Maaneet FF Binding Ties (3) Link to new thread - Page 19

Originally posted by: love2_soma

aw...msk n sheru...oh no...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

Originally posted by: JeevanaP

Loved it...

Miru & sheru would just steal the show for you...

bechari Pari... phele hi confused brij ko confuse kar diya hai...

continue soon na

Originally posted by: TheSunShine

Stumbled upon this story and just loved it. Geet's devotion to her family and determination to help Dev is touching. She doesn't want him to feel inferior but has to apply same to herself. Maan is impatient and jumps to conclusions he need to curb his tendency to understand Geet. Miri is so lovable. Pari and Brij are interesting.

Originally posted by: alekhika20

Nice update,cont soon.

Originally posted by: honeygrape

haha...lovvvd miris dialogues...wonder what will maan n geets reaction be😆😆😆 what a beautiful part...dont know what made you dislike the chapter...hume toh boohuut mazaa aaya padke😊😊 glad that maan is determined to get to the roots of the mystery called geet handa😳 am loving his eagerness to know about her...loved that chemistry waala confession...now thats a new and variety waala idea😳

Originally posted by: Maaneet099

NI-SHA-JI!!! (just imagine me screaming this and dont ask me why I am feeling random today)

Anyways... I think I may know why you aren't per se happy about this update. It's probably because you wrote this update at different periods of time while you were in different moods. All through I could feel every emotion portrayed wasn't complete before another one came by. Even before Maan could wrap his head around his anger or confusion, I was introduced to Geet's thoughts. And before that completed its cycle, another character barges in. The scene keeps shifting so one emotion doesn't completely take charge making me feel unsatisfied with one particular emotion. Do I make sense?

I loved this jhalak of me into myslef. Made total sense to me.

And you were completely spot on about the various moods affecting my writing at various times.😃

Obviously it doesn't mean the update wasn't good. As a writer you need to get the story moving and trying to elaborate the emotions while doing so gets cumbersome.

I personally liked it. Geet's emotions have been stirred and Maan found a bakra to unravel the mystery named Geet. It's high time Maan reassess his view of Geet. Everybody including Dev knows but Maan needs to realize value of Geet for him to believe in her and realize his deep love for her.

This bakra is a billy goat tht is going to butt head with the tiger full on.

He is slowly but surely getting to that point.😉

PS: Wow, so much for randomness... have fun reading my "random review" suna hai kaafi random hai ;)

Sometimes randomness makes sense right out of the blue😆

Originally posted by: divya22

Oh lovely part...

Abhi toh pyaar puri tarah hua bhi nai n maan felt disappointed bcoz he couldnt lift geet again...ohhh...n also he is getting attached to miri...

Evn i njoyed pari- brij part... n hr love confession was superb...

Maan u r thinking to blackmail pari... so in dat case i will say dont mess with her... n specially in geets case...

Bt d miri ne bazi mar le... ek he line bola pure part mai..bt kya bola hai...superb...

I love it when she calls maan sheru...

Originally posted by: ardentfitzcy

Nice update di.

Thanks Nivedita😃

I dont know why u were not happy with this one if u ask me it has all the trivial details necessary for the foundation f future chps.i dont have much Knowledge about writing yet i can say it has turned out pretty well and things are clear.

Yeah I guess, that is what I figured out,,,eventually😉

One should never judge a person based on his r her first impression.And yet we humsns tend to repeat the mistake again n again. Wont say much on this because because there is quite a famous classic dealing these issues.

Do you know, that almost all of the modern romantic heroes are based on Jane Austen's Mr. Darcy, in one form or the other. He is basically the mold for all the modern romantic heros😳

Maan is veryy much prejudiced against geet and the fact that she still manages to stir unknown feelings in him makes him do things that he himself wuldnt approve. Just for his satisfaction ,to know her real face he broke out pari condition to her and the outcome that it led to did hurt him somewhere in the process.

His prior experience have contributed to his prejudice against her and on top of that he has a hot temper. Hot tempered people always count the ten numbers after they have made an angry statement. They always wallow in their regret unhappily, just like Maan. Bohot tadpega Maan😆

And i was glad he realized. His inner thoughts gave away many things.The fact that he was satisfied that she was not as unaware as she pretended. And the way he felt the vague sense f dissappointment to b not able to carry her , his anger at that inanimate object.It does point to the inevitable...even amidst all the prejudices nd misunderstandings..the fact is he id attracted towards her r may b more than that.

He has been very strongly attracted to her from day one and that is one of the problems for him.😉

Pari is a treat to watch. So outspoken and courageous and strong yet love is something that makes the strongest helpless.She wont say straight naa...but then love is love it will make u do strange things.i liked tis part very much.

The periodic table ...i dont know whether ull believe r not i was revising d&

f block elements lutetium

Had no idea u can express ur love like this😆

Yesterday was revising reproductive system.hehe

Next tym do bring in some physics chp it is something that trobles me more.😆

Long comment fr long update

Thanx fr updating .my s block element must b waiting fr me.'

Glad you like Pari's character. She is so much like a friend of mine. She too is a very strong woman.

I am glad am helping you revise your periodic table.

This love confession was popular after our Proff's coffee equation class.😆

The chemical love confessions were flying around.

They were used as fishponds during college gatherings.😆

Thanks Nivedita for this wonderful heartfelt comment. I loved it😳

Originally posted by: COLOGY

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This will be my Avator fr now :O