent was disturbed by Maan's mobile tone, Maan saw the mobile and it was Adi, "Adi at this time," Maan thought and took the call, "Adi," Maan said and listen to the call and everyone on the table too was watching Maan's reaction, "Oh, ok, ok, no problem, just an three hours work left, will finish it too night even," Maan replied and Dev and Geet looked at Each other and then at Maan, "Ya I know, it's in office only, I will take care, you no need to come to the office, I will take care," Maan said and cut the call,

"what is it Maan," Dadi maa asked, "oh Dadi maa, my Mumbai client is going to aboard tomorrow it seems, so he needs to see the project deals and reports finished tomorrow and sign the deal before he goes there, so we can start the work," Maan said, "and it's almost finished too, only a three hours work left," Maan said, and got up, "Dadi maa, I am going to office now, as all the files are there," Maan said and Geet too stood up,

"Then I will to come with you sir," Geet said, "no Geet, I will take care," Maan said, "Sir, please, if you can finish it in three, hour if we work together we can finish it so soon na," Geet said, "NO Geet, I am telling you know, you must be tried as you travelled too much," Maan refusing, "You are speaking as if I had travelled alone, you too travelled with me, you too would be tired, then you are alone going to work now," Geet said a bit boldly,

"Geet, because it's my project," Maan said aloud, "right, and you are my boss," Geet said, "Geet," Maan yelled up scaring Dadi maa and Dev for a second, but Geet looked at him with her stubborn look, "I am coming with you anyways, if you want me to stop, fire me," Geet said with her cute anger look, which always melts Maan, "fine, Whatever," Maan said finally and Geet smiled big, "Thank you" she smiled up big at Maan, "Go and get ready soon, or else I will go off," Maan said and went upstairs and Geet too smiled big and rushed to the outhouse,

Dadi maa and Dev was looking at these two shocked and surprised, "Dadi maa, did we turn invisible suddenly," Dev asked and Dadi maa looked at him puzzled, "Did you see how Geet spoke to bro and bro, oh My God, what's happening" Dev said, "I don't know what's happening, Dev, but I am just loving what's happening," Dadi maa said with a smile, "Me too Dadi," Dev said as he hugged her,

Precap: Maan and Geet in office all alone at night... (Saturday)
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Posted: 11 years ago
When they will express their feelings openly ?
Nice ...
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Amazing update !!
geet cooked food similar in taste as maan's mom which she learned frm her in childhood ..
maaneet back to delhi & dadi n dev surprise to see geet boldly arguing with maan ..
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Lol Geet is trying to get Maan confess.
Nice update :)
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awsemmm update geet stuburrn to make maan confess
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maan sir yeh apka secretary geet nehi hai...yeh choti rani to her warrior...

superb update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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awsme update..maan geet ki tu tu mai mai was awsme

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