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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing parts.. What's with meera.. she is so cold in relations.. but looking at Varun... he is slight emotional n caring person... Maan's very sure abt his relation with Geet... That's the good thing.. but Geet thinking abt maan n thinking letting go this relation for Maan's happiness..😲
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Thank you for your lovely comments once again. I'm really happy that you guys are enjoying this FF. this part does not have a lot of Maaneet but its important. I'm a new writer, so please tell me when you think i have to change something in the way I write so i can make it easier for you. please like my ff if you are not commenting!! 😆😆😆This update will be fun and a bit emotional. Enjoy

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PART 8

The week went by quickly and Veer was coming back today. Geet was glad that her brother was coming back. she wanted to go back to their house. If she wanted to stay away from maan, she had to go back to her place as soon as she could. The last few days she had avoided being around maan. She had spent a lot of time with Aashi. Maan was also focused on working with the case.

The team had been able to determine where they kept some of the girls who were kidnapped. Thought it was not confirmed, their suspicions were very strong. Everyone was at the headquarters right now. veer was joining them in a while. His flight had just landed.

Meeting Room in headquarters.

"ok guys!" Maan stood up. "I'm pretty sure that this is the location where they have kept the girls. Captain Ram, I need just one person to accompany me while I go check it out tomorrow."

Captain Ram stood up too. "Yash and Dev will come with you." He then looked at Varun. "Show maan all the equipment. He can take whatever he might need."

Varun nodded.

Captain Ram continued. "I don't want anyone to get suspicious about any of you. Go there, check it out, gather information and get out of there!! Is that right?"

"Yes sir" the three of them replied.

A few minutes later Veer walked into the room. Aashi saw him first and went over to hug him. Veer caught her by the waist and embraced her in a warm hug after kissing her hard.

Maan grunted. "At least have some respect in front of her brothers man"

"That what I always tell him" Varun replied.

Both brothers made an unbelievable face!

"Thanks for your welcoming faces...he went to captain ram and greeted him."

"I'm glad you are safe son"

"Where is geet? She's sleeping again. How is she?"

"She's fine Veer. She is in the kitchen. She's working on her college assignment." Aashi answered his question.

"Thanks." He bent down and kissed her forehead before making his way to the kitchen.

Kitchen

Geet was working on her design. She was so concentrated that she was unaware that Veer was in the room. He was looking at her amusingly. Geet always reminded him of their mom sometimes. Though she's never met her, she looked so much like her. Her features, her manners, many things were alike. Their mother was an architect and geet was doing interior designing, following a similar path. Unfortunately geet got endometriosis from her itself. It's not a hereditary disease, but a daughter had a higher chance of getting it if her mother had it. he was sad that he had to see his mother suffer and now see his sister. But he was glad that geet had a good doctor. Sahil was taking good care about her treatment and now maan was there too. He was happy when he heard that maan had gone to meet sahil.

"Hey Baccha...I'm back!"

Geet then noticed him. She came around the table and hugged him. "I'm so glad you are back safe." He hugged her back and geet kissed his cheek. As always Veer asked her how was she and geet told him she was fine. "Aashi told me that the information you got was very helpful."

"Yes baby. It was...so how is your design going? You have to submit it in another 2 weeks right?"

"Yes. I have to submit it in two weeks. It's almost done"

"Good. Let's go join the others"

As they went out, everyone else were coming out of the meeting room. Varun updated veer on the situation and told him about maan and the others going to check out the location the next day. They always kept geet away from all these. Aashi knew about everything, but Veer always-protected geet and avoided talking about their work in front of her. She was a normal civilian, and he didn't want her to know about the disgusting and bad stuff they worked around. She always asked and tried to know, but everyone shrugged her off that she stopped trying. He wanted to keep it that way.

"Maan, let me show you the warehouse. It is on the same floor but at the back" Varun said.

Maan was surprised to see all the gun, ammunitions, knives and other weapons in the warehouse. He was now completely sure that they had everything they needed. If they had to go to war right now, this would be sufficient. After taking guns and knives and earphones, maan, yash and Dev got together to discuss how they were going to go about when they reached the location the next day. When they were done they joined everyone in the lounge.

Captain ram stood up. "I guess that's all for today. We can meet here tomorrow after the guys come back"

Everyone were about to leave. Maan thought that geet was still staying with them for this last night but apparently she had already packed all her stuff and brought it with her to the headquarters. She's so desperate to leave so soon?

Before he asked, Varun asked her. "Stay with us this night geet. You can go back tomorrow. Veer you can stay over at our place too. There's nothing for you to eat at your place. Tomorrow you guys can go back."

"Yes that's a good idea..." Veer could not even complete when geet cut him off.

"No. We have to go back!"

Maan was annoyed now. why was she hell bent to go back today itself? Maan had noticed that she was avoiding him for the last couple of days. He was busy, so he did not pay much attention. But he was confused. Why was geet behaving like that? "Geet. Why don't you want to stay over?"

"Oh. I already packed my bags that's why" she replied with hesitance.

Everyone was looking at her weirdly. Then Veer stepped in the conversation. "it's ok. I'll take her home. I'll see everyone tomorrow."

Maan kept staring at geet while she kept avoiding him. She just said good bye randomly to everyone and went after Veer.

"What was the matter with her? She looks fine. Why did she behave so weird?" Varun said looking at her leaving.

Maan did not know either. But he was going to find out.

Part 9 -only siblings

Veer was driving while geet was staring out of the window. She was silent. Too silent. He knew she was upset. But he couldn't understand why. He was almost sure that maan had nothing to do with this as he looked as surprised as everyone when geet said that they had to go back to their place. He had to make her talk somehow. "So how was your stay at Varun's place? You didn't bother him like you do to me, right?"

Geet turned and look at Veer. She knew her brother was joking. Pretending to be angry, she said "Do I bother you?"

"Of course you do. You never listen to me."

"That's not true, I always listen to you"

"nope!...You don't!"

Geet was really angry by now. She was serious. "Yes I do. I always listen to you...you are the one who..."

Varun laughed at her. " Are you really going to fight with me geet?"

Geet glared at her brother. With an irritated tone she told him. "Next time tell your girlfriend to spare some space on the bed for me. She kept pushing me out of it the whole time."

Veer laughed at her again. "So now she's my girlfriend. I thought she was your friend first. Since when do you refer her to my girlfriend?"

Geet made a face. "Stop laughing at me!"

Veer shook his head. At last he was able to lighten her mood.

Maan was in his room, on his bed, staring at the ceiling. He wanted to talk to geet. He wanted to call her but he knew he wouldn't be able to get anything out of her on the phone. He got up and went into the kitchen. He grabbed some water and went into Aashi's room. She was watching some movie on her laptop. He went and lay down on her bed. Aashi looked at him and frowned. She took out her earphones.

"Take out your shoes stupid. How many times do I have to tell you to take it off when you come on my bed."

Maan just rolled his eyes. He always did that to irritate her. she was too uptight sometimes. "What are you watching?"

"I'm watching Scandal...a TV show."

"ok...you can continue" He closed his eyes and Aashi continued watching her show.

Then Varun came in. Aashi didn't even notice him. He walked slowly and woke maan up. He had seen that he was upset. Perhaps it had something to do with geet. He knew just the right thing to do to cheer him up. He didn't want him upset when he had to carry on with an operation the next day.

Maan woke up and Varun motioned him to be quiet. He understood. Slowly, Varun took out Aashi's earplugs. She was surprised and she didn't even have time to react when she felt someone holding her hands. "I heard her screaming at you maan, Go on. Take your revenge."

Aashi understood what was happening. They were going to tickle her. "Leave me Varun. You're supposed to be on my side. Not maan. I am the smallest." She complained.

"That trick is not going to work this time little sister!." Maan went behind her ticking her belly. She started laughing and shouting at the same time. "Please stop...I'm sorry..." She kept thrashing on the bed while both her brothers held her and tickled her. after a while, they stopped and Aashi just gave up. She had no energy left. They were all three cuddled up on the bed.

"You are mean to me...Both of you... I ...didn't... even do anything." She was breathing hard, clutching her stomach and complaining like a kid.

"Aww..., we're so sorry baby." Varun shuffled her hair while she was lying on maan with her eyes closed still holding her stomach.

Maan saw she was tired. "You ok Aashu?"

She opened her eyes and glared at him. Maan chuckled. "We love you so much kiddo!" he also shuffled her hair and got up.

Varun looked at his family. He was glad that Maan's mood was better now.

Next day Maan went to meet Dev and Yash. They reached the location. They were all well armed. They were right. The place looked shady. It was quiet. Not somewhere people wandered around. It was abandoned. Even police would not be interested in coming here. They used the back entrance to enter the building. They were not surprised to find 3 men armed with guns. maan went behind them and disarmed them smoothly. With a slight twist of the head, they dropped down unconscious.

The three of them then proceeded to go inside. There were no more guards. He smirked. These people were really confident that no one would get through the 3 guards they put outside. Hiding behind the wall, they listened to the conversation of two men who were inside.

Man 1- I already gathered the consignment. They are at XYZ location. Its near the port. As soon as the ship arrives, we'll put the boxes in. Your men should be ready to do the job. The boss trusts me on that, so if you screw up ,it's on me. I want no mistakes.

Man 2- Yes sir. The job will be done smoothly. The consignment will leave on Tuesday and will reach there no sooner than at the end of the week. I already promised you that.

The first man then went out from the main entrance. Maan knew it was the right occasion. They could grab the person who was left behind and bring him for investigation. They could use all the techniques they learns in the army to get information. Evidently, the girls were not here. They had to find out about the XYZ location if they wanted to stop this operation.

As the other man left, maan signaled dev and yash and they went to block the main entrance. He went from the back and held a knife to the second men's throat. He did not have any choice. "You are coming with us. No more trafficking now!"

The man was too surprised and scared to react. He just slumped down and did what he was told.

Geet could not sleep the whole night. She woke up and went into the kitchen. She sat down on the chair and put her head on the table. She was feeling bad about maan. she was the one who got him into this relationship and now she was quitting. she didn't even realize as tears started to form in her eyes. Why couldn't she be normal? Everyone always have to be worried about her. Her mom died because she gave birth to her. Her dad didn't love her because of that. Veer never wanted to settle down before because she was too dependent on him. now she would have to leave maan. After that, only Veer will be left in her life. She didn't have anyone else. What if he left her too. All the insecurities she had built up started to come out and she broke down.

When veer came into the kitchen, he was shocked to geet slumped down on the chair and crying. He hurriedly went over to her and kneeled down in front of her. "Geet! What's the matter bachaa, why are you crying?...Hey look at me...Why are you crying baby?"

Geet wiped her tears away. "No...no... It's nothing...I'm fine...I'm...I'm just tired...I want to sleep"

Veer didn't press her further. She looked tired. It looked like she had not slept the whole night. "Ok come. Let me put you to bed." He accompanied her to her bedroom and made her lie on the bed. He tucked her under the blanket. Tears were still forming in her eyes. "let me go get you some water, ok?"

Geet stopped him before he went . "Stay...stay... Pleaaase...pleaaase don't go"

He was worried now. He knew there was something wrong. He sat down and took her head on his lap. "Shhh, I'm not going anywhere. I'm right here with you." Tears were flowing down her face.

Geet hugged him by his waist. He could feel his shirt getting wet. "Pleaaase...pleaaase... don't leave me...please don't leave me ever... I wont bother you...I wont ...I...I promise...i won't be...a burden...on you anymore...Please don't go anywhere..."

"It's ok baby. I wont leave you. You don't bother me Baccha! You're not a burden on me! Never. Please stop crying."

Geet had buried her face in his stomach while he kept on stroking her hair and rubbing her back. "It's ok. It's ok. You need to sleep. Let me put you to sleep." Geet nodded her head. He took off the blanket and lifted her in his arms and went to his room. The bed was bigger so he could sleep besides her.

He made her lie down and slid besides her. Geet cuddled up in a bundle and faced her back towards him. He stroked her hair and patted her head continuously. "sleep baby. I'm right here. I wont leave you." After a while, geet drifted off. Veer sighted. He kissed her forehead and sat on the bed resting his back on the headboard. Geet was still clutching his one hand and he did not dare take it back in case she might wake up. All these years of taking care of her, he had seen her in worse states, but rite now, she looked totally broken. he couldn't understand why she would think he would leave her. She was not supposed to be stressing herself. Everything might get worse. He glanced at her and thanked god that she at least looked peaceful in her sleep. He had to find out what was going on in her head. She was the only family he had left. He couldn't afford losing her. he gathered her closer and kept stroking her for his own peace of mind.


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Edited by nishasharma18 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved part9 the most siling bonding


But feel so bad for geet hope she overcomes her insecurities soon n be with maan
Edited by harman12 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Though its difficult for geet to be confident on her relation with maan, she should not avoid facing him. They need to talk.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update!!
Me want more on maaneet
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Posted: 11 years ago
Guys...im posting part 11/12/13 too. I wont be updating for a long time now because i wont be here during spring break.
Here it is. Im sorry there was not much maaneet in last 2 parts. This one is gonna be long. Please leave me lots of comments and likes. I've put a lot of effort in these parts.

Part !0

Maan , Dev and Yash knocked the man unconscious and brought him to the headquarters. They put him in one of the rooms where they usually kept people they bought for questioning. He was blindfolded so that he does not recognize any location.

Captain ram and Varun had seen them coming out of the elevator with the man. They were surprised. They were not supposed to be bringing anyone. But Maan had heard the man's conversation and he could not let the chance of saving those girls get away.

"Leave him to me Maan. Yash and Dev will give me an update and I will question him"

Maan smirked. He knew his brother had his own way of getting people to speak out.

Varun continued. "Veer called. He's not coming today. He told me geet was not very well"

Maan face changed to worry. Before he asked, Varun cut him. "There's nothing to worry Maan. She's fine health wise. You need to go see her though"

Maan did not waste time asking further questions. He made his way out, got into his car and started driving towards Veer house. He hoped everything was fine.

When he reached, Veer opened the door and allowed him in. He asked him about the location and maan told him that they got a man. He then looked around the house hoping to find her.

"She is sleeping maan. I don't think she slept the whole night. I just got up from there myself."

"How is she? What happened?" Maan asked

"Its nothing serious. But we need to talk." They both took a seat and Veer started telling him what happened.

"She was looking tense yesterday maan. I managed to cheer her up and I thought she was fine. But when I woke up in the morning, she was crying in the kitchen. When I asked her, she said she was tired and she wanted to sleep. But after I put her in her room and started leaving, she stopped me. She told me to stay with her, and to not leave her ever. She told me she won't bother me and she wont be a burden on me anymore. She was pleading to me. Not to leave her"

Maan remained silent. They both remained silent and then veer asked him.

"Did anything happen between you too Maan? Why did she want to come back here so badly yesterday?"

Maan shook his head. "No, nothing happened. Everything was fine. The past few days we were all busy and I did not even spend a lot of time in the house. But I felt her avoiding me. I didn't pay much attention. Before that, we were totally fine. We talked about things and she agreed with me."

"What things?"

"I told her that I was serious about this relationship. I even talked to her about marriage in the long run." Then maan realized. So that's what's bothering her. How did not I realize that? She had already thought about ending this relationship. That's why she was avoiding me. That's why she was afraid that she might be alone one day if veer leaves her. Maan was shocked. He had not realized the extent of geet's insecurities.

"What happened Maan? What are you thinking?" Veer asked him

"Veer! Who told geet that she could not conceive? When I talked to her that day, she said that she was next to being infertile and did not want to drag me in that. She even talked about not being able to have a normal sex life. Who told her these things. I don't suppose you or Sahil did."

Veer looked shocked. No one talked about these things with geet. "Of course not. No one told her anything. She is still young. And she's never dated anyone before so we could talk about her being able to have sex."

Maan sighted. "This girl has been reading about all this stuff on the internet. She's already made up her mind about not getting in a serious relationship with me or anyone because she cannot have kids one day."

Veer still looked surprised. He shook his head. "I was not aware about all these things. I guess she realized all these when you talked about marriage." Veer rubbed his forehead. "All this time she's been so insecure? I can't understand that! I wonder why she would think that I would leave her though!"

"I don't know Veer. I really don't know" Maan said. "You have to find that out from her I guess. Let me go see her" He headed towards her room.

"I made her sleep in my room. Go there"

Maan went into Veer's room and there was geet lying in the middle of veer's bed. Maan went closer and he could see the tears stain on her cheeks. Her eyes were swollen.

Veer came in some times later with a syringe in his hands. "She's not had her medicines today. I don't want to wake her up. I'll give her an injection. It should work out. Can you please turn her on her back for me." Maan did as he was told. He slid her shirt up and veer plunged the needle on her lower back. Geet flinched. "It's ok...you're fine baccha" Veer murmured.

"Sahil told me these injections are stronger." Maan said while putting her back in her previous position.

"Yeah, they are. But she missed two doses already since morning. So it doesn't matter. I prefer her taking tablets. These injections are too painful. They are mostly painkillers for when she's on her periods. She usually has a bad time with the pain then. But I really don't want to wake her up."

Maan's face was serious again. He had started understanding geet's condition better. He had to give credit to Veer for taking such good care of her.

"Lets go eat something. I don't think you've eaten anything since you got back. Until then she might wake up" veer said before they both headed into the kitchen.

Part 11

Geet woke up and realized she was in Veer's bedroom. She sat up and winced. She knew what it was. Stupid injection!! All the previous events flashed into her mind and she remembered how she had broken down in front of Veer. How am I going to explain that now? She got up from the bed and started walking towards the kitchen. She saw Maan and Veer eating. She entered the kitchen and veer saw her first.

"Geet! You are up baccha. I thought you were not going to wake up at all for today"

He acted completely normal to her. Perhaps because maan was there.

"Come geet. Take a seat. Your brother is serving us food" Maan said smiling.

Great, everything is normal.

She sat down and rested her back slowly. It was actually hurting. Veer noticed her.

"I used the injection today baby. You were sleeping and I did not want to wake you. Is it hurting too much?"

"Just a bit" Geet replied.

"You're a strong girl." Veer said rubbing her back. He put the food on the table and she didn't give time and started eating. She was starving.

Then Maan got a call from Varun. He called to tell him that the man had actually told them a lot and they had to make further plans now.

"I'm leaving Veer. I'll meet you tomorrow."

Going over to geet, he kissed her forehead and told her softly. "we need to spend some more time together. I've hardly talked to you since a while. You were hell bent on coming back with your bother yesterday"

Geet didn't know what to say. She just nodded.

Maan signaled veer that he should talk to geet. Veer signaled back. Then he left.

Headquarters- Meeting room

"Good job people" Captain Ram said. "We need to start for an extrication plan immediately. The man you guys got in the morning started singing like a puppet after Varun started questioning him. There is a warehouse near the dock in Woodbridge. I already got the satellite images. The girls are being kept there. Today it's Saturday, and they are shipping the girls on Tuesday morning. We are carrying on with our operation on Monday morning. Is that all right?

Everyone expressed their agreements. "Aashi!" Captain ram continued. "Get me the exact coordinates as we plan our moves from where we are entering. Find out where are the cameras and other security gadgets."

"Yes sir, I will be able to disable it as you guys start making your moves"

"Meera, yash, Maan and Varun...you guys sit together and prepare the operation step by step. Where is Veer? I need him too!"

"He's...busy today. With geet." Maan said

Captain ram looked at him and nodded. "Update him on everything as soon as you can."

Then he turned to everyone else back again. "You guys are the best. Best of luck. Need any other resources, let me know. ok?"

"Yes Sir" They replied.

All of them went and sat at the table.

"I'm going to make coffee first. Anyone?" Meera asked

"I think everyone wants a cup" Varun said, a big grin on his face.

Meera was going into the kitchen. "Meera can you please switch off the lights in the detainee's room. We don't want to give him the advantage of light." Varun asked her.

Meera said yes and went into the room. As soon as she entered, she didn't get time to react. The man flung from his chair still tied onto it and stabbed her with a knife in the arm." She screamed and hoped that someone heard her.

Part 12

Varun was in the kitchen looking for Meera. She was supposed to be making coffee. He glanced at the other room where the man was kept and the lights were still on. He had a bad feeling about this. He hurriedly went into the room. He was shocked. Meera was lying on the ground clutching her arm. The man was still tied to the chair, which had fallen upside down. He understood what happened. The bas***d took the knife he had used and had flung himself at meera as soon as she had entered the room. Luckily, he still could not move from the chair, or else he couldn't imagine what he'd have done to meera.

There was a lot of blood on the floor. He bent down towards Meera and made her stand up. "He flung at me with the knife! bas***d!" he could tell that she was scared. She was not armed and was unprepared to what was coming towards her.

"ok...come on let's go. We need to take care of that wound. You will need stitches...let me call maan. He'll take care of our man. Apparently he was not enjoying his stay so much.

Geet glanced at her brother. He was doing the dishes. They would have to talk at some point bout why she broke down like that. Veer was done and he turned and walked towards her.

"Let's go out today. I might be busy the next few days so we can use this time. Ok?"

Geet smiled. "Ok, lets pick up Aashi too and then go to the beach. We'll have fun together."

"She might be working geet. But let me call her. We can leave in like an hour."

"ok" Geet replied.

Varun made meera sit in the kitchen. He went to get the first aid box. When he got back, he examined the wound. It was a deep in her right arm. "You will need stitches Meera. Hold the cloth on your wound, I will disinfect it"

"No! I don't need stitches. It's not that deep. Just disinfects it and put a bandage. The bleeding will stop. It will close up by itself." Meera replied.

"I'm the medic Meera. So shut up and let me do what should be done." Varun said.

"You shut up! You don't talk to me like that. Give it to me, I'll do it myself." Meera stood up and started taking the antiseptic from his hands.

"Shut. Up. And. Sit. Down" Varun gritted his teeth and gave her a stern look.

Meera looked at him with her eyes fierce. She was not going to relent. But Varun was more stubborn, he continued staring at her until she turned her face and sat down "Do whatever!"

Varun gave her a wide smile. "Good girl." Meera just remained silent with her face turned sideways.

Varun cleaned her wound with the antiseptic. He knew this should be hurting like hell. But the woman in front of him did not even flinch. She was doing a damn good job in hiding her pain. Her arms were slender, but muscular. He could see that she worked out on a regular basis. he applied the stitches and put a bandage. "It's all done sweetheart. Tomorrow I'll change the dressing when you come."

Meera nodded and started to leave. Varun caught her hands and turned her to face him. He touched her cheeks. "It's all right to show that it hurts Meera, you don't have to hide..."

"Thank you!" She cut him off and went to join the others.

Varun watched her leaving. He couldn't help it but damn, he wanted to see the real Meera. the person she was trying so hard to hide.

When Varun joined the team, he saw Aashi leaving. "Where are you going?" he asked

"Oh Varun, Veer just called me, he's going to the beach with geet and he's coming to pick me up. He asked if you guys want to join." Aashi asked looking at Varun and Maan.

"You guys go." Varun replied. "I have to start working on this operation. Maan can go. He can use the distraction"

Everyone said goodbye and they parted

Maan and Aashi were waiting in the store downstairs. Veer and Geet walked in a few minutes later. Maan had his car so he suggested geet come with him and Aashi and Veer can go together and they all got into their car.

Maan looked at geet sitting besides him. She looked fine and happy. It was good because he had a lot to talk about when they reached the beach. Once and for all, he was going to clear all her misunderstandings and hopefully make her stop feeling insecure.

"Are you going to go for a swim geet? Or are we just going to be on the beach? Maan asked.

"No, just a long walk on the beach today. It's too chilly to go swimming." Geet replied back.

After a while, they reached the beach. Veer got out of the car and came to maan. "Aashi and me are going to be in the car. Geet wanted to have a long walk. You go together. Is that all right Geet?" Veer asked

Geet smiled at her brother. "Ok. But don't do anything mischievous with Aashi. Ok?"

Veer shook his head and shuffled her hair. "Ok mam, I wont" he returned her smile and walked back to the car.

"Let's walk barefoot Maan. Leave your shoes in the car."

Geet took out her flip flops, got out of the car and they both went on their long walk.

Part 13

Maan held geet by the waist as they were walking. She was having fun. She's always loved the sea and the beach since she was small. He's known her since she was born. He used to care about her like everyone did, but he never knew that one day he was going to fall in love with her. He still doesn't know how it happened. One thing he knew was that geet always liked him. he smiled when he remembered something Varun had narrated to him.

Past:

Geet was 12 years old. She was staying over at their place and maan was still at school that evening. She went into Varun's room and sat in front of him. "What does having a crush means?" she asked.

Varun was surprised and then he laughed. "Who told you that baccha?"

"There was a guy at school today. My friend told me that she had a crush on him. I didn't understand." Geet replied.

Varun smiled. "Ok come, I will explain."

Geet got on his lap and he explained. "This means that your friend likes the guy. You know, the romance type you see on your shows?"

"Oh, ok..;" Excited by this new piece of information, Geet had sprung out of his lap in a rush. But before that, Varun held her and made her sit again.

"Wait where are you going so quickl!. Now you tell me. Who do you have a crush on? Tell me, it's just going to be our secret!" Varun had asked her

After a lot of persuasion, geet had said his name.

"Maan! you have a crush on Maan." Varun smiled and shook his head. "Don't you think he's too old for you baccha?"

"No, I like him" geet had replied.

When Varun had told maan, they had taken this very lightly.

End of past

At that point, he didn't even love geet. He used to have his own girlfriend.

"What's so funny. Why are you smiling?" Geet asked.

Maan took her waist, grabbed her closer and asked her with a husky voice. "Someone told me you had a crush on me when you were 12 years old"

Geet's eyes widened. Then she realized that Varun had told him. "I hate Varun. This was supposed to be our secret." She was angry but then said lightly. "Anyways I was just 12 at that time. Who knew what was on my mind!" When she started walking forward maan grabbed her arm and came close to her. "You don't like me now?" he asked.

Geet stared at him. His close proximity was affecting her. Her hands were on his chest and maan was holding her waist. She could feel his hard abs. she wanted to feel him under her fingers. She looked into his eyes and replied. "Yes I do"

Then maan's face turned serious. "So when were you planning to break up with me?" He asked her.

Geet was surprised. How did he know that I was thinking about doing this? She tried to loosen his grip on her waist and he tightened his hold. She winced. Her injection spot still hurt. Maan looked concerned and loosened his hold.

"Is it the injection?" He asked.

Geet nodded.

"Does it hurt like that all the time? How long does it take to go?"

"It will be gone by tomorrow! It's fine" Geet was not looking into his eyes.

He did not leave her. Slowly he rubbed her back to soothe her.

"Geet! We need to talk." Maan said

Yes they needed to talk. They sat down on the sand. Then maan asked her

"Who told you that you cannot have a baby one day Geet?"

His question surprised her. but she replied. "I know Maan. I read about it a lot. I can conceive but there's not much chance. Why do you ask that?"

Maan didn't say anything and didn't answer her question. Then he asked her another question. He looked so serious and a bit angry that geet was scared. "Have you ever had sex? What do you know about it?"

Geet's face changed completely and she became expressionless. She did not understand. She realized he was waiting for an answer. But then,she forgot about his serious face and got mad. "Why are you asking me these sorts of questions? You know I've not even dated anyone before. How am I supposed to have had sex and ..."

"That's the point I'm trying to make Geet! You don't know. You don't know anything. You don't know anything about making love with someone. Last time you threw all the crap about not being able to have a normal sex life, not being able to conceive and you've been building up all these insecurities about god knows what."

"No. it's not true." Geet said "I don't want to talk about all this. I love you. But I don't want to be with you. I've already decided. Yes, I am going to end this relationship. I want to learn how to take care of myself. I'm too dependent on everyone. Everyone has worry about me all the time. I'm no longer a baby now. That's how everyone treat me. That's how you treat me. You always saw me just like a kid. Someone you had to take care of when Veer and Varun was not here. You care for me, but you don't love me. You are right. I don't know anything about sex and...and I'm...I'm not right for you. You wont be able to spend your life with me."

Maan could see the tears forming in her eyes and how desperately she was fighting not to let them fall and not let him see it. "Geet, look at me... don't hide from me." He made her turn her face towards him. "You really think I don't love you, I just care about you?" He asked gently.

In some way it was true, that's how it was before he left the army. But now his feeling have changed. "I told you what you mean to me now Geet. You are a grown up, mature woman now. You are beautiful. You are strong, courageous, kind and sometimes you are childish., just like the kid I used to take care of, but I love you. I care about you deeply. I left the army because I couldn't bear the fact that you were sick and I couldn't even be with you. Doesn't that mean anything to you?"

Maan looked at geet intently waiting for an answer. He knew she was aware that he loved her. She was just insecure and that made her unsure. Slowly, she let the tears fall and looked at him. She looked so vulnerable. "I know you love me. I know" she whispered.

Maan took her on his lap and hugged her to his chest tightly. He let her cry. She started sobbing badly. He could feel his shirt getting wet. Since they got together, this was the first time they both were sincere to each other and got their feelings out. After a while it subsided, and he continued rubbing her back and kissing her hair while holding her. Her head was on his chest and his chin rested on her head.

Then geet spoke. "You know. It used to hurt so much. Veer was there all the time ad he couldn't do anything. He just held me and let me cry until the pain subsided. And then he realized that this was not normal. The pain was not normal. You had just joined the army at that time. When he brought me to Sahil and we learnt that I had endometriosis, everything changed. He had to take care of me all the time. I still have a lot of pain when I get my periods maan. I can't bear it sometimes. I try to be strong, but I can't. My back and my legs hurt all the time. I need to take my medicines on time and I can't miss them. Veer is my brother. I'm already a burden on him. But I can't drag you into this. This is not only about kids or having sex. It's a lot more. You don't want to spend your life with me maan. Believe me."

Maan stayed silent and continued stroking her hair. Then he spoke up. "What if I tell you that I love you enough to be with you all my life geet. What if I tell you that rite now if I reject our relationship, I wont be able to settle down with any other woman."

Both stayed in the same position. Then geet spoke with a heavy voice. "Please Maan. Don't"

"You heard me Geet. I love you and you believed me. You told me you loved me too. You've loved me for so long. Shouldn't you be strong enough to accept that we should be together?. Irrespective of how your health is? We can overcome everything together. You should believe that. We wont be able to make love like normal couples, but there's a lot of way geet. You still have the possibility to conceive, if you cant we'll adopt. But we will be together and face everything that comes, together. When you will be in pain, I will hold you. That's what you do when you love someone. You let them help you and you lean on them when you need."

Geet lifted her head and looked at him. she could see the sincerity in his eyes. She pressed her head back on his chest and remained quiet for a long time.

Maan knew she was thinking. She was in a phase where she was accepting what he said. Things were going in a good direction now. He could feel that he had managed to convince her.

Finally, she lifted her head from his chest and looked him in the eyes. "I love you" she said, "I love you so much."

Maan wiped her tears and replied back. "I love you too" she smiled.

"So we're in this together?" Maan asked

Geet hugged him and buried her face in his neck and nodded yes. "Forever." She said.

While maan and geet had left for a walk, Aashi and Veer had stayed in the car. They were looking at the waves. Aashi could see that veer looked worried. She knew it had something to do with geet.

"What happened Veer. Is geet fine?"

Veer nodded yes at her. Then he moved his seat a bit to the back. "Come here Aashi" he motioned her to come on his lap.

Aashi was hesitant but finally went over. Veer settled her over his lap. And slipped his hand under her shirt caressing her belly. "God, I missed you so much." Then he closed his eyes. His hands making patterns on her tummy. Aashi rested against him. "Geet is fine." Veer said. "She's just a bit insecure. But I trust maan, he will take care of her."

The silent went on for some more time and Veer started speaking again. "You can't believe the horrors of man Aashi. We are used to it. But it still affects us so much." The things that happened in Mexico was taking a toll on him. After sharing with Aashi ,he felt lighter.

"I know Veer. But you are doing something at least, right? You have the chance to make a difference. You should be proud of that. You are such a brave man. You take care of geet, you take care of the whole world. And now, me too." She smiled.

Veer opened his eyes and looked at her. "Did I tell you how much I love you?"

He took her lips and kissed her softly. He kissed her slowly.

His hands found her jeans and he unzipped it. It travelled inside her panties and he was already touching her in her most intimate place. "You are already wet baby!"

Aashi broke the kiss and looked at him, then she blushed. Veer smiled. "I love it when you blush"

His eyes were passionate. "I want to pleasure you" he said. He started rubbing her and kissed her at the same time. Aashi could not take it. she was moving her hips when Veer trapped her with one leg. He continued rubbing her and she exploded. Her orgasm came on full force. After that, she just slumped down on him. Veer was satisfied.

After some time, Aashi sat up. She could feel his hardness from under her. She looked at him and veer laughed. "Don't worry about it. You're staying over at my place tonight. I'm going to have my way with you." he hugged her and kissed her forehead.



Please leave me long comments!!

Edited by nishasharma18 - 11 years ago
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geet is trying to distance herself from maan
but this brought out all her insecurities of being left alone
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Lovely i liked sibblings bonding they all shared geet is insecure and dont want to burden on maan thats why she avoid him but maan understand her problem and they talk about the metter finaly maan succeed to believe that will never leave her awesome ud dear
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each character is progressing nicely. very well written :)

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