MG SS - Rakshak - lnk # 2 PG 145

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Nusrat Jahan Mukti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#661

Just awesome ..simply superb all what can I say 👏👏👏👏👏👏
No doubt that I have become addicted for your writing anu dear.You know how to create magic yaar 😳😳😳😳😳
Keep spreading the magic of your writing and I will keep cherishing the moment I read your stories 😉😉😉

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Hinal.94

@Hinal.94

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Posted: 11 years ago

#662

awesome update

omg this mohinder is such a stupid person

he thinks bodygaurds n all are useless n not important

if they arent then u wouldnt be alive when ur enemies try to kill or harm u

n geet she has totally changed from daddy's princess to maan's wife

n maan's family is the worst family anyone can ever have

n his mother is so helpless

but now she blames geet for maan's condition

waiting to see what happens next

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gurti30

@gurti30

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Posted: 11 years ago

#663

oh no what geets dad has done. he should have talked to geet atleast before hurting maan so much but lived the way geet stood for maan and put some sense into her fathers head that ehy a girl would be worried for someone who hurted her in.anyway. what her dad is planning now

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swpna

@swpna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#664

nice parts...liked it...
don't no what geet's dad will do to separate them...
and how will geet face them...

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

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Posted: 11 years ago

#665

Nice part

GEets dad beat maan really making him half dead

Geets behaviour made him think he has to play safe

He is going 2 seperate maneet by hook or crook

BUt geet is no more a child

She too will do all things to be with maan

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jenny

@ajenn

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Posted: 11 years ago

#666

I'm speechless about Maan's character.. knowing his life might be in danger, still he told Mohinder all the truth. He was just being honest to his job..

Mohinder's reaction is expected, he was furious seeing Geet and Maan together... He only want to bash up Maan... And now realising Geet is favouring Maan, he tries to move his card smartly.. He wants to win Geet back...

But it looks like Geet wouldn't fall in her dad's trap..

Please update this soon.. eagerly waiting..

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Micky

@micky11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#667

nice update

geet is in trouble

her father wants to separate

and maan is not thinking anything beyond his duty

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pixelflower620

@pixelflower620

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Posted: 11 years ago

#668

part 7 nd 8 superb updates
u hv really beautifully sketched d character of maan who is honest to his job without caring bout his life he informed mohinder bout thr whrabouts
geet trying to mk maan understand shes his wife
maan feeling guilty nd thinking he deserves d punishment
y dnt he get tht everything is not his fault y cnt he stand fr himself
loved hw geet answered bck to her dad
but d wretched man is planning to separate thm
cnt he see his daughter loves tht man who is now her husband irrespective of thr statuses
waiting eagerly fr d next
plz do cont soon

Edited by pixelflower620 - 11 years ago