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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#331

Originally posted by: priya111111
do updates ki comment pending hai😛
so poora khushi aur arnav ka relation ka story bahar aagayi hai poor ASR kitna tadap raha hai 😆😆😆ab msk bhi latoo hogaya geet ko dekhthe hi😆😆😆aur pinky samajh gayi ki msk kigussa sirf geet ki kam karsakthi hai

Thanks for the review Di!😃

Yes, poor ASR right now! But soon, Geet will say something to ASR which he will take differently and the whole story will be turned on its head!😆 Then I will guarantee you will stop saying Poor ASR and say poor Khushi!😉 And pinky is a very smart girl who observes everything!😆

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#332

Originally posted by: -Orchid-
Awesome update

Thank you!😃

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#333

Originally posted by: sanghita0000
awesome update...maan geet interaction was quite funny...😆...also want to read the equation between the cross couples...we have all read the amazing bonding between maan & khushi , now want to read about arnav & geet...😃...want to see them as best friends & want arnav to be protective about geet like maan is with khushi...😃

Thanks for the review!😃

Happy that you found the Maaneet scene funny! I had hoped someone found the humor in the way they were behaving and glad you found it!😃

Wow! So you are one of those readers who love the cross couples bonding! About Geet and Arnav, their bond will not be the way it is in DFL, but they will bond as they will meet each other a lot due to Maan and Khushi being their loves! It wont be as free as DFL and they will remain a bit formal but there will be bonding as friends! You will find their bond fresh as compared to Maan-Khushi here and in DFL and Arnav-Geet in DFL! They may become close friends but Arnav wont be protective of Geet coz Geet is not the chuimui Geet. If you remember just few chapters back, she fought against goons with just a stick in her hand and so Arnav wont need to be protective but they will be more like friends! Have not thought about their bonding much! Will try to give them as much scenes to get close though just for you!😃

Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 11 years ago

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#334

Originally posted by: chavvi16
Oh ho kya baat hai
Hmmm that makes sense
His story is sad too

I know! Bahut sad nahi!

After all he lost his parents pretty early on
But that don't explain his arrogant behaviour

Oh! Come on! You dont expect me to change ASR's personality? Woh ASR hi kya jo arrogant na rahe? How will my readers accept ASR without his arrogance and attitude? I can modify parts of a main character's personality or change it because of some major event in his life but I wont change him fully as that goes against my principle! My Geet will always be attached to her roots, sweet and naive by nature my Khushi will always be silly, funny and innocent, my ASR will always be arrogant, smart and rude and my MSK will always be stern, disciplined and honest! I wont change their core personality! I refuse to do it!

But thank God he is no longer arrogant
That would be no fun

Oh no! His arrogance is still there! It is just not to the point of being rude!😉

But of course khushi can't see that he is no longer the ASR she knew
I think geet is right they both feel something for one another
Khushi does too
But she don't know yet

Khushi is not in love with him yet! She is just attached to him coz he has been following her for months and which girl does not love it when a guy goes lattu over her?😉 But thats it! She will fall for him slowly once she realises how much she depends on him!😃

Geet saw it but others didn't yet
True fine line between love and hate
Arnav was being a jerk before
No wonder she hated him and still does
She can't see he has changed
Waise deewanapan abhi shuru nahin hua hair

Deewanapan shuru hone mein time hai, pehle pyaar hone do, ikraar hone do, izhaar hone do phir dekhna aage aage hota hai kya?😉

Soon will right
Geet and maan Congo was cute
But what was more cute was there interaction

Happy that you liked it!😃

Which pinks saw
He really calmed down after seeing her
Dusht danav he was being
But stopped when he heard her
And it wasn't his illusion this time
It has started their romance kinda
And can't wait for more

😃

Wonder when khushi will realise Arnie changed

Khushi will realise slowly! I am so eager to know your reaction when the story unfolds!😉

And about maneet
What to say haiyye
Cheers for pm

Thanks for the review! I know you are busy so really appreciate you taking time to review it!😃

Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 11 years ago

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Bindu sharma

@-indu-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#335

Nice updates...👏

Khushi going strong...Go baby...mujhe aisi ladkiyan bohut pasand hain...😉😆

Arre Maan babu zara dekho kaun aaya hain...pinky ko baad mein dekhlena...pehle apni...jaan ko toh dekho...😳...

wow great going maan...seedha apna P.A babaliya Geet ko...not bad...not bad...lage raho...

aur hume bohut maza aanewala hain...😆

do continue soon...

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#336

true ASR and not rude arrogant aint ASR

well some things better not change

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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Posted: 11 years ago

#337

good one.. looks like Geet will help AK..

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#338

Originally posted by: chavvi16
true ASR and not rude arrogant aint ASR
well some things better not change

Exactly! His arrogance is what made him famous! Cant take that away from him without killing his character!😃

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#339

Originally posted by: annbell
wah .. !! kya update diya hai ..
i loved it .. 😃 ..
every dialogue .. every scene .. everything are absolutely fantastic ..
maan n geet's first meeting in office is fab .. awkwardness .. nervousness .. silent love ..
pinky's narration of kushi n arnav's story was awesome ..
dis is d first tym i'm commenting for dis ff ..
even though i had read da first 7 parts in "Lutt Jawa" ..i read da 7 parts again to get da flow .. its amazing ..
n ur every works are really really fantastic .. 😃 ..

Hi dear,

First of all let me tell you how shocked I was when I saw your review! I have seen your name many times in the 'likes' but never expected you to review and I did not mind that! I was just thankful that atleast you are pressing likes when there are many silent readers who dont even do that! So as I never expected your review, I was shocked to see it and then shocked turned into happiness and I would have stood up and danced if I was not sitting in a restaurant! 😃

And also I have to tell you I am really touched by your review! You just made my weekend more beautiful!😃 I actually cant believe that you loved my work so much! Just reading your review is making me teary eyed coz you wrote that you loved every scene so much! I promise to maintain the quality of my stories and will strive to write more better just to see you review again!😊 And I will give my best to other stories too.

Thank you for reviewing and giving me the best gift you could give!

Thanks and take care,

Kalpana

P.S. DFL will be up tomorrow!😃

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#340

Originally posted by: fffan123
Absolutely awesome update. Loved the back story of ARHI. Bechare chotte DD 😆 😆 😆 And something is definitely pakkaoing between ARHI. Which is why Geet said that there is a fine line between love and hate.
And poor Maan 😃 Geet ko dekhate hi unka ghussa thanda ho gaya. Wow.

Looking forward to next part.

Thanks for the review dear!

Happy that you liked the update so much!

And dont worry about your bechaare Chote DD! He is also not an idiot! Pretty soon he will make Khushi fall for him!

Will take time to update coz I am working on the intro of new thread for DFL! But will keep you updated through daily updates!😃