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Posted: 11 years ago
updated comments on pg 31 and 49
Sowie for delay.. was writing😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



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THE OYYEE FACTOR




Maan and Brij... both hot blooded persons... when ever both used to meet had made the surroundings echo with the "oyyee" sounds...Whether it was when maan carried an unconscious geet to her home... or when he came to their house for geets signatures...


Geets constant denial of not signing the papers and her zidd for justice was taking a toll on Brij ... He and daarjee wished to close this geet matter permanently... and they found just a solution.. her remarriage...


Brij met maan and offered him not only the land which he had purchased but more land to him on a condition that maan will marry geet!!!


Maan reached handa haveli with some villagers to give his answer for the proposal!! He insults geets family saying that they tried to sell off her for mere land!! The family who was unaware of brijs proposal are shocked at this...Brijs "oyyee" again comes in between... and even a fight occurs between maan and brij!!


Maans harsh words against her family was hard for geet to take...Angrily she signs off all the papers and throws them on maan...Maan leaves with the papers...


Back in house daarjee pounced on geets dad saying that all the insults which he had to face today is because of his daughter... if he had known that geet would be such a curse for their family, he would have killed her at the birth itself...


Daarjee even shut geets taijis words that , it was not geet but brij who is the cause of this shame... as he was the person who tried to sell off geet in the mask of marriage... his decision to remarry geet just strengthened with these incidents...

To be contd...


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Oyeee... Mast update Aunty...
bus picture thoda karab hai... aur mera parde clean hai ... dhul nahi hai uspar 😉😆
Geet ko bevaja hi sara dosh de diya ... uff...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

updated comments on pg 31 and 49

Sowie for delay.. was writing😳



no need of sorry yaar...

thanks for the comments😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
@jeev

pic epi se liya hain.. future pics tumhaare diye hue link ke video se hi loongi... it has all epis na??
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

@jeev

pic epi se liya hain.. future pics tumhaare diye hue link ke video se hi loongi... it has all epis na??

yep it has...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
I love the Oyeee!!!
There was once an OS written by Mrs. Phuarana. I will find you the link. One of the funniest thing I read on Maan and Brij😆
Loved the creation.
Have to say Bezaad Khan is an amazing actor. In only a few scenes he made his character a fixed image in our heads.
Thanks for updating😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

First, I love this song.

It fits perfectly in this part.
The situation was beautifully explained. Everyone was working in their own frame of mind. Where was the victim supposed to go with this?
Lovely work on the creation. I loved the shading and the pictures you picked for her.
Thanks for updating Lakshmi.😃



even i love this pic... there r many pics which i make,but dont like much especially the collages... but when i get more pics for a particular scene and couldnt decide which to choose and leave, i go for collages so that i can include all...


so this leaves some pics which r close to heart... this is one among them... thanks for liking it😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

I love the Oyeee!!!

There was once an OS written by Mrs. Phuarana. I will find you the link. One of the funniest thing I read on Maan and Brij😆
Loved the creation.
Have to say Bezaad Khan is an amazing actor. In only a few scenes he made his character a fixed image in our heads.
Thanks for updating😃



my hands where just itching to make this one when i saw both fight... and i loved the name so much... oyyee factor😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
lakshu aaj editing mein picture kuch achi nahi lagi

may be the clarity of the picture teek nahi hai issliye mujhe itna effective nahi laga
Edited by priya111111 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
😆 This is my reaction, Di over the title and some the narration. The oyee Factor - 🤣 I liked today's update! Mazaa aaya! Nice of you to put some humour during such stressed time in the story! This is one thing I love - people putting comic scenes during sad scenes! I myself wrote such scenes during sad time in DFL and let me tell you readers appreciate it a lot! So thank you for bringing the humour quotient while we are facing the tragic times on behalf of Geet! Loved today's work!

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