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Mahimaan

@Mahimaan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#561

Originally posted by: Susegad

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Those smileys express you perfectly😆
Kaha se uthaye yaar
They are hilarious😆

thanks to Google 😉

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usha

@ushankitvc

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Posted: 11 years ago

#562

awesum...loved the name callling fr going to washrooom...loved it a lot...continue sooon

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Susegad

@Susegad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#563

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz
Nishaaa jiii 🤗

Ishhh!!!😳

Kitttu subah subah maar dala mujhe posting such pics😉

Hi Jaaneman

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KittuPratzz

@KittuPratzz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#564

Originally posted by: Susegad

Ishhh!!!😳
Kitttu subah subah maar dala mujhe posting such pics😉
Hi Jaaneman
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Aur aap.. 😳appke updates se.. my night turned out beautiful...😃

if one express with words.. and other should do with expressions 😉

Ishhh... ☺️

i guess u know aash of shackles of love.. even she is Fawad phanka.. 😆

she posted this pic in fb..and i chorified 😛😆

BT 😃 awww... lovely update.. what else i can offer nisha ji...except praises!!!

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Susegad

@Susegad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#565

/\ Of course I know aash😃

And is there anybody who is not a pankha of Fawad after they knowing about his existence on earth😲

Fawad rules😉

You read BT? I did not know.😆

I know you read the other story but this one was my first attempt majorly different form the other story.😛😛

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Mishti

@mishtimohabbat

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Posted: 11 years ago

#566

Taareef aisey ki Aapne ke hum fidaa hogaye.. 😳 ⭐️ I feel like I'm the best reader ever Hehee...
And you praise my writing too much ..I just saw your comment on my comment on Web of Love lol ... I haven't reached there yet to reach the same stage as you and other writers..where dialogue writing and scene description is all in an effortless flow... I'm still on description on expressions and reflections of emotions .. Gaaddii abhii door chalna hai..
If my words make you strive towards better penmanship then I'm truly honoured! A small note of thank you is sometimes an enough inspiration to write a whole chapter but a small description of your own brilliance inspires u to do better then its a treat on my side for me !!

Your manifestion of real and fictional characters really does click so well with us and sits so well in the story that im well and truly heads over heels in love with your work ..so Fikar not ..my feelings won't sway any other way hehehe...

You are suggesting I write something for you !!! For your story ?! That's too much of gratitude for me to take in ... I won't be able to match up with your pace and carry on the baton to win the relay but for you some day I will write a small concoction of my imagination for your 'Binding Ties' ... Waada zarroor par.. Kasam Nahii 😳

Mamma Mirri .. Mamma Mirri... Anatakshari of the night !! And what a creative one too !! And the fact that its been taken from your real life makes it even better !! This lil big mouth Pixie can really stir up some trouble for her Sheru... I'm just sure that the trouble she will involve her Sheru and Mamma in will make those lists of logics bow down to the laws of gravity of unexplained Love...

How long was the night Suse ?!! ( If I may call you that ..not sure how to pronounce your pseudonym 😳 ) ... Itne ghante dishum dishum then Ho-haa waali haatha paayii aur phir bhi Raat khatm hi nahii hui 😆 ... White shirt...jeans ..disheveled hair and bechain ankhiyaan... Uff what a delightful sight he makes .. if only his bechaini ki wajah could see this from her balcony... I am not doing tareef of your Heroine ..kyunkii hero ne kuch kasar hi nahii chodi Hehee... That's all he saw behind his lids .. her transparent emotional and perfection personofied beauty...

On a side note ... What I wish to see... I will dwell on, on my next comment ... Yeh waala bhi much zyaada lamba hua jaa raaha hai ..

And to answer yoir previous question ... No translations are needed for me ..I'm well verses in the lingo .. but haan a confusion I had whilst reading this chapter .. please clarify : why does Mirri talk in Tum to her mum ... 😳 Woh samajh nahii aayaa ... I am only acquainted with Aap or Hum... Tum is rarely used,so not sure when ?!

Waiting for another update as always
👏 Thank you for such a delightful read...and for being so unreservedly open, kind, receptive and exceptionally humble ... 👏

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punam2712

@punam2712

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Posted: 11 years ago

#567

Damn it!! Enough was enough. He was not in love with Geet Handa.

FINALLY AFTER TWO MONTHS WE READ THIS AGAIN

DENIAL IS THE FIRST STEP TOWARDS ACCEPTANCE

MAAN HAS THOUGHT OF THE FOUR LETTER WORD - IN RELATION TO GEET

AND HE CANT GET HER OUT OF HIS HEAD - SHE IS EVERYWHERE

LOVED THE EXCEL SHEET - HE IS TRYING TO FIND REASONS WHY HE CANT FALL FOR GEET

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Ratna

@--Ratna--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#568

Nisha 🤗...thank u for the awesome and much awaited update...Maan is trying so hard to forget Geet's smiling image and fall asleep ...he is not successful and goes for a drive in the early hours...Miri and Geet bonding is so sweet and amazing ...the little pixie is truly adorable...loved that name calling scene ❤️...Maan is parked in front of the Handa house and is seen by both of them 😲...that was a narrow escape for they were still doubtful of his identity 😛...this line of his says so much about his denial and frustration at his new feelings...

Damn it!! Enough was enough. He was not in love with Geet Handa.

He is trying to be very practical and logical about his emotional downfall...nice try...as if that is ever possible ...your closing lines are proof of it...

The photograph in his mobile of the screen saver called, Geet's Victory.'

He neither deleted it, nor acknowledged it. It was there waiting

Plz update this FF also frequently...the way you wrtite is so addictive...already waiting for the next update 😳