JANWAR {adult content} #2 PART 38/39 pg/132/136 || Dec 15th ||

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#201

Somewhere Geet awakened this lion.. But sammy is her friend na.. ya usko bhi hire kiya hain maan ne Geet ko galat ideas dene ke liye.. Get n bank robbery...??😲😕

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anjalisen85

@anjalisen85

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#202

nice👏👏

geet met sam😊

is sam good or not?😕

feeling sorry for geet😭

what will maan do now?😕

update soon

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mani24

@mani24

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#203

meri jaan di my heart crying seeing our geet in this condition😭 aur di geet ne buhut acha kiya jo us so called ghar main nahi gayi 😡 lekin di she just kept thinking ke ab wht she'll do to let maan not win aur also earn the 3 crores in just one month aur di usi time she just met her best frnd samrat jo use apne saath uske ghar le gaya aur di samrat was a thief aur just like gud frnd she tried to make him come to the right path lekin jab he did not budge tau she was awy from him lekin kabhi bhi police ko uske baare main pata nahi lagne diya just coz he truly loved him like a frnd aur did not wanted to loose him samrat ke itna poochne par bhi she did not tell him anything lekin next morning she went to tharun abhi bhi hoping ke woh uski help karega aur di jab use nahi ki tau di again my heart cried for her ke koi bhi rishta geet ke saath sahi nahi tha koi bhi uske liye uske saath khada nahi howa😭 aur di there maan punished dev for how he let his past come known to geet aur di ek sawal hai ke woh body jo geet ko mili kya woh body maan ke father ki thi kya di 😲 aur di maan is hurt ke geet ne beghair usse kuch pooche using tht body she tried to frame him which brought his past back jise woh bhoolna chahta hai aur di geet she just cried her heart aur told samrat all aur beggeed him to give him 3crores aur di samrat suggested ke geet yeh paise sirf chori se hi haasil kar sakti hai😲 aur di me fearing more ke aapne likha ke some lovestories have blood on them😲😭 aur di aapne sahi kaha ke the song is not telling a love story lekin lust story aur di me still har upate padhkar think ke kaise will our this maaneet love each other irrevocably di dying dying dying for the next update aur di har update ke saath u just make me curious for the update di more curious😊

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harika

@dreamyharika

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#204

posted teaser on my page

https://www.facebook.com/pages/Dreamy-Harikas-Maaneet-Fiction-Paradise/250711911739928

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 11 years ago

#205

interesting update! Well written! Geet is all alone! Did Maan love her? Y does he want to hurt her! update soon

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simran

@Pumpkinseed

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#206

nice part
geet felt lonely but sam came
maan knowing about devs backstabbing

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#207

wow lovely emotional update.. oh god te way geet going were her legs taking as she dont have any one to hold her was lovely emotional.. but listening to her words she met sam her friend was lovely.. te way one side geet is struggling to return my maan ki money but another side my maan planning to trap his geet was lovely...now geet will join with sam?... i love te update so much

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Desire6

@Desire6

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#208

BIT CONFUSED WIT MAANS PAST...
NO PROBLEM ...WAITN FOR NEXT PART...ND ALL LL BE CLEARD...

GEET IS SO ALONE ND HURT N BROKEN...
AAPNE HI GHAR JAANE SAY BHAAGE USEY BURA AUR KYA HO SAKTA HAI...
GOOD SHE GOT SOMEONE WHO REALLY CARES FOR HER...

CONT SOON...
LOVLY UPDATE...
I LK D WAY U HAVE PORTRAYED D CHARACTER N D STORY