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HI BABAIE

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Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.





Part - 50


Maan knew she was hurt and faced humiliation in office which was unbearable for a girl like her ,, she never go against d morals nd self respect that's why she was refusing to live here ,, she didn't want that anybody raise finger on her nd now she had faced for which was fearing ,, my name with her like this . He too was shocked who did all this nd why ?

Maan was in a very tough situation he couldn't let her go from d house nd his life ,, he couldn't leave her alone to face this cruel world ,, for her safety nd happiness he cd go to any extent ,, any .

Maan: i won't let u go Geet ,, get it .

Geet: no i can't live here anymore ,, plzz mujhe jane do ,, she cried out .

Maan: we trust u Geet then why r u behaving like this ? tum meri baat to suno,, mujhse baat to karo .

Geet: ab kya fayada,, jo allegation lagne thy lag gaye mere naam per ,, tumhe bhi ek baar yahi laga hoga na ,, esiliye mujhe gusse se dekh rahe thy.

Maan: Geet essa nahi hei ,, ku galat samajh rahi ro ?

Geet: mujhe jana hei bas mujhse ye aur bardast nahi hoga ,, mai kis-kis ko yakeen dilaungi ,, sab wahi kahenge jo dekhenge ,, mai ku yahan raha rahi hu ? sab yahi jantey hei mei anaath hu , akele hun ,, koi nahi hei mera to tumhe trap ker liya apne fayade ke liye ,,mai...

Maan couldn't take any more ,, he became angry with her blabbering ,, his wounded hand was filled with blood nd soaking her dress from her arms ,, some drops wr falling on floor ,, Dadima ns Nakul gasped in fear looking at that but he was not caring his pain ,, his main concern was Geet ,, he shook her nd shouted on her ..

Maan: chup ,,, bilkul chup ,, kuch bhi bol rahi ho ,, sab kuch hei tumhara ,, ye ghar , mai aur Dadima ,, kya hum kuch nahi tumhare liye ? kya humara pyaar kuch nahi tumhare liye ? kya hum ek dusre ko nahi jantey ?

Geet: kaun janta hei , haan ,, aur kya lagti hun mai tumhari .? kya jawab du mai aur kya jawab hei tumhare paas ki ku rahati hu mai yahan ? nahi rahan mujhe yahan ,, jane do mujhe .

Geet too shouted at him losing her last strand of patience ,, nobody knows about their past ,, her words hurt him hard ,, d pain , guilt , fear , anger nd his feelings for her overpowered him ,, in d gush of emotions he raised his blood filled hand nd filled her partition in a jerk ,, her all forehead nd partition filled with his blood ,, his eyes nd face wr red in anger ,, his grip on her shoulder was very tight ,, Dadima nd Nakul was watching all this with wide eyes nd Dadima gasped loud seeing this.. Maan ,, their words stuck in their throats ,, Maan jerked her again saying ..

Maan: jao ab jahan jana hei ,, do jise jo jawab dena hei .. now u have everything ,, accept it or not , it's up to u now.

Geet was dumbfounded , frozen at her place ,, she was looking at him with wide eyes ,, he jerk her back but she didn't react .

Maan: kisi clearance ki jaroorat nahi hei ab ,, aur na tum akele ho ,, samjhi .

Geet slowly touched her forehead with her trembling hand nd felt d wetness of his blood , she looked at her red fingers horrified ,, she was trying hard to get d reality which had happened few sc back ,, she looked at all nd then again her hand ,, a dead silence prevailed there ,, when reality struck her mind that he had filled her maang with his blood she knelt on ground defeated like someone snatched her all strength from her body ,, Dadima left a weak cry seeing her like this,,, Geet * Maan turned nd looked at her she was still looking at her hand shocked ,,, now he realised what he had done in a gush of anger ,, he squeezed his eyes tightly ,, d damage had done .

All wr tongue tight ,, Nakul left from there leaving a painful sigh ,, Maan dragged himself near d window nd looked out lost nd pained ,, Dadima sat on nearby chair fearing for d coming storm ,, one storm passed nd another is ready to come any moment ,, she was shocked at d turn of event in a min ,, d dream of their late Son nd DIL turn into reality but how? She didn't know is it d matter of happiness or grief ?

Nakul came back with d first aid box nd broke d silence of d atmosphere .

Nakul: chote saab ,, bahot khoon baha raha hei laiye saaf ker du.

Maan looked at his hand nd then to Geet who turned stone at her place ,, her head was red with his blood ,, he clinched his fists with pain ,, his throat chocked seeing her like this nd heart bleed ,, Nakul held his hand nd wiped with towel ,, he made her sit on d chair nd cleaned that then bandaged ,, Maan lost all strength to speak a word ,, he was sitting with lower head immerse in recollecting d moments which took place there all of sudden ,, everything was so smooth nd pleasant in d morning nd now scattered in a moment ,, why life is so complicated for them .

Dadima gave a painful look to Maan nd Geet ,, her eyes became teary looking them so disturbed nd broken ,, she got up nd came close to Geet she sat down near her nd engulfed her in her arms ,, Geet didn't react nd remained like that numb n cold ,,, Dadima knew that time was very hard for Geet nd she didn't know how she react ? she herself was very confused nd shocked ,, Dadima showering her love on Geet calling her name to get some response * when Geet didn't react for some time Dadima left from there defeated leaving all d things on God ,, she came in temple room to pray for d happiness n peace of her home n children .

Maan's phone started ringing again n again but he didn't attend a single call ,, he was looking blankly in one direction ,, his all strength crushed down seeing Geet like that ,, his heart wanted to go near her , to talk her nd to take her in his arms but he was not able to move from his place ,, her next reaction was fearing him * hr passed like that nd she was sitting like a statue ,, her silence nd worn state started killing him ,, he wanted her reaction , her outburst nd anger on him ,, he summoned his courage nd dragged himself near her with a thudding heart ,, knelt in front of her ,, held her cold stained hand in his shaking hand uttering her name in a cracky voice...G e e t * but there was no sign of reaction ,, after few sec he mustered his courage a lil nd cupped her face ,, spoke in a pleaded voice.

Maan: G e e t , kuch to bolo ,, esse matt raho,, apna gussa mujh per nikal lo ,, Geet ,, plzz.

But she was like before unaffected ,, motionless,, her condition was piercing his heart nd he was dying to hear a single word from her ,, he got up , scoop her from d cold floor ,, made her sit on d bed but no movement from her side ,, her condition started fearing him ,, defeated nd disheartened he hugged her ,, for god sake kuch bolo Geet ,, plzz say something , ur silence is killing me .


Precap - aggravation ...



Part - 51
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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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all r waiting ...update soon ...
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😲

Maan ne yeh Kya kardiya...oh no...ab geet kaise react karegi...😕




I think dadi ko such drama karna chahiye😉...like in the show😆


Nice update...👏
Edited by -indu- - 11 years ago
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u will be doing half century ...great going ...
congrats ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
congrats on fifty parts👏 Thanks 4 an intense emotional update! Maan n Geet talk! Maan fills her maang with his blood! They r married! Dadi shocked! Geet numb! Maan realises wt he did! Geet nt saying a wrd! Maan worried! update soon! Well written
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome
loved it
maan filled geet's maan
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😲 lakshu where r u ..??

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