MG Fate of the unfortunate part 11,12on102 teaser and Note 141,155 - Page 40

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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 7 Geet is traumatized
hope Maan helps Geet out .Maan and Muskaan part was fab ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi please read this

The Sound Of Arrows

Sitting here alone
Staring at the floor
No one calls me good
I'm leaving here today
I did everything you asked
I did everything I could
And all that matters now has gone for good
But if I would fall
Would you then meet
Would you do anything for me
Then I'll suppose you know that I'm let down
And I'll understand I'll be your guy
I'll do everything right tonight
And I'll suppose you know that I'm let down

So I guess you were correct
Now my life is back
No one called me good
I'll leave myself today
Washed up on the shore
Sadder than I was before
I gave up my existence for a better call

So if I would fall
What would you do
Now I mean nothing at all to you
I won't suppose you know that I am let down
And I'll fade away
I'll go to black
I will sleep away tonight
I'll counter attack
You know I am not let down
So now I fell can you see me
1, 2, 3, 4 I am so lonely
If this thing breaks then I'll break down
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Posted: 11 years ago
That's beautiful
Lovy poem
Does show his feelings
Maan I mean

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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 8

Maan just lost in song, he forget all for sometime, he just lost in muski

but one another soul also enjoying this song yes geet also like this lori like medicine to her maan just slowly touch muski where she get injection , with so much care like taking away her pain , with so much difficulty geet and muski went in deep slumber maan voice just give relief to their pain both girl looking so innocent in their sleep , maan just put muski in her cradle and put cover on geet and went to dadima room and ask veer , and adi they done their work

adi and veer just want to show their happiness for maan singing but maan glare and they seal their mouth , veer just mummer in adi ear , Yaar agar Msk ko kabhi border pe beja to ye apni Glare se hi dushman ko maar dega Goli ki zarurut hi nahi padegi yaar / if we send msk in border we don't need any weapon , his angry glare can kill enemy ,adi somehow control his laugh and say msk , He (dev ) in big mess , he don't paid IT , there are property in his name , black money etc , and I start the inquiry thru IT so his all property till now should be seal


veer -Geet is daughter of Mohinder and rano handa , only one child married before 2 year , and her father death is suspicious it is not look normal ,and rano is admitted in XYZ hospital in this same city but I think geet don't know about it and that ba****** don't send one rupee to hospital , that hospital treating rano as charity case , now she is out of danger but some one told that geet and musky no more ...

after marriage in one month dev start to torcher her and first night itself he he send geet to other men's veer say with bending head , his word shaking when he giving information , maan ask him , how he know this detail

oh sham kaka Sham sing with dev in hospital he heard it from dev mouth when doc give him medicine actually sham sing say to doc that treat him without giving Anesthesia and when dev beg for proper treatment sham Singh just tell him to say all about him and geet and when dev tale everything ,Sham kaka just brake his mouth along with his eyes and nose , adi and veer just bite their mouth control their laugh but that room just full with laughter, yes msk laughter , both just watching him like they saw any ghost ... when maan stop his laugh and ask them what ...both just start to laugh and maan joined them and say ye kaka bhi na , just than maan phone start to ring he just attend called and say in angry tone , what the hell you are saying and where are you that time ...he just throw his phone in anger , he just say in veer and adi i have to go KM and please don't ask why


maan just march to his car and within 15 minute he is front of Km , he just hating himself to come their but someone promise make him helpless , he just march to one room it is his father room , his father laying on bed unconscious and doc just checking him , and all his so called family standing in room , all just ignore maan and maan just watching to his father , just than doc say Msk someone , but maan just stop doc say to all , to go out from room

All want to deny, but maan angry eyes all just went from their

Maan now doc says me


Doc -it is attack by someone they just hit their head so much force, and because of that they faint their itself till next 24 hour I can't say anything

Doc - can we admit him in hospital


Maan just cut them say no it is not safe for them you arrange everything in veer house and shift him in his house and I want all this in 15 minute got it , doc just nodded in yes


Maan just called veer, veer want to say no but for maan he keep quite and say yes within half hour maan just reach to veer house with doc


maan just dial his BG and say them , nobody can meet Mr khurana ok

and maan just zoom to hospital

he just went to dadi room


Veer and adi give him disappointment look but he just say not now, I will tell you all but not now , just than they heard muski cry , three of them just run to geet room ,their musky crying in soft voice veer just took her in his hand and just than maan and adi giggle on veer , muski just wet veer , veer make yuck face


Veer , with crying face say kya yaar kiss , hug ke liye MSK and su su ke liye main not fair muskan


Just than muskan just bite his hand with toothless mouth and all burst in laugh maan just took muskan to him and went to dadi room and start to say everything to dadi , he and adi just laughing to veer

veer just say with attitude , don't laugh so much , Msk tumahri Msuki ko to ek din main apani GF banauga and that promise , he just wink to maan

Maan just say with typical Father, Hey don't even think about my muski like that or else ii will brake your all boans get it

adi just come between and say hold hold , she is only 4 month yaar kya baat ker rahe ho

Both just sit in their place, maan just change muskan cloth and start to check her temperature, it is less now, a smile come in maan face and muski just start to play with maan hand she just want to put his finger in her tiny mouth and maan just stopping her

just than maan say to veer give me rano ma hospital address

veer just nodded in yes

Just than Naina entered in room for round, she just ignores them and starts to look to muskan

maan just called her nania

naina - yes sir

maan just irritated with her word sir , he look to veer , they just bend their head and maan got his ans , he just say nanina just lesion us one time

nania just glare to veer , who is looking her with hope

nania - so Sir tell me what you have explanation about Your and your friends cheep act , sorry sorry brave act , so you enjoy geet company that why you helping her so you can enjoy her again...

But her next word died in her mouth maan just slap her

nanina just run from there

Maan just closed his eyes for control his anger but nanina words hurt him so much but he know he make sin

he just tell adi and veer live him alone

maan just took muskan and went near geet with shaking hand just cares her face , just mummer sorry geet I am sorry , sorry , i try to fix it all I try he just crying with holding muskan in his hug , his one mistake

veer just went near naina cabin but he don't have guts to entered in her cabin he just sit near her door and mummer sorry sorry




adi just went to corridor and just crying , naina is really closed to them and now her anger hurt them like anything this four soul always pride of friendship one wrong decision and just they shuttered like pieces

precap

Geet took knife in her hand and just injuring her hand

muskan just crying she just choking because of crying

adi and veer don't know what to do they just dialing phone of maan but he is unreachable

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh teri yeh kya hua
well dev is taken care of
and there is more coming his way
dont tell me her dad was killed
who by though
rano didnt know anything about her daughter and granddaughter
damn he played well that monster
but not anymore
so his dad is ill
as if could give damn
but guess he does
naina dear not that bad
but to slap her maan
oh dear that was bad
and geet what are you doing
maan get back and soon
cheers for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

oh teri yeh kya hua
well dev is taken care of
and there is more coming his way
dont tell me her dad was killed
who by though
rano didnt know anything about her daughter and granddaughter
damn he played well that monster
but not anymore
so his dad is ill
as if could give damn
but guess he does
naina dear not that bad
but to slap her maan
oh dear that was bad
and geet what are you doing
maan get back and soon
cheers for pm





hi thanks for comment kal kaha bhhag gayi night ko

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Posted: 11 years ago
night mein toh i was in laks di thread
i ran
mujhe toh pata hi nahin tha
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

night mein toh i was in laks di thread
i ran
mujhe toh pata hi nahin tha




Yes i replay your every comment but you are not their Mahi 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update thanks 4 pm waiting 4 next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
how is that possible
i did come back
sure i did
damn better check

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