MG~ SS~The Torment --Thread 4-UPDATED Pt 29/Pg103/5th Mar. ... ... . - Page 59

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mauaa

hiii friends.. babbie, lakshmi, priyaa, lily, dona..😃


😃 HI KIDDO...🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mauaa

Maan: geet, kyaa krr rahi ho itni raat ko yaha bethe bethe.. jabb me late night kaam krta hu to mujpe to bada chillati ho.. mu fulake beth jaati hoo.. or tumhe manane k chakkr me mera extra work bhi badh jaata hai.. abb chalo jaldi sone..


Geet : maan, wo kyaa hai na, muze abbb jake pata chala aap ko kitna kaam hota hai or mere wajeese aap usme concentrate nahi krpaate.. to aaj mene socha chalo aap ko aaj raat kaam krlene deti hu.. fir hum saath me sone chalege.. jaaye.. kaam krlijiye..
maan: r u sure?? ok.. fine.. i'll b back.. thnx...
Geet thinking: abb inko kese batau ki me to babbie k story update krne ka waite kr rahi hu.. wese to maan muze kabhi shopping le jane ki galti kabhi nahi krte, lekin ye babbie ki story me wo aaj hame shopping pr bhejne wali hai.. ye moka kese chod du.. hakikat na sahi imagination me to me maan k saath jau shopping krne.. pr ye babbie kaha reh gayii hai yaar???


😆😆 I love it kiddo...muaahh..
LOL...

Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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For banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi...🤗


Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.






Part - 28



Geet gave a bright smile to him which filled his heart with immense pleasure * he can do anything for this smile .

Geet: tum ku pareshan hote ho mai cab se chali jaungi na .

Maan: cab se ku jab mai ja raha hu sath mei .( he was confused with her reply)

Geet: lekin tum to daily site office nahi jaatey na , tumhara office to SF mei hei.

Maan nodded disappointed: Geet mai site office ki nahi KC office ki baat ker raha hoon ,, mere sath mere office chalogi ,,, mujhe help ker dena ,, hmmm ?

Geet: mai or KC ???

Maan: ku , kya prob hei ?

Geet fumbled: wo ,, Arjun ko accha nahi lgega ,, mai uski Co mei job kerti hu na?

Maan: just for few days ,, u r feeling bore that's why and i'll inform Arjun , u don't worry .

Geet: lekin mai wahan kya karoongi ,, mera field diff hei ?

Maan: finance se related kaffi kam hei aur new projects ki plans aur blue prints hei , study kerna ,, aage help kerega tumhe.

Geet: mai to chali jaungi hostel kuch dino mei ,, bas 2 months ke liye aai thi yahan ,, hostel mei nahi raha sakti thi na, esliye Arjun ne ye job de di thi meri help ke liye.

Maan: kya tum ab ye job chod dogi ?

Geet: haan ,, aage ke liye maine abhi baat nahi ki ,, after college time kuch hrs ke liye wo mujhe job dena like karega ya nahi ,, ye pata nahi ?

Maan: Geet do u want a job after college hrs ?

Geet: umm ,, I don't know ,, nothing is decided.

Maan: Geet how r u managing ur expenditures and fee?

Geet: I got 80% scholarship from Uni and I have sufficient saving which my parent had left for me,, but after sem , job is must to survive in this costly city.

Maan: Geet r u comfortable with study and job ?

Geet: uummm,, yeah ,, i'll manage .( she replied shrugging her shoulders)

Maan's eyes brightened and a smile crept on his lips : OK , TM u r coming with me to kill ur time in KC ,, get ready on time and I don't like lazy bones.

Geet: kya ye theek hoga?

Maan blinked in assurance giving her a killer smile .

Maan: now sleep , u have to get up early.


Next day Geet woke up early and got ready but she was very feeing very odd situation ,, 1st she was in Indian dress and 2nd Maan was MD of KC and she was an employee * she was sitting with a fall face on d bed when Maan entered there .

Maan: ready Geet?

Geet: wo ,,, Maan, it doesn't look nice if I go with u in this dress ,, I don't have formals here ,, aur wo itna bada office hei .

Maan crossed his arms and gave her a look : agar boss ko koi prob nahi to tumhe ku hei ? Geet tum employee nahi ho,, mere sath ja rahi ho as a family member ,, Dadima saree mei jaati hein to tum suit mei ku nahi ,, ab chup-chap chalo ,, ya darr gai .

Geet: hwww,, mai ku darungi ? Wo to mai tumhare status ko dekhker kaha rahi thi.

Maan came close to her and held her from her shoulders ,, make her stand and looked in to her eyes painfully * he spoke in a deep voice.

Maan: mera status tumhare samne kuch nahi hei Geet ,,, ye power aur high status mere Gunah ko kam nahi ker sakta ,, bahar ki ye duniya tumhare aur mere ess sach ko nahi janti Geet ,, esliye unki nazaron se mujhe matt dekho bas Geet ban ker dekho .

Geet's heart melted seeing him this much vulnerable * d man of attitude MK standing in front of her with lower head and eyes * she gave him a weak smile and try to cheer up his mood .

Geet: Maan, esse kamjor insaan ke sath mujhe kam nahi kerna ,, Geet un logo ko pasand kerti hei jo apni galti bhi ser uthaker accept kertey hei ,, KC ke MD mei etne to attitude hona chahiye .

Maan: accha attitude wala boss chahiye ?( he asked with raised eyebrow)

Geet: hummm,, akhir GS ke standerd ka sawal hei .( Geet replied in same manner )

Maan: chalo dikhata hoon MK ka attitude miss GS.

He held her hand and brought her in dinning hall where Dadima was waiting for them * all took their BF and Maan informed Dadima about Geet.

Dadima: Maan , le ja rahe ho to dhyaan bhi rakhna .

Maan: ji , waise aap reminder hei na .

Dadima: jiii ,, esiliye aapko daily lunch ke liye remind kerwana padta hei ,, aap ko kuch jyada hi dhyaan rahati hei.

Maan: ab hum chalen ??

Dadima: OK , Geet beta be careful .

Geet: ji Dadima,,, bye.

Both came out and settled in d car's back seat * first time Maan was going out with Geet * she was sitting next to him * her fragrance was refreshing him ,,an unfaded smile was adoring his face and he was looking at her now and then * her moving locks wr playing with her soft cheek and her big ear rings wr moving swiftly with a lil jerk of head * when she find him looking at her she passed a beautiful smile and he returned with same * a perfect start of d day . In mid way Maan called Romeo and ordered him to meet near backside luggage lift in d office building and gave some more instructions .


They reached in d premises of d office and both came out * Maan helped Geet and both came in d back side where Romeo was waiting for them .

Romeo: MK why this side ?

Maan: start d lift .

Romeo: OK , hi GS ,how r u ?

Geet: hello , i'm fine .

The entered in d lift and reached at d back corridor of Maan's office * they entered in d office and Maan settled Geet in d sofa * it was like a small living room .

Maan: Geet , plzz sit here comfortably ,, i'm coming in few min , hhmm .

Geet: OK .

Maan left from there with Romeo * Geet looked around ,, d room was beautifully decorated ,, all white ,, there was a cabinet in d wall and dressing area in a corner * d room was divided by a designer glass partition with net curtains ,, Geet admired his choice and then got busy in her ipad.


Precap --- something is burning ,,, but what ?😳


Part - 29
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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
maan ne geet ko convince kiya office aane keliye😳😳not bad and they both became comfortable with eachother and geet even shared about her job problem. lagtha hai ab maan ki dimaag mein kuch aagaya hai geet ki job ko lekar


precap burning kahi yeh sasha ki burning tho nahi na😉
Edited by priya111111 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
maitri dekho teri place choot gayi hai😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111

maitri dekho teri place choot gayi hai😆


😆😆 savdhani hati,, durghatna ghati..
aaj wo ye funda bhool gai..😆😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


😆😆 savdhani hati,, durghatna ghati..
aaj wo ye funda bhool gai..😆😉


esi koi baat nahi hai/... wese bhi me coment dene tak rukne to wali nahi.. kyu khamkha place rakhu.. me to chali thodi der me sone..😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mauaa


esi koi baat nahi hai/... wese bhi me coment dene tak rukne to wali nahi.. kyu khamkha place rakhu.. me to chali thodi der me sone..😛




😆rukho kya huwa aaj kal itni jaldi jaarahi ho
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111




😆rukho kya huwa aaj kal itni jaldi jaarahi ho


yaar jane do wo baat hi.. roz 7to 6 colege me hi ho jate hai.. ate ate 7-7:30.. fir hw yaa or kuch kaam hota hi hai.. thak gayii hu..😭

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