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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely part geet ready for marriage
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Part 3

Dadi wo Misthi?

hmm... Maan wok al unka hi call aya tha .. un k taraf se ha h! wo aap ki rai jaan na chah te the aur hum ne saaf mana kar diya..😉

par dadi m ne kab mana kiya??😲(he could hear fits of laughter on the other end😆)

Dadi don't tease me now..

Babaji geet bitiya k aane k khabar se hi ghar me khushiya aur maan ki chere pe ye khushi h

bacho pe apna meher hamesha banaye rakhna!

hmm. . wo bahot hi suljhi hui bachi h beta😊.. rano k guzar jane k baad wo akeli padgai thi.. par uski muskaan ne hi unke papaji ko aur un k ghar ko khusi yo se bhar diya .. MBA complete hone k baad wo apne papaji ko kaam me madat karti h..hume yakeen h beta k wo aap k zindgi me sachi sathi sabit hogi...waise koi dabav me aa k faisla mat lejeye maan...

kitni dino k baad dadi ko itni khush deka aur rahi Misthi ki baat tho mujhe eysa kyu lagtha h k wo mere liye hi bani h..

Dadi agar aap ko yehi sahi lagtha h tho mere taraf se bhi ha h!

Sach maan .. Khush rahiye beta! m ye khush khabri unko bhi suna deti hu..Good night beta!

Good night dadi!



on the other hand

ye papaji un k bareme kuch bata kyu nahi rahe h!.. m puchu😕.. nahi nahi acha thodi na lagaga.. papaji soche ge kisi besharam beti h meri 😉...

babaji bada maza aata h na aap ko mujhe eyes situation me daal kar😡.. my count is still on babaji dekh na kya dhama k daar badl;a lungi!😡

Geet beta !

ji papaji aap mujhe bulaliya ho ta..

are nahi bacha baat hi eysi thi k mujse raha hi nahi gaya, abhi maa ka phone aya tha un k taraf se ha h!

(geet koi reaction tho de aur please papaji k samne koi utpatan harkat mat karna..😆)

Geet!

ji..

Beta m jaanta hu k ye sab achanak h par tut ho meri samajdaar bachi h na.. aur I can understand ur confusion too..maan se acha ladka tere liye koi ho hi nahi sakta..usne bhi apna MBA complete kiya h aur ab marketing line me job kar raha h..

after a long pause

Beta aap ko kuch puchna h ..

nahi papaji..😳

khush raho beta!

Good night papaji!

Good night beta!

Both had a restless night filled with dreams of their future together!

Next day

Humara Maan was running late as he was dreaming of his misthi all-night😉! Getting ready in his white shirt n black trouser looking all dashing! Gets a call

Hello!

Hello beta!

Ji maaf kiji ye m ne aap ko pehcana nahi!

Beta m mohindar!

Bauji namaste! Kyse h aap! aur waha sab theak h na😕? (Worried abt sasural ya apni Misthi hmm😉?!)

Khush rahiye! Yaha sab theak h beta ghabrane ki koi baat nahi h! wo bus hum aur aapki dadi aap se milna cahrahe the! Kal weakend h na.. tho agar aap ka koi aur program na ho tho kya aap Hosharpur aa saskte h?

Ji bauji m ponch jauga

Theak h beta office k liye deer horahi hogi hum kal baat karte h!

Ji bauji!

Ye baat dadi kal raat hi bata sakthi thi na ..par nahi patanahi un k dimaak me kya chalta rehta h!



waha Geet is all confused

Ye papaji subha subha out of station jaane ki baat kyu kar rahe the! Mujhe batabi nahi rahe h ..kal tho pura din m akele bore ho jaugi hmm... meera bhi free nahi h! kya karu?

Babaji!😡

Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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cute update😳
loved it!!!
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nice post loved it 😊
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Part 4

Next Day

Geet was all moody as she was alone at home. .wearing a cute tortoise blue suit , dupatta carelessly hung around her neck n a cute pout on her face ..was doing her favorite pastime cribbing 2 her babaji.. abt how everyone is being unfare 2 her!
Babaji 😡... ye bhi aap ki planning hi hogi! H na sirf aap ko hi ayse ideas aate h...patanahi kyu sab gayab ho gai..

Waise acha h koi nahi h tho m un k bare me araam se soch sakti hu.. wah geet kya idea h na.. papaji ne tho bataya tha k wo marketing line m h ... tab tho unhe bate banana khub aata hoga!


On the other hand
Maan reached hosiyarpur...
Wearing pink shirt n blue jeans... looking dashing as ever!😎
Hosiyarpur is where he was born which had his childhood n most importantly his dadi!..
Are maan beta ponch gaye aap!!
Ji dadi!
pranam buji! Taking blessing from both the elders he sat beside his dadi looking at her suspiciously ... n dadi tho dadi h.. looking all innocent!
Beta I don't want 2 beat around the bush !
It's abt ur marriage!
(Bauji aap tho bichare ko aur dara rahe h!)
Beta maa ne app dono ki kundli pandit ji ko dikhai h.. aur bitiya k kundli me dosh h😕... maana k aaj kal ki pidi insab me wishwas nahi rakti par maaji k baat bhi tho hum taal nahi sakte na..
Bauji kya kaha panditji ne...
beta aap aur bitiya apne shadi tak ek dosre ko nahi mil sakte..
hmmm aur...

aur na geet jab wo serious honge tho unk saam ne tho ache acho ke bolti band hoti hogi!😆

maan beta ...
hmmm
wo kehrahe the k agar aap dono mile tho bahut muskilo ka saamna karna pade ga.. aur bitiya k sehat pe bhi uska bahut bura asar padega!😕

jab wo baat karenge tho ... sab un k samne shant ho jate honge.. he he .. Of course he would have that base n attitude k kisiki majal unhe unsuna kare..

hmm par dadi aap mujhe itni explanations kyu de rahi h, aap jo bhi socha sahi hi socha hoga.. aap humare bade h bauji aap log jo bhi katenge humare bhale k liye h karenge!
tho aap maan gaye maan!
ji dadi!
wow!! aap tho badi jaldi maangye!
I'm really proud of you beta.. warna aaj kal ki pedi se tho hum koi umeed hi nahi kar sakte h..

sab k liye aam honge aur apno k liye khas☺️.. hmm kahi man nahi lagraha umm kuch banaleti hu..
gajar ka halwa! ha ye theek h.. fm lagaleti hu...

After along time sathiyo for all young girls out there
meri chunar frm falguni pathak!

Chorus:
(Aankh mein kajra, baal mein gajra
Bindiya jo lagaayi re
Dekhke teri mast jawaani
Chanda bhi sharmaaye re)

ye phone ko bhi abi baj natha ! Babaji aap do min k liye b mujhe chain se reh ne nahi denge na...😡

ji papaji ha khaliya... papaji kuch sunai nahi de raha!! papaji hello...
kya hua bauji ??
kuch nahi beta wo call cut gaya aur lag bhi nahi raha h...
oh tho mera cell use karlijiye!
hmm thanks beta...
hello.. hello yaha lagtha h k network problem h..
m baad me try kar le tha hu..
beta aap ka phone..
ye papaji konse no se call kar rahe the!😕 tu bhi na geet call back kar ...

oh ye tho bauji k liye call h wo to abhi dadi k saat bahar gaye h! m inform kardeta hu...
hello papaji!
Misthi! he said still with a shight confusion...he wishperd her name so softly k khud ko hi sunana ho..

(Aankh mein kajra, baal mein gajra
Bindiya jo lagaayi re
Dekhke teri mast jawaani
Chanda bhi sharmaaye re)


ji aap kaun😕? aur abhi mere papaji call aya tha isi no se..
her voice was so soft he could hear it whole life without any complaints
m Maan😊
geet ki tho bolthi hi band ...

Oye oye oye oye oye
Meri chunar ud ud jaaye - 2
Haai dil mera ghabraaye
Koi yeh to bataaye mujhe yeh kya hua hai - 2
Mera dil kyoon machla jaaye, haai

ab kya bolegi bichare ... aur upar se background music. .

(Unke taras ko harpal meri aankhen tarsi jaaye
Tanhaai bechaini mujhko kyoon itna tadpaaye) - 2
Koi yeh to bataaye mujhe yeh kya hua hai - 2
Mera dil kyoon machla jaaye, haai

both were unable to form words ... n were thinking what to say!!after all they were talking for the first time!
tho hota h... hna babaji

Meri chunar ud ud jaaye
Haai dil mera ghabraaye
(Rang rangeeli chunar meri laheron si laheraaye
Mast pawan ke chanchal jhonken preet ke geet sunaaye)
Koi yeh to bataaye mujhe yeh kya hua hai
Mera dil kyoon machla jaaye, haai

Chorus:
(Aankh mein kajra, baal mein gajra
Bindiya jo lagaayi re
Dekhke teri mast jawaani
Chanda bhi sharmaaye re)

umm Misthi
aaa...
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maaneet can't meet till marriage
per baat toh kar hi sakte hai😆
awesome update
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Wow itni jaldi update lovd it bechare maaneet cant c eact other be4 marriage
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 5

aaa...

kya hua??? (by now he could hear her cry... unknown to him he was getting more n more attached to her.. aur kyu na ho u dono ki zindigi jo ek hone jarahi h)

wo.. n again she broke in to cry kyse situation me dal diya babaji😡 then she finaly musterd up some courage still sobbing .. cutily rubbing her nose

wo ..(sob).. mera na...(sob)... haat chil gaya h..(sob)..aur bahut khun bhi beh raha h... n she continued crying..

Oh god! ghar me koi h?

nahi

Hmm. ek kaam karo pehle haat ko thande pana me dalo aur baraf lagalo khun behna ruk jayega..aur dekh k batao gha kitna gera h..

Hmmm.. sss .

Aram se Misthi! ab uspe thodi si haldi laga lo ..thoda sa lalega par kam hojayega!

Hmm.. aap kya doctor ho? Par papaji ne tho kaha tha k aap marketing me ho! still muffling her sobs

Hmm.. he was smiling at her cuteness when he suddenly remembered that she was alone in the home n bauji is also here.. phir kya he came his all panic mode...

Oh no tum tho akeli ho gharpe.. ghau pata nahi kitna gehra h.. tum na ek kaam karo doc k pass chelijao..

nahi nahi akele kise jao gi m kisi ko ...

wo aap pareshan mat hoiye.. plz zada gehra gav nahi h! choti si chot h theak hojaye gi!

relizing he was getting hyper

acha tho tum ro q rahi thi!😡

wo tho..😡

waise tum kya kar rahi thi k itni chot lagai?hmm..

ab geet ki tho bolti hi band..hehe.. kya babaji!😕 meje dant kilwa k bada maza aata h na aap ko..

He was totally enjoing her cute cribbing.. Though he tried to act all more serious

I'm waiting!😆

wo m na gajar chil rahi thio aur achana k aap ka call aagaya.

Then the realization came k actually papaji ne un k no se call kiya matlab! wo in k ghar me h .. tabhi papaji kuch nahi bata rahe the! babaji!

Now he could not control his laughter! n burst out laughing😆.. Making poor geet more embarrassed!😳

He realized he was making her embarrassed n tried n manage the situation..

Misthi! dhyan rakh na cahiye tha na!😊

Misthi?? ye misthi kon h .. Then she remembered phone utha k bhi unho ne Misthi kaha? phir kya .. geet aur uss ka super tez dimak! kahi unki koi girl friend tho nahi! Even that thought brought tears in her eyes!

Ye misthi aap ki girlfriend h?

nahi! meri hone wali patni!

kyaaa?😲 n she again broke in to cry...😭

ab bichara maan ko kuch samaj me aye tho kuch kahe na!

misthi kya hua?😕

phir se Misthi babaji?😡

oho batao tho sahi! now he was getting impatient!

aap mujhe Misthi kyu bula rahe ho?

kya ? Then he realized why she was crying now if he laughs she will get more upset! He somehow controlled his laugh😆

wo jab Rano maa se bachpan me milta tha ..tho wo humesa apne pari k baat karti thi phir ek unho ne apni pari ki awaz sunai m ne tho turant kaha k ye tho Misthi jyse methi bolti h! Tab se maa ne tumhe mishi hi bulane ko kaha!

maa ne kaha she asked cutly

Hmm kyu tumhe pasand nahi h

nahi nahi...m ne kab kaha!

acha ab tum aram karo!

aur haat ko zada stress mat de na!

ji!😳

Take care! (n he cut the call halfheartedly)


On the other hand

Both dadai n mohindar were sitting on a bench in a gurudwara n were in there own deep thoughts in silence which dadi broke!

Beta kya aap ko lagta h ki geetbitiya ne call back kiya hoga!

pata nahi dadi kar ho dena chiye..aur ye aap ka plan bhi ajeeb h.. I still don't understand k aap ne achanak ke pandit ji ka bahana kyu banaya?..

Beta don't worry jab samay ayega m aap ko samjadungi! n trust me sub theak hi hoga!

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Part 6

It was almost evening by the time both were back from their visit Mohindar was worried because of dadi's decision.. But then it was maa n he could never say a word against her he was worried thinking about his daughter n her reaction!

Maan who was relaxing watching TV noticed him being lost in his thoughts he thought to ask dadi what the matter was but seeing both of them engrossed in their thoughts decided to break their silence..

dadi kya hua sab thek tho h?

Ha beta sab thek h!

nahi aap dono jab se aye ho bade chup se ho kuch baat h kya! .. are ha bauji wo aap k leya phone aya tha ghar se.. wo.. akeli h na pareshan horahi hogi aap baat karlijiye ..

thek h beta m abhi aya...

Dadi !

Maan wo bahut der horaha h na m ja k khane ka intazam karti hu!

Ye dadi itna ajeeb kyu behave kar rahi h ..

Mean while..

Hello! papaji !

geet beta! kya hua aap ki awaz bahut sehmi hui lagrahi h!

ji kuch nahi wo bas khana banate waqt thodi lag gai.. aap bataye subha aapka phone nahi lagraha tha!

Ha beta wo network prob thi shyad! isi liye m ne maan k no se try keya! (trying to sound all casual😉)

Umm ... m ne call back keya tha ... (papaji ko bhi tho yehi sun na tha na!😆)

acha beta m ab rakta hu aa k baat karenge!

Dadi was preparing dinner lost in thoughts

maa

Ha beta boliye!

wo geet ki baat hui thi maan se..

acha h aage babaji samhal lenge!

theak h maa ab m chalta hu ghar pahunch te deer ho jaye gi!

Par bauji itni raat ko journey theak nahi hoga aur aap bhi kafi thake hue lagrahe h!

Ha beta m bi yehi soch rahi thi! aap kal subha maan k saat chelejana!

par wo beti akeli h ghar pe!

Beta aap pehli baar thodi bahar aye ho bache bade ho gai h aap chinta mat karo maan usko bata dega.. kyu maan?

ji dadi

theak h phir hum khana kha k aaram karte h!

They all had dinner n moved to respective rooms..tab maad ko yaad aata h dadi ne misthi ko inform karne ko kaha tha .. itni der hogai so gai hogi!.. ek baar try kar k dekh ta hu!

babaji😡! aap ko najane mujse ka dushmani h! mujhe aaram karte dekh patani aap ko kya ho jata h... (ab m ne kaya kiya...) aur nahi tho kya m itne ache se un k sapne dekh rahi thi par nahi ye phone ko bhi abi bajna tha..

(Oh ye bhi m ne hi kiya!)

ji ha nahi tho itni raat ko kisi ko mujhe phone kar ne ka khayal kyu aye ga!

Seeing the phone continuously ringing maan ko lagtha h k wo so gai hogi.. n he was about disconnect

He heard the voice on the other side.

Hello! Kun h?

misthi!

aap!😳

hmm.. sorahithi?

nahi wo papaji ka wait kar rahi thi!

acha bauji kal subha ko aajaenge! bahut der ho gai thi na tho dadi ne kal subha nikal ne ko kaha!

ji😊

tum rehlo gi na akele .. He asked getting concerned😕

geet was loving his concern n care which was only for her

ji aap pareshan mat hoye m thek hu.. aur papaji jate rete h bahar kaam k silsile me ! mujhe aadat h akele rehne ki!

Hmm phir bhi! maan was not able to understand why he was getting all concerned for her as it was only a matter of one night kal subha tho bauji ghar pe honge!

Like geet sensed his worry in his silence she thought it would be better if she changed the topic

wo dadi kysi h ?

Hmm. .. thek h! Bas mujhe pareshan karti reti h!

acha...😆 giggling

Ha misthi pata h aaj bhi subha se ajeeb behave kar rahi h!😲 mujhe tho doubt h pata nahi un k dimak me kya chalta rehta h.. Still thinking about dadi's behavior!

udhar geet was finding it all cute him complaining about dadi! 😊N smiling ki have successfully distracted him!

acha misthi haat me zada dard tho nahi ho raha na!

nahi abhi theak h choti si chot thi ab theak h

choti si aur kitna roi... hmm khyal rakhna tha na apna!

Sorry! ab aap bhi gussa ho mujse!😔

nahi baba m tho kehraha tha .. tu laparwahi karogi tho gussa tho ayega na!

M aage se dhyan rakungi na !sorry bola na!😔

Hmm theak h chalo raat bahut hogai h ab so jao bauji subha tak pohoch jayenge!

ji !😊

Take care misthi good night ! m bhi kis ko bol raha hu khyal rakhna tho tumhe aata hi nahi!😆

M ne suliya ! Making a grumpy face 😒!

acha !

haa

M ne jhut thodi na kaha! wase bhi Maan Singh khurana kabhi jhut nahi bolta !😎

geet tho un k naam k saat k attitude pe hi flat hogi ho gi! hum se pucho jab maa apna naam leta h tho hamari kya halat hoti h!

thek h good night! With all jhuta gussa!😆

maan was loving it her nakhars her jhuta gussa! Her innocence..( rehne de maan list lambi h agle part me complete karenge tum apne phone p concentrate kar..)

misthi!

umm

naraz ho

Hmm

baat nahi karogi!

Hmm

thek h waise b raat bahot hogai h m rak ta hu! bye

ummm... she cried muje manao phir cut kro ...😒 like she had rights on him aur maan was controlling his laugh!

Misthi ! sach me der ho raha h na kal journey bhi h n office please m kal manalu tumhe..he said it so sweetly k geet k pass koi option hi nahi bacha bechari!

thek h app aram kariye..mu phula k😔

Good night misthi!

Good night!

babaji ye kal kab hoga! saying so she went to deram land about her maan!

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