THE LOCKET (20) MG FF, link to new thread pg 1, COMPLETED

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divya22

@divya22

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#541

Nyc part...

All is ready n set...

Geet proved dat she is indeed vry intelligent n brave..

Brij ur count down starts..

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srikrithi

@srikrithi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#542

Maan stopped geet right on time.

Each of brij plan has been tweeted .

Maan & kabir need to come out son.

Brij confessed his deed.

Hope poonam understands chandan.

Continue soon.

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#543

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-
comment from last update is pending from myside...

ek din aur... then i will be back with my comments and waiting...

just busy with the anniv festival started at the thread...

jeej kaise hain??

Jeej? 😳 hot and handsome as usual 😆 abhi theek hai, kaam pe bhaag gaye 😆

your anniv pics are superb👏

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#544

Originally posted by: dqno1

Jeej? 😳 hot and handsome as usual 😆 abhi theek hai, kaam pe bhaag gaye 😆

your anniv pics are superb👏

😆 hamaare jeej ki deewaani avi😃

thanks avi... as its a random thought, didnt had any pics in hand too... daily am thinking and making for the next day... now too thinking about tom... have no idea what to do... all my stock of idea seems to be finished😆

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Ann

@annbell

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#545

WaHh .. kya update tha .. 😃😃 ..

i really liked dis ziddi geet .. geet tho badi hoshiyari nikkali .. hw fast she figured out brij's escape .. chandan would definitely not leave brij for da games he played with chandan n his family ..

even after da protests from maan its lucky dat kabir went along with maan .. otherwise he would've stuck in dat jeep ..

superb update .. 😃😃 ..

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#546

Aweesommmeee Update Aviii 🤗
Nice song by Kailash kher..
Giitt kisi ki nhi sunti, Maan ki tou bilkul bhi nhi 😆
Maan-Kabir as a Team 😃
Poor Poonam n Chandan.. I just hate Brij more n more 😡 😡
Waitinggg for some Zabardast wali Brij ki dhulai 😃 😆

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fict

@fict

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#547

nice update. Good that Brij confessed his deeds in front of Poonam and Chandan. Hope it brings them closer.

Thanks for pm.

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Padfoot_Prongs

@Padfoot_Prongs

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#548

Avi Kudos girl.🤗 u have done an awesome job as a writer. being a reader from very first part i know how much hard work u have done for us. i completely adore this story. one of my fav. it is just not Maan-Geet. u made me fall for every good char of this FF. Be it DevTara story or Poonam-Chandan Story or megha-kabir story and Sameera's story i loved all side stories. the way u presented the story was just awesome. i still remember when u posted it as an OS, and i was like Geet with someone else- Big No. then someone clarified that dev is just happy for Tara accepting Him. Then u started writing it as an FF. I loved this story.😃

Now coming to the update- Our heroes and heroines are at work- Brij ki kya majaal hai ab. I m waiting for villagers to reach and do dhulaai of brij but i know usse pahle Chandan apni or poonam ki life hell banane ke liye badla lega.

Go Chandan GO.😈

I know this story is going to finish soon. i ll be waiting for ur next venture.😃