KHUMAARI2-The Nocturnal Beast(MG)#3, NEXT THREAD ADDED

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samidsamid

@samidsamid

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Posted: 10 years ago

#501

awsm updt...and thanx fr updting...love the way u deescribe the ancient story part...gyan explain hr evrything...vidyut health is still same...Geet gnna dye...aww poor maaneet bth r suffering in differnt way...geeet hreard dying thing nd nw scred hope parth and maan find sme cure...mmaan is so helpleessa...updt soon...

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xolfiya

@xolfiya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#502

I hope everything gets fine in your life di I'll pray!!thanks for the update !!loved the narration of ancient story by gysn yo geet he seems a very nice guy!!so geet knew about why maan was hiding at least a little !!so she has some genetic locha in her :P with that recessive n dominant gene description I got my revision of 9th standard :P :P waiting for next dieing to know what will b geet's decision !!

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Craziest_MG

@Craziest_MG

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Posted: 10 years ago

#503

heyyy ...welcome back!
good to see u

awesome updt dear

finally Geet comes to know but guess it was just half of the truth.

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preethia

@preethia

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#504

Loved the update

Glad that some information was revealed

eagerly waiting for next

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Kawan

@Kawan

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#505

awesome update...

Kay so all confusion is gone..

how geet gene clan finished but as gyaan said nobody believes in this story so geet didn't paid any attention to it...

gone to met vidhut and saw maan their..

what heard almost shook her..

she don't want to die young..

loved it..

one question from you is this ff going to have a sad ending??

this curiousity will kill me... hehe

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shiela

@dreams-reality

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#506

Superb update

Although not much of Maaneet scene

Eagerly waiting for next part

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momi

@-BreakingDown-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#507

the update was wonderfull

i dont even remember the last parts

yeah summary did help

i was so into it until i realized its ended

ahh i didnt want it to end not at this point

does geet have some connection with any of tht one tribe??

and calling??

ahh yeah i m pretty mych misssing maaneet's encounters

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keenu_kk

@keenu_kk

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#508

Awesome dear

Love it. Oh god finally geet learned truth

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RageOfAnAngel

@RageOfAnAngel

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#509

*Jeez* like that's a gr8 ud👏
I really like Gyan he's wonderful u know like kind , understanding n compassionate
that story m presuming has something to do with Geet as u stated she is linked to werewolf by her parents only
but transformation can kill her
You know everything evolves at some point of time n this change in Geet wud've happened in any case , beast never remains caged so this part of her wud've been unleashed if not now then in future
She misses Maan n here Maan is trying to save her
so now she knows part of the truth that her life is at stake !
eager to know what she will do n what will Maan do
Thanks 4 updating🤗
Writer's block can happen sometimes bt this update was gr8 I loved it❤️
only thing that I sugg that plz put up a note that ur continuing , I dun mind late updates also as long as you continue❤️