KHUMAARI2-The Nocturnal Beast(MG)#3, NEXT THREAD ADDED - Page 8

Wow great story please update soon
I can not wait for the next part of your story and congratulations on the new thread
thanks for sharing your story with us.

Awesome update dear...

maan explaining abt his behaviour😭

geet's affection for him...😳


it was awesomely written👏
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tcre cya

Update soon🤗

when is next update dear... waiting

WOW...it was an amazing nd beautiful update..
finally Geet is giving a chance to Maan...😊
Maneet moments were ohh laa la...
plz continue soon dear

New thread n new update i didnt even notice😕 sometimes i can be so stupid. thanks for the pm. after every update of Khumari i am short of words on how to describe what i felt. This one was superb with they array of emotions. Geet still thinks in the line of running away? Really after all that had happened n her growing emotional bonding with Maan? She should run only to find out that she cant live without him😈. Maaneet date n the dating place was different. Loved their interactions specially how he opened up to her about his feelings n sufferings he was vulnerable. Poor Geet its hard for her to stay away n so inconvenient that he can smell her reactions🤣. He wants her so badly. Is it true that he would die if he does not mate her soon? or its just his desires. They fell asleep awee that was so cute😳. And him carrying his sugar how i am used to see MSK carrying Geet. Looks like the weres are going to have a bad time with the humans trying to invade their territory.

Lub u for all the frequent updates of all the FFs🤗

gr8 part..

I would not say much except that you should seriously consider about publishing it as a book. Even though I am clueless about the future course...bt whatever I have read so far..makes it a worthy contender to be published. Dead serious. The kind of flow...I mean yes I have always been a fan of your work be it Milan, Khumari, BF aur bezuba...bt this...This story seems to be coming out of a different writer altogether. If you were penning it anonymously...i would NOT have imagined that u r writing it. So yeah...a serious suggestion...get it published in near future. Its awesome. You are simply being a competition to your self here 😃

i LOVED it!! so surprised to see such a fast update. but such a wonderful surprise- whenever you wanna give this type of surprise, feel free 😉😆
looking forward to more...soon??

sorry for late reply

love the update
love the way maan took geet to show their sacred tree and then him telling her how he felt about her and her not understanding
then maan asking for a chance and geet agreeing to it was so nicely written

it seems like maan's wolf side is more nicer compare to other

what is it do with full moon and wolf😕😕😕

why do u have to stop at such a point
she just agree to give chance to him and they were just start to enjoy and this shot happen

wonder what is it with viduyt now😕😕

Pls try to update soon