Wired Hearts (3) Ch:28, Thread: 4 - Page 103

Originally posted by: dreamy4ever

Loved both the updates.maan kind of starting up with geet 😳.well he did notice geet with vyan 😛thinking he is her BF. cruise trip ended soo soon.waitg to see hw theses two gone meet again.
Sorry 4 not commentg for last update 😔.out of town for few weeks 😊

Originally posted by: spvd

part 27
awesome dear...
haye Maan and Geet together...
hmmm...
he thinks Vyan is her BF...
and Geet asked about his GF Sasha...
well that scene was nice...
cont soon dear...

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

love the update

Originally posted by: muskanp

Time for new dhaga

Originally posted by: Onir

Who is he? : Yes exactly my question... 😆

Anyways I'm liking this mild transformation that are visible in Geet now. She was always one who indulged minimal with new people but never so stern. But then this time it was needed as then she wouldn't have been able to keep the professional boundaries between 2 colleagues. what I liked is that once she made her Point and Vyan also abides by it, she did ease up in the conversation.

Originally posted by: Onir

Buzz in the air: Vyan didn't get to be Jack to kya hua... You did give the guy a close moment with Geet, even though it's quite accidental and very much like a pass. Some compensation for planning this whole trip. 😆 Geet has a big family Vyan baccha, she just mentions that its just R&R but the full paltan is big and lot to handle. 🤣

True that! 😆

What I loved teh most was how the moment with Vyan didn't seem to be much of a bother to Geet as she was quickly distracted from it, whereas there were quite a few instances and moments in IOYSM where Geet pondered and analysed equally or much more close moments with Maan. 😳

*Grins*

Maan Is getting friends with him...hmm Interesting 😃

The girls shopping and all the conversation through mobiles and pics was enjoyable and I could totally relate to it. This is what I like about your writing Mayyo, its very close to how most of us live and enjoy our day-day activities. 👏

I try to keep it as close to reality as possible, so it feels like an award when anyone says they can relate to it. 😳

Red top 😲 Geet failed again... But never mind she can console herself with ehr excuses as this is a step closer now. 😉

😆

Originally posted by: Onir

Jack and Rose: Nice Title. Vyan I feel wanted it to be a trip for them as the title suggested but I guess it's turned out to be a family and friends vacation. 😆 I'm somehow Liking this Vyan he's kind of cute, friendly, and bindaas banda. No Jack-Rose for him for now , I personally don't like Jack-Rose. I Know many of them were speaking of him being as Fawad Khan but somehow for now I can picture him as Vivan bhatena.

Loved Raya's excitement and Even Mrs. K's decision after all I wanted the whole junta to go now that you've planned a trip. I'm not a big cruise fan .. I like water but then can't endure days stuck on cruise. 😳 Anyways hoping for at least some ice thawing between MG... mainly for my Tortoise as I don't want the Volcano to erupt altogether and he should get some let out.

No volcano erupted, as per your wish. 😆

I have given complete liberty to readers to imagine the faces for characters. I don't see Vyan as either Fawad or Vivan. The face that I have in my mind is the one Shika posted a picture of.

Okay This new client turned out to be a representative Mr' Smith 😆 But I still think this is a smoke screen and Geet is going to get another jor ka jhataka (Me being hopeful 😉)

Smoke screen... 😉

ARK 🤔 I guess I know what it stands for.

You do? 😆

Originally posted by: paponecon

vyan trying to spend more tm wth geet ...geet searching old maan...maan making geet jealous or really its time pass

Originally posted by: Onir

Nostalgia : Such updates always make me feel nostalgic, and you somehow brought a smile on my face reading this one. Thanks Mayyo 🤗

I am glad, twinnie! 🤗

Sasha makes an appearance as Maan's "friend" 😆 is this in response to Geet's Vyan 😉. Mayyo must say this is turning out to be more interesting.

Maybe he doesn't bother about Vyan at all... 😉

I liked how in few words and in between the story you do give a glimpse about the person's characteristics and persona, like Geet's detailing and silent observation of her cabin is a window to her skills as an Interior designer. 👏

Thank you! 😳

Vyan as I said before is a voyeur and keenly observes things related to Geet ... be it her spending time with her near ones, or her covert observing Maan, or even when she makes plans with her friends to relive her moments with them.

Yep!

SBV has made a special guest appearance here... hayee Not only Geet even I was drooling. 😳

Me too! 😳

Their reminiscence and the joy of reliving those each moments that can never return but was always treasured by all 4 became a beautiful means of thawing some ice between M-G as the atmosphere was lightened by presence of A-A. The whole recollection when they spoke of their trip and late night walk made me recollect that chapter which is one of my favorite written update by you as it was a nostalgia for me then. 😃

After I wrote this chapter, I went back to read that one in IOYSM and see if I was still in tune to their camaraderie. I am pleased that I was. 😃

I did get a glimpse of my hidden Tortoise here 😉 The way he was again being the referee between A-A tu tu main main. 😆 and at the same time involving Geet in the whole tug of war.

Ahha! Positivity!

Loved the last line "We were just four college friends taking a nostalgic walk down the memory lane together. " 👏

Thanks, twinnie! 🤗

Originally posted by: Onir

Parred: The days on the cruise are passing quite soon. But with the pace of the story Twinnie you've made a point to give refined details of each activity and events going on ion few sentences which give the whole picture. 👏

I had no other option. I didn't want to drag the trip so I had to give better details of what was happening in the little time...

I would go with Geet in her opinion of not being a big Romeo-Juliet fan ... as I said earlier neither Jack-Rose or Romeo-Juliet story appeal to me much (It's just my opinion)

Mine too.

Vyan is slowly taking his token gifts in return as the one who advised this trip 😉 Golf coruse pe khelte khelte chance pe dance... 😆 Waah ji waah! I like him he's sweet & harmless.

That's one more person to like Vyan.

Geet wanting to take efforts in being presentable and being bothered with her looks for the ball seemed justified as any girl (for that matter anyone) would want to look good when going for a date or a ball. I don't think it was in special reference to it being with Vyan.

You got this right. Absolutely.

Geet collision with Sasha the Bimbo 😆 Loved it. What caught my attention was how Maan did observe the exchange and continued to focus on Geet for a few moments before going away with Bimbo. 😉

You really do pick out the littlest of hints. 😆

She came to the conclusion of Sasha being his GF ?? Kya baat hai. 😲 She has a tainted/prejudiced view of him I guess, may be due to the presentation he keeps in front of her, or all the gossip or her own way of controlling her feelings for him or excuses she keeps giving herself to rid herself from over thinking ... which she fails time and again. 😆

"Sometimes, things are funny in the way they change" 😆 I guess it is applicable to both M&G.

Yes, it is. But I guess she's only seeing him in that light and not herself...