MG Fate of the unfortunate part 11,12on102 teaser and Note 141,155 - Page 53

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Posted: 11 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n wonderful update! All crying! lovely song! update soon! Well written
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awesome parts
geet health is improving due to rano's presence
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hope all goes well for maan
geet and muski too
and dadi is fine soon
with geet as well
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Part 8
Awesome update !!

Haha even i loved it tht sham singh broke dev's mouth & nose ..

Naina's word hurted maan & he slapped her in anger ..
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Superb update !!

Veer kissed naina in anger & to make her mouth shut bt in return got punches & slaps frm pinky ..🤣

geet got panic attack & hurting herself bt thank god maan brought rano on time & she threw knife aways & crying hugging her mom ..
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Part 10
Awesome & emotional update !!!!

Maan told rano everything abt geet n him ..1st She was angry which is quite natural bt then trusted him ..

awww muski is super possessive for her paa maan ..

geet feed muskan happily which is positive sign in her treatment ..

maan again singing lori for geet & later break down with the loneliness bt rano comforting him in her mother hug ..
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why is Naina blaming them...this habit of making assumptions and acting on them is very strange by a lady who is Doctor in profession...Maan, Adi and Veer may have made any mistakes in past but blaming them to enjoy Geet is like she is pointing fingers on Geet also...how can she use such a language for her patient...

Maan father is also attacked and here his Daadima is in hospital...he is in so many problems still he is trying to help Geet...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 11 years ago

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why is Naina blaming them...this habit of making assumptions and acting on them is very strange by a lady who is Doctor in profession...Maan, Adi and Veer may have made any mistakes in past but blaming them to enjoy Geet is like she is pointing fingers on Geet also...how can she use such a language for her patient...

Maan father is also attacked and here his Daadima is in hospital...he is in so many problems still he is trying to help Geet...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...






thanks for comment dear and for nanina it is natural reaction we cant accept our near one to act like this , and it is her past also who come as outburst , she not pointing to geet she just hurt by her own closed friends dear

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Posted: 11 years ago
koi hai kya...
agr hai toh plz Mahi ko bolo...
ki we r waiting...
itne din se update nhi kiya..
jaldi karo...
WAITING...
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Part 11

rano just put geet head on pillow and went to maan and just put her hand on maan shoulder , that motherly touch just broke down Msk he just hug rano ma and start to mummer with cry ma iam sorry ma sorry ma , I miss my dadi ma I want my dadi , first rano shock with maan outburst , but she just took him in her motherly hug like mother protecting her child , he just called her ma bahot thak gaya hu apne app se , apno se ladker ma , I want happiness , peace ma , want to sleep like muski without any tension but iam world most unlucky person ma , first my mother went to god , than my other relation are just busy to broke down me emotionally , physically , my own father mistook me on words of other that I try to kill my mother , can you believe it ma I try to kill my mother a 5 year boy try to kill his own mother

my mother die in front of me I cant save her and with her I lost my father also he accused me for my mother death , his word his word now also sounding in my ear , my heart , my soul ma ,I swar ma icant kill my mother I am not killer ma , bas dadima thi jo mujper trust karti thi mere liye sabse ladthi thi , and see she also in this condition , maan just took rano hand in his hand and brought her to dadi room and pointed to dadi and say see ma look how she laying hear , she don't know how ia am lonely without her , she don't know , no no she know it but want punish me , because I love her na unko accha lagta hai muje ise tarha tuta hua dekhana /she enjoying to see me like this all broken Ma ye loneliness bardash nahi hota ma please say her come back come back

rano just looking to maan with teary eyes a man who look like steel who have such power and money but how lonlly in his life yes she first angry on him for his act with geet but she know , he is golden heart man who are stranger like geet , me and love muski unconditionally , how he will kill his own mother

Ma , last week my family married my sister , and you know they don't even inform me that they married my sister , wo to main KM ke gate pe pada ,why ma i am that bad ,rano just gasp with maan word and just hug him tight and say don't cry beta don't ,look i am hear na for you , we ill brought dadima back , all going to well you also get all happiness in your life beta , don't cry rano just caressing his back

maan just crying like baby ,his hurt soul just searching peace in this mother hug rano just weep his tear and say chup ho jao beta , ager tumatrii ladli muski jag gayi to humko bhagna padega , just than they heard sharp cry of muski , rano mummer think of devil and devil is hear

maan just glare rano and took musky in his hand poor girl start to cry when she don't saw maan near her after waking up from sleep and when nurse brought her in dadi room , she start to cry more when she saw her papa is crying , she just try to weep maan eyes with her tiny hand , rano just admiring their bounding , this small soul also cant see him in tear , she just say , maan beta don't think yourself lonlly dehko ye Devil hai na ab tumare sath na , Kasi ghur rahi hai muje jaise manine hi data ho tumhe .

maan - ma don't called her devil , she is my musky cutie

rano - cuty tumare liye hamre liye to devil hi hai , i am 100% sure isne tumare dosto ko bhi nahi choda hoga

maan just laugh loudly with rano word he just remember how musky make adi and veer life hell in within second , maan all narrow to rano and both just laugh on musky and dear musky feel so odd men out she just try to hold maan cheek and try to turn his face to herself without any other option she just bite rano ma hand which are on maan shoulder , rano just look her with shock and that room again fill with maan loud laugh

Just than rano say, beta I want to see that monster, just once


maan want to denied but he saw some determination in rano ma eyes he just nodded in yes

just than maan froze in his face he saw geet standing on adjourned door of her and dadi room , don't know from when she standing there , but he saw her face fresh after so many days , some emotions on face , she just come near ma and say meekly wo , wo muskan ka feed time ho gaya hai

a smile come on maan lips it is positive sine of geet , yes he is happy for her , for musky , he just give muski to geet and went from there , rano brought geet and muski to geet room and with so many nakhra , muskan took her feed

Geet - wo wo ma

Rano - Do not stop yourself beta say, what you want

Geet - wo wo ku ro rahe the ma

rano - kone , rano get confused with her qus , than click her she talking about maan she say geet beta , everyone have pain , sadness in their life , he also facing some pain in his life , but one thing is sure he is man of word , never hurt anyone intentionally so don't put any bad thought about him in your mind beta , she really help you and muskan , muskna now become his life now beta , geet just nodded in yes and say ma can I sleep on your lap rano just nodded in yes

other side maan just called his Bg and say arrange rano ma meeting with that B****** and he also coming with her ,veer and adi want to stop but maan say , no I don't think so she will stop , let met her i am going with her so don't worry

Maan - accha veer ab tumara mu kaisa hai

veer -look him with confuse

maan - with serious face , maan say nahi first naina ke sath aham aham and after that kya jor ki padi yaar , sach main hats off doc pinky

veer just bend his head in shyness , a read hue come on his face

adi , dekho mk , kiss karte time pe don't get shy and now shying like girl

but ladki se pitai chi chi

veer - just cried mk say him to stop nahi to he will cry now

maan - but Veer not any game with naina else you have to face Real MSK get it , veer just nodded in yes

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago

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