MG~ SS~The Torment-Thread- 7~ UPDATED Pt 59 / Pg 139/ 11th Apr........ - Page 17

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Posted: 11 years ago

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hi dona tu sabse pehle aabhi gayi ho


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kya karein immediately karna pada nahi tho ek din yeha nahi aayi tho pagal hojaoongi😆😆
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kya karein immediately karna pada nahi tho ek din yeha nahi aayi tho pagal hojaoongi😆😆


sahi hai di
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sab 10 ke baad hi aayenge aaram se😆😆der tak rukhna haina
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For banner credit goes to my dear Priya...🤗


Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.





Part - 52



Dadima was trying hard to make Geet understand d gravity of situation ,, it was not easy for Geet to accept all this ,, 1st useless allegations nd now this Maan filled her maang. Dadima was in dilemma she couldn't say her anything regarding this to accept it or not but her soothing words tranquillized Geet ,, her sobs wr subdued but this storm had muddled her mind nd heart ,, she was lying motionless on d bed dazed * Maan was watching her from his room ,, he too was in a fix condition nd don't know how to talk her about all this ?

Dadima tried to convince Geet to get up nd take something then they talked on this matter,, very hardly Geet got ready for this ,, Maan squeezed his eyes tightly nd left a painful sigh watching her worn condition ,, he cursed himself for all this ,, how carefully he was trying to mend everything but all ruined in blink.

Hrs passed like this nd all wr struggling with their inner turmoil ,, Geet was benumbed nd to bring back her real self was a big battle for Maan nd Dadima * after many coaxing Dadima brought Geet to dining hall to eat something ,, Nakul went to Maan's room to call him ,, Maan came there with a thudding heart fearing Geet's reaction but she didn't look at him ,, she was looking blankly at her plate ,, she nibbled when Dadima prodded her to eat * her quietness pricking Maan but he ns Dadima wr in short of words , only Dadima's few meek words wr breaking d dead silence of d room * Geet hardly ate few bits nd took her coffee,, after that Dadima brought her in her room nd gestured Maan to follow them ,, she made her sit on d bed near her nd kept her in her embrace her ,, she was pampering n showering love on Geet to make her feel lil better ,, Maan was settled in d settee .

Dadima: Geet beta esse chup rahane se prob solve nahi hoga , kuch bolo .

Geet didn't reply but tears rolled down from her eyes ,, Dadima wiped her cheeks nd persuaded her to speak .

Dadima: rona se kuch nahi theek hota beta ,, humne bahot aansu bahaye hei apni zindgi mei lekin kuch nahi badla aur jo samne tha ussi ke sath aage badhna pada ,, Geet tum kamzor nahi ho ,, hume dekho humare pass kaun hei hume sambhalne ko ,, lekin tumhare aane ke baad hume jaise nai zindgi mili , sahara mila aur himmat mili apne baccho ko sambhalne ki * hum aapke sath hei beta aur aapke upper pura bharosa hei hume.

Geet sobbed n spoke: mujhe jana hei ,, mujhe yahan nahi rahna .

Maan huffed nd nodded again same ranting ,, why she is becoming so difficult ? Dadima too sighed but she was calm sensing Geet's inner turmoil .

Dadima: tum jana ku chati ho ? usse ab kuch badal to nahi jayega beta ?

Geet: sab prob mere yahan rahne ki wajha se hui hei ,,,, I can't tolerate any more ,, i can't face those ppl again ,, i just want to go way from here .

Geet was replying coldly without looking at them ,, Maan's patience was again on d verge of breaking but he was suppressing that clinching his fists ,, Dadima was talking to her nd he didn't want to spoil d chance to talk her .

Dadima: Geet kya wo log apke liye aapki aur humari zindgi , khushiyon , aapke aur Maan ke parents aur apke future se jyada importance rakhtey hei aapke liye ? unhe aap jyada janti hei humse ? Kya un logo ka aapke aaj aur kal se koi rishta hei ? matt karo unhe face ,, hum chahen to aaj un sabko bahar nikal saktey hei aur kal unki jagah per koi aur hoga ,, wo log apne liye KC mei hei humare liye nahi ,, humare liye aap imp hei wo log nahi kunki aap ab humare pariwar ka hissa hei , esse aap maane ya na maane lekin ab sach yahi hei .

Geet looked at her with teary eyes nd Dadima blinked at her in assurance noded in yes but she was not ready to accept this reality ,, it was forced by him nd she couldn't allow him to drive her life on his tips .

Geet: mujhe yahan nahi rahna , mai apne hostel chali jaungi .

Maan lost his last strands of patience nd retorted back in low but angry voice .

Maan: tum kahin nahi jaogi , suna tumne ,, mai tumhe kahin nahi jane dunga .

Geet looked at into a furry nd retorted back shooting angry glares at him .

Geet: who r u ,, why do u want to dominate me ? I'll leave ur place nd...

Maan cut her words nd replied in same manner ... Go , nd very next day u'll found d news in newspapers nd media with those pics as famous businessman MK married to Geet Singh ,, nd all media will be behind you ,, Go .

Geet : u r forcing me nd threatening me .

Maan: Geet , u r forcing me to take these steps .

Geet : U can't cage me ,,who d hell r u ?

Maan: u know it but u never accept it nd i never force u to accept this relation , though it happened accidentally but i'll accept it .

Geet ye tumhara ghar hei , tum jaise chahe raha sakti ho lekin agar jane ki jidd karogi to bahar sako jawab dene ke liye ready rahna .

Dadima was watching nd listening helplessly their fight ,, she knew that both r going to hurt each other , it wd give only pain to them ,, she sighed defeated .

Geet looked at him in rage ,, her body was trembling nd tears wr dropping from red eyes ,, she stood up from d bed ,,stopped near him nd spoke accepting her defeat ,, U r not less than Brij * she moved out from there cursing herself for d time when she accepted to live in KV and to work in KC * she entered her room nd threw her on bed ,, tears wr rolling down from d corners of her eyes ,, her phone was buzzing but she didn't look at that .

Dadima gave a disappointed look to Maan who was sitting there hiding his face in his palms ,, Geet's words hit him hard but he has to accept all her anger nd out burst ,, it's was nothing , he was ready to bear more .


Precap ... Dadima scold Maan ...


Part - 53
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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago

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