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Posted: 11 years ago
I love this picture...
soft fuzzy creatures.. so cute...😃😃 ek bhi chick ka rang repeat nahi hai..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Kisi ki duniya ujaadne ke liye kya sazaa mili...
thappad?
When I see this part, I wonder how much women all over suffer. If a man had to suffer like a woman, laws would change and people would be treated as equals.
Lovely but painful part. Song fits very well.
Thanks for updating.
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
poor geet
loved the edit, it was awesome😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-




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A VISIT TO POLICE STATION




Geet was not able to get any clue of dev or his family at the airport. The officials told her that there was no person named dev khurana in the Canada flight. She was questioned with regard to her passport and flight ticket, but she didn't had any. Screaming Devji, Geet fainted . All this was pleasantly watched by the duo dev tara who later went off to Mumbai.

On getting consciousness Geet found herself in a police station. Her repeated statements with regard to her marriage just a day before and about her husband dev was not taken by the officials. She was allowed to make a phone call to her house. Her heart broken cry to her papaji left mohinder handa shocked!

To be contd...




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pictures tho perfect nikali aur sabse acha wo black and white ka hai👏

lakshu ab tu ek os likhne ki experience paa chuki ho


really u try once a chota sa os aur tu hi samajh jaaogi
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Posted: 11 years ago
pic 19 - loved write up...feeling bad for geet...how that time I had tears while watching that part
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



  • i know the story which this katha narrates, is already a known one to all... So i wanted to ask ... do u feel bored here?
  • The pace of the story ... is it very slow?
  • Any suggessions??



1st of all thanks for pm

nope i am not feeling bored here

no you should describe everything to go on to give the end essence of flavor

and suggestions nothing much as i loved ur work

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



19

DHOKA



They decided to have a cup of coffee as there was still time for the flight. Dev mixed something in Geets coffee and passed it to her with such a lovely smile that any one would fall on him. Dev very wisely was capable to spoil geets dress by tumbling a coffee cup on her. He asked her to go to the washroom and clean up. Though geet was worried to leave alone, but having no other choice she left the "so thought" loving warmth of her husband, giving him a sweet smile!

When she returned there was no traces of Dev or his family.

To be contd...

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pic is so awesome i loved geet poo girl crying for that fellow

the turn of story here the base of GHSP uff hate dev so much re
he spoiled her life by spending night with her

thanks for pm

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-




20

A VISIT TO POLICE STATION




Geet was not able to get any clue of dev or his family at the airport. The officials told her that there was no person named dev khurana in the Canada flight. She was questioned with regard to her passport and flight ticket, but she didn't had any. Screaming Devji, Geet fainted . All this was pleasantly watched by the duo dev tara who later went off to Mumbai.

On getting consciousness Geet found herself in a police station. Her repeated statements with regard to her marriage just a day before and about her husband dev was not taken by the officials. She was allowed to make a phone call to her house. Her heart broken cry to her papaji left mohinder handa shocked!

To be contd...




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perfect song for geets state here and pic is really fab one

felt sad for geet

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-




20

A VISIT TO POLICE STATION




Geet was not able to get any clue of dev or his family at the airport. The officials told her that there was no person named dev khurana in the Canada flight. She was questioned with regard to her passport and flight ticket, but she didn't had any. Screaming Devji, Geet fainted . All this was pleasantly watched by the duo dev tara who later went off to Mumbai.

On getting consciousness Geet found herself in a police station. Her repeated statements with regard to her marriage just a day before and about her husband dev was not taken by the officials. She was allowed to make a phone call to her house. Her heart broken cry to her papaji left mohinder handa shocked!

To be contd...




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those two episodes were so heart wrenching ..Geet was innocent but was punished for being so...and her family too accused her after that for all happenings
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



19

DHOKA



They decided to have a cup of coffee as there was still time for the flight. Dev mixed something in Geets coffee and passed it to her with such a lovely smile that any one would fall on him. Dev very wisely was capable to spoil geets dress by tumbling a coffee cup on her. He asked her to go to the washroom and clean up. Though geet was worried to leave alone, but having no other choice she left the "so thought" loving warmth of her husband, giving him a sweet smile!

When she returned there was no traces of Dev or his family.

To be contd...

pls check the note above...




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Superb.. His betrayal and her pain were clearly shown in this pic..
One cup of coffee twisted her life..😳

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