MG~ SS~The Torment --Thread 4-UPDATED Pt 29/Pg103/5th Mar. ... ... . - Page 28

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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice story dear.. Read it in one go..👍🏼
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aaj main nahi aayi choti ko motions tha morning se tho usse ke saath thi main
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Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.





Part - 25

After all of this is over , all that will really matter is how we treated each other...

Maan sat near her and wiped her wet eyes nodding in a NO but in her dismay she wrapped her arms around his neck and whimpered * he held her tightly close to him to console her ... Geet .

Geet in sobs : ku sabne mujhe akele chod diya ?

Maan: sshh bas Geet , dekho mai bhi to akele hoon ,, hummm.

Geet sobbing: tumhare paas to Dadima hei na ,,, mere paas to koi nahi hei Maan .

Maan: essa ku sochti ho Geet ,,, tum bhi Dadima ko apni Dadima samajh lo .

Geet: lekin wo to tumhari Dadima hei na ,, meri kaise hogi ? Tumhari Dadima bahot acchi hei ,,, mere dadrji ne to mujhe maara aur bahot galat bola mere aur mom ke bare mei ,, sabne mujhe danta Maan ,, bas Rajji ne help ki ,, ab to usse bhi baat nahi ker sakti ,, sab khatam ho gaya ,,, marr gai mei sabke liye Maan.

Maan chocked listening her painful blabbering and her sobs wr tearing his heart * he glued her tightly to him * after controlling himself he consoled her .

Maan: Geet tum akele nahi ho , Maan hamesha tumhare sath rahunga tumhara Saya banker * apne aap ko kamjor aur akele matt samjhna.


He made her lay down on bed properly taking her in d citadel of his protective arms * he lovingly caressing her back , head and face ,, whispering softly ..so jao Geet ,, don't think about past which only gave u pain ,,, me and Dadima r always with u ,, u r not alone and weak .

Geet mumbled in her drowsy state with sob: tum bhi chod doge ,,, Dadi bhi ,, sab chod denge Geet ko.

Maan: sshhh,, koi nahi chogega ,,, so jao ,, mai hoon tumhare paas ,, hamesha.


Pacca,, sacchi ,, haan pacca ,, promise ,,, haan promise ,,, pretty promise,, haan meri pretty girl, pretty promise( he chuckled) , now sleep ,, mai pretty girl ,,, haan , ab so jao ,, tum jaana nahi ,,, nahi sleep ,,, Maan,, Geet chup, so jao, GN ,, He placed d finger on her lips to make her shut * she slept soon holding his collar in her hand like a kid * Maan remained like that for few min and parted when she slipped in deep slumber .

Maan: I know Geet ,u r in d effect of Brandy and this is a dream for me which is meant to be broken * thanks for giving me these beautiful moments .

He got up , covered her properly and came in his study to sleep * he was in d spell of d moments and slept with a sweet smile feeling her close to him .

Now a days his life was very busy but he was very happy * a small positive response from Geet filled him with life * he craved for her smile and felt blessed when got that .


Next morning Geet woke up with some relief in her cold though she forgot what she said to Maan but she felt a warmth in her heart remembering his care * a smile crept on her lips * she cuddled in d blanket taking a long breath * his fragrance was still there in her clothes and pillow .

Maan got up , got ready and came to her help * she was already awaken * he wished her GM and asked about her cold .

Maan: so how r u feeling now pretty girl?

Geet looked at him confused talking to her like that * he never spoke this much freely . Maan sensed her confusion and chuckled and sat near her on d edge of d bed.

Maan: uthna nahi hei ya abhi bhi Brandy ka asar hei ?

Geet with a big O : Maine kuch gadbad ki kya ?

Maan tickled her nose tip : thodi si , but I like that .

Geet: hwww sorry,, per mujhe kuch yaad nahi .

Maan: Geet don't say sorry , u didn't do anything wrong but I assured u that u r not alone and weak * though it is tough for u to believe on my words but it's true and u took promise from me .

Geet looked at him puzzled she understood that she blabber something last night and felt embarrassment.

Maan: esse matt dekho pretty girl , u wr so sweet and innocent last night ,, plzz remain like that .

Geet looked at him puzzled not getting anything but it was sure to her that she had said something to him .

Geet : agar maine kuch galat kaha ho to ,, sorry

Maan placed d finger at her lips nodding in a NO .

Maan: Geet kabhi bhi mujhe sorry matt kehna ,, never.

He tried to change d topic and divert her mind saying ... Geet BF ke liye late ho raha hei come get ready ,, mai Dadima ko bulata hoon * he scoop her and brought her in WR and called Dadima .

Dadima made her a totally Indian girl * she brought her Indian dresses to wear in home * tied her hair in a plait in which Geet looked very sweet and sober ,, a pretty Indian girl * they took their BF and Maan settled her in d lobby and Dadima got busy in other work * Geet saw d date and remembered that her sem result had to come in these days * she sent Nakul to bring her lappy from her room to check her result * he brought that and she started searching * she got what she was expecting ,, d result was declared and she scored well even she was in top five * in her happiness she shouted ...Dadima ... Dadima .

Dadima was stunned listening her enthusiastic voice and she addressed her Dadima first time * Dadima came near her even Maan too rushed there listening her loud voice .

Maan: what happened Geet , r u ok ? why r u shouting ,, kya hua?

Dadima: kya hua beta ?

Geet: my sem result is out and i'm in top 5 * she was very happy after long time.

Maan N Dadima: relly , it's gr8 .

Both congrats her giving her side hugs * Dadima at once declaired to celebrate it * she called Nakul and told him to prepare special lunch but Maan offered to go out * Geet denied that she won't go out with d plastered leg and at last Dadima's idea was finalized * she herself made choco mouse and Nakul prepared Indian and Italian food for lunch * this lil thing filled whole KV with happiness and all faces wr smiling .

At afternoon when Nakul brought juice for Geet he shared his feelings with Geet.

Nakul: Geet ma'am thanku so much ,,, u brought happiness in this deserted KV after many months otherwise there wr only silence and pain in house and in d hearts ,, thanku.

Geet looked at him awed and passed a smile in return * she too realized that today she shared her feelings and happiness with others after long * she was feeling very light and contented .


Precap ----some more family moments ...


Part - 26

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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: singh24



😊 plzz give me 2 posts space..

finally given😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
ahaan pretty girl😳😳😳😳chalo kam sekam geet ne apna dard share kiya maan se brandy ki effect se tho hi sahi aur maan ne uskpar ab poora ka poora latoo bangayahai😆😆😆

now geet started to share her happiness with dadi and maan
Edited by priya111111 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


arey waah kya baat hai valli aaj tune baazi maari😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111



arey waah kya baat hai valli aaj tune baazi maari😆😆

yup...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago



😆😆usually maitri says agar priya di hothi hai tho kisi ko chance hi nahi milthi hai😆😆

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