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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites

Ab mujhe nind aa rahi hai .. GN sablog 😆


😊 GN Mona..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites

Ab mujhe nind aa rahi hai .. GN sablog 😆


goodnight mona
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Posted: 11 years ago



hello mona

jyaada sar ko ghomao mat abhi update dena baaki hai 😲😆😆

aaj se 4 din tak mera attendance absent likho😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

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hello mona

jyaada sar ko ghomao mat abhi update dena baaki hai 😲😆😆

aaj se 4 din tak mera attendance absent likho😆


kyaaa... nahiii... priya i wil miss u the most.. sachhii... 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111




hello mona

jyaada sar ko ghomao mat abhi update dena baaki hai 😲😆😆

aaj se 4 din tak mera attendance absent likho😆


ye kya baat hui.. tum aati ho toh mai nahi.. jab mai aayi tum gayab
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Originally posted by: MonaSWrites


ye kya baat hui.. tum aati ho toh mai nahi.. jab mai aayi tum gayab


dono ki dono badi irregular ho.. puishment deni padegi.. tb jake sudhrogi.. kyuuu😡
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Posted: 11 years ago

me alsoo waitinggg😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

I am really so much overwhelmed with all precious comments you all are giving me .. Thank you so much 😊




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Part 126


Maan found yash was having a serious talk with doctors. Yash was bending over a file when his gaze fell on standing Maan on door. He gestured the people there to leave.

"Don't worry Mr. Maan. Your wife condition is improving" One doctor patted Maan shoulder. Giving a comfortable smile, he left. Yash kept the file on table and directed to Maan. "Come inside Son"

"Why are you doing this Grandpa" Maan walked in swift. He was not getting why Yash trying to show himself changed. He had never been like this before. Maan was not habituated for this consolation from Yash and desperately wanted the reason behind this transformation. "Why so care about Geet when you never liked her!" He then smirked. "Don't try to make me have belief that you started changing grandpa" He mocked.

Yash smiled on this statement. "I never needed to show anything to anyone Maan. People use to see always what I make them see in reality!"

"So what you want me to see right now! Is it that you want to make me believe, suddenly my grandpa started caring for me, for my happiness, that you started thinking for my betterment grandpa? That you left the thought over killing my Geet? Destroying her!!"

"I never had thought over killing her Maan!" Yash voice risen abruptly. "I never had thought it" , "It was always you Maan who let me feel jealous with her. It was she always who won over your attention, your love, which should have been for me only. She made you share your love, what should've been of mine and I, hated this fact. No one, no one can ever win over me. I always ruled over this world but she was the one who ruled over My World which was you. And I couldn't tolerate it!"

Silent Maan was amazed to find this transparency within his grandfather. He couldn't believe that Yash was talking to him very finely and expressing his heart. He selected to be quiet and let Yash speak.

"When you were child Maan, your eyes always made me remind of my son. I could see Rajveer in you and I didn't want this disturbance within me. I stopped looking at you. I know it was my fault but I couldn't show the world, that I was weak. But you were happy. I was amazed to see you even didn't show that you have sorrow of my ignorance and then I found, you had Geet. You hid things from me for her. You forgot me for her. It seemed, you had everything, you had your world around her but I had nothing. I was scared to lose you. I wanted to adore you. But I had fear. When my love could not stop Rajveer to leave me, I showed you my hatred thinking this of my adaptation would stop you going, but you also left me. And everything happened because of that girl"

"Then why today you saved her Grandpa?" Finally Maan questioned.

"Because once again, I didn't wanted to lose my son"

"Did I see there, a drop in his eyes?" Maan wondered. He was surprised finding a see-through sight of his heart where everything was clear. "Grandpa was jealous of Geet?" Faded smile appeared on Maan lips thinking it. He wanted to laugh on this realization. This time he could see old man at front who could be his real grandfather with heart and soul. How he always had been finding a mountain around his grandfather's body where his heart was concealed. But now the mountain had been melted and been converted into a blue river which was fresh and calm. And amazingly he also felt serene standing near of him.

Yash was himself amazed that how easily he had stated his heart out, he never had done it. But he couldn't deny the relaxation his heart was feeling right now. He looked at Maan and found him smiling, though smile was not so clear but he saw. "Why are you smiling Maan?"

Maan shook head ending the smil"e. He could see expression of wonderment on Yash face which was making him look like a child who was scared for his secret has been disclosed and he seemed embarrassed too. "You know Grandpa, Geet always used to say that you are not a bad person from heart. You adore me more than her and she wanted to appease you, so that we can live together like a family. She is truly an Angel" Suddenly the forgotten anger came back regaining what happened with her. "I promise you Geet, I'll not leave the man behind your this condition. I will kill him who harmed you. I will kill his who harmed Dad I promise!!!"

"Rajveer?" Yash asked instantly. Then Maan realized what he uttered in his anger. He was not ready to think about this episode. He had kept this fact from all to solve it out himself because he had no hope from Yash but Yash had heard. And he was repeating the question. "What you know Maan about Rajveer? What had happened with him?", but at the same time SD came hurriedly informing Maan that Mohan and Jagan has come. Maan left the room without telling a word.

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The next two days Maan spent with Geet, in her room staring her. Kept looking at her calm face and removing flying curls over her eyes was his only work and that had been calming his heart. But he badly needed her to open her eyes, to talk with him and hearing her gabbling. He kissed her eyes. He cried covering his face with her hand and requested her to come back when suddenly as if he felt some movement in her hand. He looked at her with trilling heartbeats. He waited for her any move but she remained still. Anticipated Maan again kissed her palm, to feel the movement once again and she did! She moved her hand and Maan found her cheek became red. "Is it blush?" excitement was ready to take over his life. He bent over her face and kissed her head. "Yes she blushed!" He bent near her ear and whispered "I love you Angel", .. She again blushed. Maan heart wanted to come out. His body was shaking. He held her hand and she tightened it.

"She is coming back!!" He shouted. He runs out of room. He shouted standing on railing "Mom Dadima Geet is coming back!!!" He rushed back to Geet. He was not understanding what to do. How to express his joy, this excitement. Alka with SD and Mohan Jagan and troop of doctors everyone rushed upstairs. Yash came out of room. He also followed them with equal excitement but then paused. "What he was doing?" he wondered but his heart was asking to go up, to see what's happening there, to feel the happiness which everyone was feeling right now. But as like something was forcing him not to show this emotions. May be he had not been habituated with this demonstration but indeed, he had liked this contentment. But perhaps he was not the person to enjoy this merriment, he returned back to his room and begun to find out the reality behind Maan's state.

Precap : Sweet Geet tries to pacify the toughest grandfather 😆


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Posted: 11 years ago

kyaaa... me totally shocked... maan;s grand pa ws jealous of geet ... n hes not the culprit.. ohh mann.. kyaa dhamaka hai.. then whos that guy?? well.. maan nahi chodega usko hena..
hiii mona .. hw r u?? yeyy me 1st.. babbie k thread pr bhi me 1st ho..
abbb to roz dikhogi na.. ki firse gum hojane ka plan hai??
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