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Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.






Part - 37


He looked around and turned to go but he heard a faint sound of banging d door * he concentrated and heard that again ... OMG!!! She was stuck in d lift from hrs ...

His heart came in his throat thinking about her and rushed towards control room to switch on d lift then run down from staircase * he reached at d basement ,, his heart cried out seeing her condition ,, Geet was sitting on lift's floor worn out , scared ,, tears wr flowing from her eyes and when she saw him she cried out his name... M a a n ,,, spreading her arms for him * in a go he cocooned her in his arms and glued her to him in a tight hug kneeling close to her ,,, G e e t ,, Oh God!!! * she was sobbing , coughing and her body was shivering with fear * his eyes too became wet .

Maan scooped her and brought her in d car ,, made her sit in d back seat , gestured driver to move away ,, settled near her having her in his arms and took d water bottle from d car * he told her to drink some water but Geet was clinging to him holding his coat in her fist * she was coughing and chocking * Maan held her close ,, caressed her back face and head to console her * he was chanting Sorry Dear ,, Sorry Geet i left u to go alone ,,, Geet plzz have some water and talk to me ,, plzz Geet see , i'm here ,, u r safe ,, plz calm down .

He wiped her tears ,, ,, cupped her face in his palms ,,, i'm here dear with u ,, sshhh ,, calm down ,, again he secured her in his tight hug giving her a pack on her forehead * he was consoling her * Dadima called him again and he replied that Geet is with him ,, she is fine ,,they r coming home and rest he will say her after reaching there * he very hardly made her drink some water * when she became lil calm and stopped crying Maan called driver to go back home * Geet was all d time was sobbing and clinging to him * he was shocked and clueless that how it happened to her * she was stuck in d close dark lift from hrs and nobody was there to help her * her condition was tearing his heart .

They reached at KV and he took her in his arms and brought her in d hall * Dadima was waiting for them worried for Geet and when she saw them she rushed towards them sensing something wrong .

Dadima: Maan, kya hua Geet ko ?

Maan: Dadima batata hun , 1st let me take her in d bedroom .

Dadima followed them and Maan settled Geet in d bed * Dadima sat near Geet having her hand in hers * Maan was sitting near her ,, caressing her head and forehead .

Dadima asked again and Maan told her everything * Both wr very sad and worried for her ,, she was very quiet , feared and wearied.

Dadima : Maan tum Geet ke pass raho akele matt chodna , wo dari hui hei ,, hum soup leker aate hei inke liye .

Maan: ji Dadima .

He himself was not ready to leave her alone for a sec and he was dying to talk her * her condition was killing him ,, she was so happy and lively from many days and he planned to give her new office next day but everything ruined * right now he just wanted to listen few words from her mouth .

Maan: Geet , tum theek ho na ? Meri taraf deho ,, plz kuch bolo .

She opened her eyes and looked at him ,, blinked many times to stop her tears but he sensed her pain ,, Maan caressed her cheek ,, nodded in a no ,,, i'm sorry , i became late .

Geet( in a cracky voice) : tum ku sorry bol rahe ho ,, it was not ur fault but that feared me ,, i was alone there and if someone ...

Sshhh ,,, don't think bad ,, KC compound mei kisi ki himmat nahi ki tumhe chu bhi deta ,, Maan cut her words and assured her * i don't know who switched off that lift ? It was my fault that i didn't call u or at home .

Geet: i called u but network was not working .

Maan: bas ,, calm down ,, i never send u alone again ,, r u ok now ?

Hmmm ,, and he hugged her ,,, u scared me Geet .

Geet : pata nahi Babaji sari prob mere hi account mei ku daal dete hei ?

Maan: essa nahi hei Geet ,, Babaji hi tumhe prob se nikaal bhi lete hei , he is always with u* he parted and helped her to sit easily in bed .

Dadima brought soup for her * she felt relief seeing her lil normal * she sat near her and handed her soup .

Dadima : tum theek ho na Geet beta ? Hum to ghabra gaye thy ,, Maan age se aap inhe akele nahi jane dena .

Dadima was pouring love on her and Geet's heart was melting with d warmth of their love she felt that she is not alone * d fear and insecurity which she was bearing vanishing slowly * she remembered that how she got her breath back seeing Maan there and he was also very scared and worried for her * she felt a relief in his protective arms * she finished her soup and lay down keeping her head in Dadima's lap * Dadima caressed her head lovingly and packed on her forehead thanking God that she is fine . Maan took a sigh of relief and went to his study for change * he too experienced d fear of losing her * today he realised that she became a integral part of his life * it was a diff thing that she was like a dream for him but he is ready to live with this dream for ever .

Dadima insisted Geet to change and then came for dinner * Get was feeling better now and went to change * Maan requested to bring d dinner in d room * all had their meal in d room with light chat .

Maan: Geet if u r no feeling well then we can postpone d launch .

Geet: no plzz don't do that ,, u all r planning and working hard from last many days and it was very awful for KC to cancel d launch at last moment .

Maan: but i wanted to introduce u for this project there ,, r u comfortable ?

Geet: no plz, i don't want any media attention , try to understand ,, i'll come for u at last but not in front of all businessmen personalities ,, plz .

Dadima: Maan if she is not comfortable then don't force her * Arjun knew her and introduce her to KC only .

Maan: OK , as u wish . lekin party mei to aa jana.

Geet: haan lekin last mei .

Maan: ku, last mei ku ?

Geet: mei theek se chal nahi pati ,, accha nahi lagta ,, wo business party hei ,, plzz .

Maan half heartedly agreed ,, they finished their meal and Dadima retired to her room after spending some time with Maan and Geet * Maan told her to take rest and she too was feeling tired and slept early * He sat near her ,held her hand and told her not to feel scared .

Maan: Geet darra matt karo ,, matt socho ki ab koi tumhe hurt ker sakta hai ,, mai hoon tumhare pass ,, sleep peacefully with sweet dreams * in return she passed a smile to him .

Maan came and checked her many times before going to sleep * he knew that she is scared and could wake up like before but that night her nightmares didn't haunt her * d feel of his protective arms was in her memories and she slept thinking about him .

At night he talked to some ppl and they gave him d positive feedback * they did their work as he want and his winning smile showing that .

Maan: thanks and u'll get ur remaining payment TM at ur add and cut d call.

Maan got many information regarding Dev Kapoor's and his business * nothing belong to him * everything was related to his wife Nayantara who was an only child and Dev was handling her business * he is a big flirt * Maan played his cards and many companies stopped their business with Dev * an undercover po*n star trapped him and send his and her pics at their home and threatened them to make those public on FB but NT paid her a heavy amount coz it was her insult also * NT blamed Dev for all and made his life hell ,, she took all his documents and passport in her custody and threw him out saying .. i love u and gave u a respectable life ,, ignored many things but u cheated me n proved that u r really a blood of a shit ,, get lost from here * he was on road and nobody knows that who is behind all this ?


Precap - launch party and GS in KC officially ...

Part - 38


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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update😊
Edited by jasika08 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hiii babbie.. kal kahaa gum ho gyi thi?? kina waite kiyaa apka humne.. r u all-right na? health is fine na?? or yr kachua maharaj ws upset or what???
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Posted: 11 years ago
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kal kya hua tha... mess bhi nahi choda
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mauaa

hiii babbie.. kal kahaa gum ho gyi thi?? kina waite kiyaa apka humne.. r u all-right na? health is fine na?? or yr kachua maharaj ws upset or what???


😊 Hi Kiddo...
guests aa gaye thy.. SIL..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


😊 Hi Kiddo...
guests aa gaye thy.. SIL..😊


hmmm... or kyaa kiya unke saath.. bahot miss kiya hamne aap ko.. aaj jaldi ud de kr ajao bate krne..😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
emotional update! Maan found her! She is unconscious! Maan worried! He takes her home n takes care of her! He apologises! Hate Sasha! 😡Hope maan finds out! Dadi also taking care of her! Maan makes sure she sleeps well! Maan has all info abt Dev! update soon, well written!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb part
Finally maan found geet...
Geet fine😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
maan found geet
nd geet was also feeling safe when she saw maan
nd love the way dadi nd maan were taking care of her
nd now slowly her fear is vainishing
nd she is becoming more happy and comfortable with maan and dadi
wow dev ko uski galti ki kya saza mil hai
i m thinking sasha ka kya hoga jab maan ko pata chalega lift incident ke baare me
sasha bachke rehna maan tujhe chodega nahi
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Posted: 11 years ago
babbie nice update.. maan kuch zyada hi possesive ho raha hai nai.. bt nw geet hs a family.. so she is also feeling n geting homly treatment which is nice,...😃 aaj k baad mera thoda gussa maan se kam hua.. pr abhi bhi gussa to hai...

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