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Posted: 11 years ago
Maans family is really disgusting.using his mom to snatch everything from him
and that ronit he dared to slap maan.geet though didnt like but stayed quiet as she was angry on maan
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update asusual.. pr i m waiting for bandhan's update
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome ff..
loving it...
feelin bad 4 maan...
cant wait 4 nxt part
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Posted: 11 years ago
gr8 stuff but such a weak maan in definitely difficult to digest...
am waiting for this ss to move on fast to knw who the real rakshak is...
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Posted: 11 years ago
congrats for new stories interesting
maan geet BG n geet like his way of work support him too
but when maan save her she idiot supprt her frd
yeh rich log sirf naam k achey hotey hai kamm k nahi
their employe loyality koi mayney nahi rakhti just like geet n her father
next time is ronit ki achi band bajana
n maan family chiii
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Posted: 11 years ago
this new story of urs is as good as all other stories n i liked this concept very much...n eagerly waiting for the turning point in maaneet's life
till now the best part i felt about the story is different shades of each character be it Geet, Maan or Mohinder...the characters are really dynamic luking forward for the update😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
poor maan
people are testing him n pushing him to his limits
but once he loses his anger n control over it they all are going to bear his brunt
n this ronit is going to get 1 day pakka

waiting for next
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Posted: 11 years ago

yiiipiieee
kitna tym lagega?
i want a looonnnggg updt😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 3

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Maan for next few days only concentrated on his work. He completely avoided coming face to face with Geet.

2 days , 3 days passed and Geet being used to him started missing his presence

"Come on Geet, chill pill, he is just your bodyguard." She explained herself.

"OK, that day a little too much happens but it happens everyday with most of the employee, so what's a big deal and he is just a bottom level employee so you don't need to give him this big importance in your mind."

Whole week passed and Maan was at his work but again, out of her sight.

Geet was also busy with her studies and college.

Ronit had completed his grads and has joined business of his father. But he never missed giving Geet a visit. Picking and dropping her was out of question, Geet was way too independent for that.

Two weeks passed and friends again planned for a gathering, this time in disc. This was best chance for Ronit to gain confidence in Geet and Mohinder.

All friends again had full fun and they again had Dance dinning and drinks... and Dance and drinks just over took everything.

It again got late night. Ronit was again in sense and forwarded his hand to help Geet. But as he was about to make fully drunken Geet in car, Maan appeared.

"So, you were watching us" "It's my job sir" "Now, do I need your permission to drop Geet"

"No sir." "Better, it's good you now know your place"

Maan quietly gave him space. But unknown to Ronit Maan was following them. Ronit safely dropped Geet at her place. This was chance to gain everyone's confidence.

And he did. Geet called Maan in her room

"So Ronit safely dropped me yesterday. Now do you realize how much at fault you were."

"Yes Mam" and Maan started to leave. "Maan" "yes Mam"

"well, we, esp I was little too harsh on you that day and Ronit should have not used his hand"

"Mam, I am fine." "Then why do you avoid me these days"

"Mam, I am in no place to have guts to avoid you. I should concentrate on my work and always remember my limit. This job is very impt for me and I don't want my any silly act, to make me lose this job."

Maan left leaving Geet wondering.

Now Ronit gathered all his friends and they made a plan. "Boyz this time we will have no chance of mistake. Now it's high time I have her. Mohinder uncle is looking for suitor. I am now fed up."

"My lust for her and her property, mean having her whole in all ways for me is my mission and I am going to be successful. You all will get your reward but the plan should be successful"

They all agreed. It was like junon on Ronit - She and everything she has is so unreachable to all and so he will make her his in all very way.

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Geet was at Ronit's place "so busy with new work load"

"Not actually, we boyz have planned for a trip" and he saw her reaction "Why only Boyz"

Ronit smiled within "Actually its so much hussel bussel with girls in such trip. Unke nakhre uff, we boyz are fine"

"Ronit, don't challenge, I can manage in any kind of trip without any Nakhra. I am smart and todays girl, I can manage in any situation"

"You? You are a princess Mam, not suitable for such trips" "I am suitable and I will accompany, what kind of trip is it anyways"

"It's a village trip with mountains and valleys, adventurous, you know" Ronit knew, Geet cannot leave any challenging and adventurous trip.

"I am in, you want it or not" "No other girls but, I don't want any.."

"Ok Ok, no other girls" She promised. "and not your Bodyguard too"

"No my Bodyguard will be there Ronit. If dad comes to know I am gone on such trip without him, his job is gone"

"ohh come on Geet, why are you worried about his job"

"I am Ronit, because I know how important it is for him. And no arguments in that or else I am out"

Ronit got scared with that, Ok he will handle Maan but Geet was the main purpose of this trip.

After few days:

They were all ready for trip and Maan was on the following car behind Geet. He never looked at her or her friends directly, giving her the full space to enjoy.

They took all adventurous route and it was evening when the stopped in the area.. It was hills and valley in between. The village looked to be populated more on valley, hill was little isolated.

"Ohh wow so adventurous Ronit." Ronit smiled and gave meaningful look to his friends.

After putting tents and relaxing a little

"you know Geet, there down the village, they make something very unique and delicious. Like if we are doing a night stay here we should not miss that speciality."

"Then lets get it.." "No, we can't. Car drive has very twisted route and walking down there at this point .. na na. But its not worth missing"

"Wow, now I want to give it a try" "well there's one way, if you trust your friend, you can send ur BG for it. We can take care of you for that while atleast"

"Offcourse, it didn't come to my mind. I just want to try it at any cost if it's so unique"

And then Geet forced Maan to go bring it. Maan denied so many times, something did not sound correct to him. But Geet never could think wrong about Ronit and it was not a big deal if Maan goes away for this small while.

"Mam please I can't go. What can be so special." "Special or not, I am asking you to bring and go do it. You mean Ronit and my friends can't care for me for such small while"

"No Mam, it's not like that but" "If you don't go you are losing this job now." She hit his weakest point.

Maan consoled himself "I will go in jiffy and come back. Nothing will happen so soon"

Maan had walked down for 20 minutes and village still looked more 20 minutes down. Something did not feel correct to him. By the time he takes it and come up...ok coming up will take even more time... it is total affair of 2hrs. No this is not right. "let my job go but for one job I can't risk what I am intuiting "

He turned back and started marching upward to the hill. It was tedious, he was getting tired. He was trying to walk as fast as he could but his legs were giving up. But still he kept running as fast as he could. He reached the hill and dashed to the Geet's tent as he was shocked to see his nightmare coming true.

All Geet's clothes were thrown and Ronit was all on top of her. She was stuggling and he was crushing her "Mam!!! " and Ronit felt a strong punch.
Ohh she had nothing on,"Maa-aan" she hugged him, he turned not to look at her in this condition and quickly wrapped her with his shirt.

"how dare you come so soon" but again there was strong punch on his face and blood was oozing out of Ronit's face.

Ronit's friend as per plan brought the villager but instead of seeing Geet with him as per his plan, they saw Geet with Maan.

Geet had no sense and she was hanging on to Maan while Maan was holding her tight. The dirty words and plan that Ronit had poured was ringing in her mind and she felt she will pass out but she held on.

She was a strong girl and will never let Ronit successfully play.

Ronit, immediately changed his game plan.. he knew this was a most conservative and fundamentalist village. He wanted to show them that Geet and he were making out and he knew they will force Geet to immediately marry him here itself. This is how they punished. He knew there were chances of him getting beaten but he had planned story to escape from it too..

But now Geet was with Maan and this is how villagers looked at them.

Villagers were in mob, they separated Maan and Geet and struck Maan with the stick. They had swords too with them. In just a minute they were all over Maan with stick

"stop everyone" Geet shouted. And in rage someone also threw stone on her "You low women, you have come here to dirty our village" they shouted

"Don't say a word to her" Maan shouted, she is pure. Geet looked at him in shock, how can he say she is pure.

But before Maan could say more Ronit interrupted

"Yes villagers, she is pure. This man has abused her. Do you see how he was holding her and how he is shirtless"

Geet looked even more shocked at Ronit but her own mind was only working on not making Ronit successful in his evil plan.

"You all should punish this man. And I know for you all this girl is at fault. So I am ready to marry her now in front of you all. Please leave her." He became like angle in front of Villagers.

The crowd again started to beat the hell out of Maan. Blood was oozing out from every part of his body, his head, leg, body everywhere.

But all he kept shouting was "Do not hurt her she is pure." He knew no one was here going to listen his story so he opted for just saving her.

"No way I am marrying this man" she shouted as villagers started pulling her to marry Ronit.

But no one was listening . Geet helplessly looked with pleading eyes towards helpless Maan.

Ronit was having his laugh within - This turned out even better.

"just leave him. He is innocent." But villagers were angry "if he is innocent then you guys were making out."

"No" she showed Ronit "This man abused me" she shouted.

"Bhalai ka jaman nahi. This poor boy is ready to help this girl by marrying her and she is blaming him." They now even started attacking Geet.

Maan could not see the scene. Already she is mentally harassed now . He could see no option, villagers were not ready to listen against angel Ronit... so there was only one option to save her

"She is pure, I misbehaved with her" Geet could not believe her ears. What was this man.

Maan pleaded her in signal to not say a word, it was so sincere plead she could not deny.

Crowd again started their attack on Maan as other group started pulling Ronit and Geet

"Stop.I will marry him " she showed at Maan. Maan looked at her surprised. Geet showed him Ronit and pleadingly signaled in NO.

"You are ready to marry your abuser and not your savior"

Maan signaled for no, no he didn't deserve her but Geet was constantly pleading him to not send her with Ronit. He cannot let Ronit's intention be fulfilled.

"I will marry her" Ronit was shocked at the turn of events.

Villagers tied both Maan and Geet to the pole and went for decision. In any case if these two are involved then it's better to get these two get married. They got ready for Maan and Geet marriage but not again after leaving Maan half in dead condition.

Ronit seeing the dangerous condition and turns of event flew from the scene. But his mind was already working. He will not lead this small incident ruin his plan.

Geet's eyes were all this time just stuck on Maan.

He was on verge of fainting but he was holding on - just for her. In this time of supreme distress and cruelty of life she was seeing things in complete different light. All status, money, power, luxury are all temporary for life. The truth of her life was this man, who ruined himself in all ways just for her. He still does not have any idea that he has saved her from being r*****. He saved her in all way and ruined himself in all ways.

Next: Marriage vows and new unknown journey starts

Please like and comment dearies...😊
-Anu
Edited by tellyme - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update..
maan is such a pure hearted person..even after all she said to him, he was there for her when she needed him..great characterization of maan, even after getting insulted, he didn't back away from his duty..
geet is also not wrong, you always trust your friends more but she did fail in understanding both of them..
and this ronit, what people has she chosen as her friends..his friends were also supporting him in his evil deeds..
Thank god, maan returned half way and he was there to protect her from ronit and the villagers..maaneet getting married..thats better atleast not marrying ronit..
how his family n her father will react to it..his family may support him just for the money geet may bring with her..
more worried of mohinder's reaction..hope he doesn't comes in ronit's talks..and trusts his daughter if not maan..
waiting for next part eagerly..
good thing, atleast geet know about maan's pure and unselfish heart..hope they will be together to face the storms that will be coming..
Please update soon😃😃

Edited by -misty--love- - 11 years ago

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