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Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.




Part - 33


It was Sunday and Maan was at home * all decided to take brunch in poolside lawn in beautiful sunshine * life became happy and cherishable for him after Geet's lil move to make atmosphere friendly though it was lil thing for Geet but a lot for Maan * he was in d pool of remorse and his heart was burdened with guilt so her small soft friendly gesture gave his aching heart peace and relief .

They had their meal with light chit-chat on business and Geet's studies * he came to know that she is very intelligent and did her internship in a good company * she was interested to settle down in US and after this sem wanted to apply for green card ( it is lil easy for d students who is doing their masters and research work there rather than who went there only for job )* she don't have anybody in India so better to live here safe and sound * everything was fine but she was reluctant to live in KV and this thing was eating Dadima and Maan .

At eve all got ready to attend d marriage party * Dadima brought her jewellery for Geet to wear with her lahanga * that was very costly and beautiful and Geet was hesitating to take that but Dadima did some emotional atyachaar and at last Geet agreed * she was trying to hook d necklace when she felt a touch of cold fingers on her neck * she lifted her eyes and find Maan behind her .

Maan: leave ,,, let me help u ,, why didn't u call Dadima?

Geet: she went to get ready .

Both wr looking at each other through mirror and admiring each other * Maan was looking very handsome in that outfit .

Geet u r looking handsome in this dress ,, 1st time i'm seeing u like this .

Maan: thanks , u r also looking like a princess ,, very beautiful .

Geet: sab Dadima ka hei .

Maan: lekin ab to tumne pahane hei to tumhara hei ,, shayad ye tumhare liye hi tha.

Geet: matlab?

Maan: matlab baad mei abhi jaldi karo Geet , we r getting late * he diverted her mind, turned her towards him and set her Maang teeka on her forehead ,,, hmmm Prefect * she gave a shied smile and felt a churn in her tummy looking both in a frame * Maan's heart too did a somersault looking at that angelic beauty but thinking about her was a tabu for him * he had lost her in his selfishness and now she was only a dream for him * he brought her shoes , help her to wear her and then came out .

They came and Dadima hugged her lovingly * she took some Kajal from her eyes and put a black mark behind her ear to save her from evil eye * they reached at d venue where marriage was taking place * Geet was walking with a lil limp coz she can't give full pressure on her plastered leg .

All eyes turned at them * he was holding Geet's hand for support * girl's left a sigh and envoy seeing that hotty with Geet and guys only could quench their thirst from far admiring that beauty * Maan and Geet wr complimenting each other ,, a perfect pair made by God .

Dev was stealing glances of Geet * his flirting nature was forcing him to touch her * he lick his lower lip lustily * Maan , Geet and Dadima met with Arjun , Meera and their parents * Perm was also there and Geet introduced him with Dadima and Maan * they like that jovial guy * they knew many things about him through Geet * they left Geet with Meera and other girls and settled at their table and started enjoying marriage rituals * it took hrs for all big and small rituals ,, Dwaar pooja, jaimala and then pheras * d dinner was started and Maan and Dadima was busy in that while Geet was enjoying with girls and teasing Annie * NT was Annie's friend and she was also showing her extra knowledge and attitude * Geet felt to go for freshen-up so she handed her purse to Meera and went slowly towards restrooms * when she was coming back and passing through a small corridor suddenly she felt a pull * she trembled and was going to fall but two arms held her from waist and then dragged her a lil and pushed her to d wall * that was so sudden that she didn't get that what had happened and who is this person * her eyes widened in shock when that very person clutched her hair from back and tried to captured her lips * she pushed him back with all her force and shouted .. u B****** , how dare u ? She trembled on her feet and tried to get d support from wall * she recognized that he was d same guy who was asking her for a dance two days back .


Dev ,,, who was eyeing on her from d start and wanted a chance to come close to her * he saw her coming to this side * NT was also busy in her group, guests wr in dinner and some wr leaving for home * he followed her and find her alone in corridor .

Dev trembled back with her force but again pounced at her * Geet started abusing him and pushing him back but he was stronger than her * he held her hand and twisted back ,, she yelped in pain * he kissed hard on her neck and bit there * Geet gathered her strength and hit him between his thighs with her plastered leg * he cried , his grip loosened ,, Geet got d chance and pushed him but this thing angered him * Dev pushed her back and hit her head against d wall * she grab his neck and dug her nails in his skin .

On d other side Maan told Dadima to call Geet for diner * both scanned d crowed but didn't found her with Meera and Annie * Maan became tensed thinking that where she went alone * he sent Dadima to ask Meera and himself went out to search her outside * he was looking for her all around and then heard a faint voice which resembled Geet's *He rushed towards that side and his eyes widened and blood boiled seeing that sight * Geet was struggling with a guy to make her free * her one hand was holding his hand and other was on his chest * she dug her nails in his neck and pushing him back .


Maan pulled him from his collar , turned him and started punching him * He was nowhere to stop ,,, wanted to tear him apart ,, Maan held his hand and twisted that very hard and held his throat with other hand ,, Dev chocked when Maan pressed that hard * Dev's nose and mouth wr bleeding * Geet held Maan's hand and pleaded him to leave him .

Geet: Maan, plz chod do usse wo marr jayega ,,, Maan.

Maan: no Geet , i'll kill this B******* ,,,, he touched u with his filthy hands ,, how dare he saw u with dirty eyes ,, i won't live him .
Geet: plzz Maan , chodo usse ,, Maan ,, wo Arjun ka guest hei ,, unka function kharab matt karo ,, chodo usse aur chalo yahan se ,,plzz.

Maan: nahi Geet ,, hatt jao ,, mai esse B****** ko chodunga nahi .

Geet: Maan , chodo usse ,, for god sake ,, wo marr jayega * (she pulled his hand from Dev's neck ) chodo Maan ,, tumhe meri kasam ,, plzz

Maan's eyes wr shooting fire * he was boiling in rage and pushed Dev back * maan looked at Geet with red eyes and she pleaded ,, plzz chalo yahan se * Dev was standing there resting against d wall with uneven breaths ,, his cloths stained with blood and he was trembling with fear * he saw death right before him * Maan encircled his arm around Geet's shoulders and moved away throwing a disgusting look at Dev. He called Dadima and told her to come out with Geet purse * Dadima came there at once and sensed something wrong.

Dadima: Maan , Geet kya hua beta , tum teek ho na ? aur ye Maan etne gusse mei ku hai ?

Maan: we r going back Dadima , abhi.

Dadima: baat kya hei ? kya hua ? (she never saw him this much angry * she looked at Geet and find her very disturbed ) hum Arjun aur uske parents ko bolker aate hei .

Maan: hum bahar gadi mei apki wait ker rahe hei ,, plzz jaldi aao.

Worried Dadima went inside and Maan brought Geet outside * he called driver to come ..


Precap - some argument between Maan and Geet..


Part - 34

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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
geet forums k ulluzzz... aaj ye wala ullu.. i mean my self... has come 1st... hahahahh...

Edited by mauaa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111

hi babie, lakshu, maitri


ohooo... aajjj madam ayi hai.. kyaa baat hai.. ajjj to miss bhi nahi krne diya.. wrna roz miss krte hai apko..😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mauaa

geet forums k ulluzzz... aaj ye wala ullu.. i mean my self... has come 1st... hahahahh...



😆😆 Congo dear...
lo aa gai priya bhi aur lakshu apni trd per hei...😛
dona ka 9th ko exam that.. aur lily ka pata nahi..🥱
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Posted: 11 years ago

lakshmi, ye chidiya itna try kr rahi hai fir bhi aage kyu nahi badh paa rahi?😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111

hi babie, lakshu, maitri


Hi priya...😛
jiju ki nyt aaj bhi..ghanti bjegi ya nahi..??😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mauaa


lakshmi, ye chidiya itna try kr rahi hai fir bhi aage kyu nahi badh paa rahi?😆


😆😆 wo GF per hei ,,, yahin udti rahegi ,jayegi nahi..😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


😆😆 Congo dear...
lo aa gai priya bhi aur lakshu apni trd per hei...😛
dona ka 9th ko exam that.. aur lily ka pata nahi..🥱

thank u thank u...
or dona ka exam date to mene hi btaya tha.. pr wo abb tk nahi aayi/... pata nahi wts wrong..
lily k ghr firse guest aaye hai kyaa?? abb to next time hum sab uske ghar pohch jayege guest bnkr.. kamse km wo baate to krsakegi.. or babbie uss bar aap update if pr matt dena.. humsab ko bed-time story k jese bata dena..mazzaa ayega..😆😆😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mauaa


lakshmi, ye chidiya itna try kr rahi hai fir bhi aage kyu nahi badh paa rahi?😆



use achey se sab k hi tho bolne do😃

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