Teri Deewani- a cute love story.... updated part 35 and epi on pg 163 - Page 66

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Cherishh thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part-14:

Waaah Maan and blushing...hayeee... After seeing that dress and imagining her (me doing it😛...Its a beautiful dress dear), now wonder he will be all lost in her and on Maan, I am all fida❤️😉

OMG...her parents didn't call her even once...thats too much. How much sad Geet might be feeling. It was the time when she needed them to cheer her up and support and be her strength, feeling sad for her...but glad Maan and Neha are with her being her support, guide and strength.

You have chosen a very cool song and they just rocked it😳

Just like them, me too waiting for the sun to shine bright.

Seeing your precap here, I feel Geet might say her feelings first.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part-15

Neha's happiness for her friend bring a smile to me...they are 2 lucky girls to have such sweet and lovely friendship and on the other hand Nikhil happy for Maan...glad to see Nikhil again.

Yeah Neha had planned and packed to send Geet geet away and she did it cleverly...good going dear😉

Wasn't Geet already angry on Neha that Maan was being smart to save himself😆

Awww that was a simple and sweet but heartfelt confession for the cute couple...I really, really liked it. But Geet's reaction was something unexpected...I was hoping to see a very bubbly and excited her, but got to see an emotional Geet...surely was a sweet surprise. Its like all her fears and worries have gone and she is just trying to bag in all the warmth and reality of dreams...lovely

On the other hand, Maan being so callm and loving was defo too good. It seems like Maan did take Neha's words of his love liking simple things and he did understand that soft Geet behind his childish sweetheart

Like the celebrations of Geet's birthday with her friend and love and then the naughty lover Maan at the end saying those 3 words at the end😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part-16/17

Aaahhaaa...the possessive Geet...I just so love it

Neha's concerns are understandable but she being supportive and happy for her friend is sweet

ohhhooo Maan kahan phasgaya...the little cutie did listen to your confession and her questions omg were so cute yaar...loved the way he finally confessed yet controlled the situation, their sweet secret, but till when I wonder😆
Maan with kids is adorable to read.

OMG Geet's parents didn't call and didn't even talk to her when she herself did...why and how can they forget her B-day...getting more curious with this mystery...hope nothing bad and their is reasonable reason...can't see Geet with pain of betrayal of her parents😳
Hope she shares her pain and fear with Neha soon.

She really is madly in love with Maan and is very happy for sure with the way she forgot all her pain and sadness and just lost in him...it shows the depth of her feelings.

Wowww Maan became their tutor, gonna get some sweet Maaneet moments and fun moments of trio😎, but yaar bicharo ko subah, subah utaa diay😡😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely updates dear👍🏼...waiting for moreee

Sorry for delay in commenting😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Banner Credit goes to Vrinda di. Thank u sooo much di🤗




After studying for sometime and relaxing in between Maan helped the girls in finishing their portion of science, now they were sitting and talking on the random things, when Neha heard the sound of car, she went near her window and looked outside and was shocked to see her parents coming

Neha : Oh Shit !!!!!!!, she got scared seeing her parents

Geet : What happened Neha, why r u looking so scared?????, she asked not understanding why Neha got scared all of sudden

Neha : For u both , she pointed towards Maan and Geet, they gave her a confuse look

Geet : What??? she was confused hearing Neha, what r u saying Neha we r not able to understand anything, please say everything clearly and properly, she said looking towards Maan who was equally confused as her

Neha : U want to know what I m talking about, then listen Mom and Dad are back, and what will u both, she again pointed towards Maan and Geet, r going to say to them, what a guy is doing here, when he is senior to us and has no relation with us in school too, she finished getting frustrated, Geet got nervous hearing Neha and look towards Maan who was cool, like nothing happened, he stood there with his hand in his jeans pocket, Neha too looked at him and pointed her finger towards him and said, listen Maan, bcoz of u we r in this mess, u only wanted to come and teach ur girlfriend science, so now u have to take us out from this mess or else I m not gonna help u both in near future for anything

Maan raised his one brow and asked with attitude : And what made u think that I will help u when u r showing this much attitude and why would we need ur help in future for anything, nd anyway why would we ask for ur help in future, we r now couple and now there is no need of u

Neha was shocked hearing him an her mouth was wide open but she replied to him in same attitude : About u I don't know but she, she pointed towards Geet, will definitely ask for my help , I can bet on that, Maan looked at Geet who nodded her head with a scared face pouting lips and biting her nails in nervousness, while Maan shook his head in dismay

Maan : Fine, I would help u to be out of this mess but u have to say yes to everything that I will say in front of Uncle and Aunty, R u ready for it????, giving into demand for Geet

Neha got suspicious listening to him : what r u going to say????? she asked with narrowed eyes

But before Maan could response the bell rang and Neha just stood still, Maan shook her and said Leave everything on me and just agree with everything I say now go and open the door, before ur parent start worrying about u

Neha : But... before she could say something more she again heard the bell, so she just left from there in hurry to open the door

Neha opened the door and saw her parent who was looking worried and gave them side to let them in

Neha's Father : Where were u Neha????, he asked with little angry and little tensed voice

Neha : Woh papa, me and Geet were doing our work and music was on, ah, so didn't heard the sound of bell, she said getting scared due to their sudden appearance

Neha's Mother : U and ur craze for music, next time when u r alone there is no need to play loud music, understood.

Neha : Yes Maa, she nodded her head

NM : Neha where is Geet?????

Neha : Woh she is in room, she answered her mother and thought to change the topic, accha Maa, now ur work is over or still some work is left????

NM : No Neha, work is still left and we r again leaving today only, she caressed Neha's cheek with sad apologetic smile

Neha : Okay, she said with a little smile on her face, so that her parent won't feel bad

NF : Neha, don't be sad, I promise u as soon as our work will be finished we will go for a vacation.

Neha : Okay, now u both get fresh n up and then we will have a family lunch together, and she kissed her mother cheeks nd went to her room while her parent went to their, Neha was happy thinking now Maan can go easily as it will take sometime to her parent to get ready

In room,

Neha entered the room and saw a worried Geet and cool Maan

Neha : Don't u fear that u will get caught by my parent ????, she asked with her arms on her chest

Maan : No, why should I fear of anything, I m not anything wrong, he said shrugging his shoulder in cool manner but still their was a tinge of attitude in his reply

Neha : Okay leave all this, she said waving her hand in like dismissing the topic, go nd make a quick exit, Mom and Dad are in their room, saying so she literary dragged him with her nd then close the door behind her

As they were nearing the door, Neha's mother came out and saw Neha dragging a guy, she was surprised to see a guy at home and that too with Neha

NM : Neha, listening her name Neha stopped in her track nd stood at her place without turning her back, Neha turn around, she said with strictness in her voice, Neha turned and saw her mother with a goofy smile, who is he?????? she asked with same strictness in her voice, Neha looked scared nd looked at Maan who looked unaffected nd even has confidence round himself and seeing him like that, Neha was fearing more not knowing what she will answer her mother

Neha : Ah, Maa.. he ..., Neha fumbled with her words and seeing that NM got little suspicious nd looked at Maan, who stood erect without any ounce of fear in him but looked confidence, to say very much confidence

NM : May I know who r u and what r u doing at our home?????? she asked Maan with polite voice but still strictness didn't left her

Maan : Hello Ma'am, I m Maan Singh Khurana, a friend of Neha and Geet, he replied with confidence

NM : But u don't seems like their classmate, in fact u look senior, she asked not knowing what he was doing here when he was senior to her daughter

Neha : Ha Maa, she quickly said even before Maan could say anything, he is Purvaa ma'am brother

NM : And how do u know him??????, She again asked Neha, Maan looked at Neha who looked nervous, so he answer her on the behalf of Neha

Maan : Actually ma'am I was introduced to them at the time of Annual function which was held in school, Di asked me to perform with Geet as there was some problem with the guitarist who was going to perform with Geet, and during the practice time we became friends, he replied with confidence and NM was satisfied with the answer, especially after knowing that he is brother of Purvaa

Neha ( mumbled to herself ) : pehle friend nd now boyfriend, listening to this Maan gave her glare n she gave just a nervous smile to him

Purvaa : But what were u doing here???, she asked Maan not understanding his presence at their place

Maan : Ma'am Geet and Neha asked me for help in Science, so just came here to clear the doubts, I think I should leave now, it was nice meeting u ma'am, he said with polite smile

NM : Same here, but please stop calling me Ma'am it feels really awkward, u can call me aunty, she replied with a smile an softness in her gesture

Maan : Ji, saying so he left from there and Neha too took a sigh of relief and then quickly made an exit before her mother could ask her more about Maan, in her room she saw Geet standing near window and looking outside, she came near her without making any noise

Neha : Bhaw, hearing sudden sound Geet got startled and kept her hand on her heart

Geet : Neha, she said catching her breath, u scared me, she said with heavy breath

Neha : Leave all this and come for lunch, today we r going to have a family lunch, saying so she dragged Geet with her and with her help arrange the table for lunch

At the lunch all were talking on random topic and sometime Neha's parents were asking Geet and Neha about their studies, after lunch and resting for sometime Neha parents left again for their work, promising Neha to be back soon nd instructing both to be careful in their absence, after their departure Geet and Neha decided to see some music channels, to pass their time, changing the channel randomly Neha stopped at one which was playing the song " BABY DOLL ", Neha was enjoying the lyrics while Geet was getting irritated due to it

Geet : Neha yaar change the channel, she said in irritating voice

Neha : Na ah, I m loving this song listen its lyrics yaar, then she started to sing the song, Yeh duniya, yeh duniya pittal di Yeh duniya pittal di Yeh duniya pittal di.. Ho baby doll main sone di Ho baby doll main sone di..., listening to lyrics Geet got more irritated and seeing that Neha started to tease her, aww my BABY DOLL is angry on me, she said with innocent face and tried to hide the smile

Geet : Neha stop calling me that, she said warning her

Neha : Aha, never I m going to call u now BABY DOLL only, while Geet was getting angry Neha was enjoying teasing her, look look my BABY DOLL face is turning red in anger, she again called her BABY DOLL to irritate her, and getting fed up of her teasing Geet went inside the room.

After sometime Neha entered the room nd saw Geet engrossed in something,

Neha : Geet, what r u doing?????? She asked getting curious to know in what she was so much engrossed, listening Neha's voice Geet quickly closed her book and went near her bag nd kept it inside her bag, Geet what r u hiding from me, she asked with narrowed eyes

Geet : N...no... nothing, she said putting her curl behind her hair nervously, I will just go n drink some water, saying so she made a quick exit before Neha could ask her more question, while Neha looked at her suspiciously and went near her bag, she started to search inside her bag and felt some hard surface thing under her dress, she took it out and look at that, after examining it for sometime she understood that it was a diary, getting curious to know what Geet was hiding she kept the diary in her almirah, before Geet came and decided to read it afterwards




Please read note in next post too, its really important

Edited by lovesia - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi, I m Aarushi, a cousin of Sia di, well i wanted to let u all know that the writer of this story i.e., Sia di, is no more. She met with an accident in June and left us, I don't know what role she plays here but I got to know that she writes some story and wanted it to complete it, and I m here to complete her wish, I have some written updates of her with me and I will just post them, to fulfill her wish, but I won't be coming here often as I m in 11 nd my exams are going to start in next 20 days. So I will just come whenever I will be free and will post her update, only if no one has problem with it.
Please do let me know about it, so that I can know what I have to do in future

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Posted: 11 years ago
i dnt know what to say...
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Posted: 11 years ago
its just shocking
don't know what to say
god give shanti to her soul



and you doing great job
with complanting her work
dear if you need any
help just tale me i will help you dear

Mahimaan
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Posted: 11 years ago
me crying 😭
its very shocking

i dont have any words to say




where ever she is ...may her soul rest in peace

will misss u and love u alot sia






uma...
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Posted: 11 years ago


Its very shocking to hear tis..i have talk with..she is very person..may her soul rest inpeace..im so sad to miss my family member..

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