MG~SS~The Torment-Thread-2- UPDATED Pt 14/Pg 128 / 17th Feb. .. ... - Page 71

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Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.







Part - 13



He came out with a smirk and there was a determination in his eyes * he sat in his car and waited lil away from d gate * after few min Geet and pandeyji came out followed by some more staff members * all took their respective ways to go back home Maan was following Geet from a fair distance * they took their cable car and unknown to them Maan was following d them * Geet and pandeyji got down and then covered some distance by walk * 1st Geet entered in her house and Pandeyji moved forward to next lane * Maan stopped his car sideway , lowered d window glass and sat in a easy way with a smile .

Geet entered in her house , changed , prepared coffee for her and came near window sipping that * she slided d curtain and got a shock .. OMG!!! What is he doing here ? Did he follow me ? NO ... * Maan saw her in d window and remained like that * Geet slided back d curtain and moved away from d window .. why he was following me ? Why he wanted to talk to me ?If he didn't bother to help me that day and leave me to die then what he wants from me now ?


Some negative thoughts started roaming in her mind in fear .. he fellowed me and got my add .. Babaji ab ye sab fir se ku ? agar esne un logon ko mere yahan hone ki khabar de di to ? main un sab ke liye marr chuki hun aur ab mere liye yahi accha hei * un logon ko kabhi mere jinda hone ka pata nahi chalna chahiye * esne ya eski Dadima ne agar Darji ko mere bare mei bata diya to * mera enn logo se koi matlab nahi fir ye ku mera peecha ker raha hei ? main maru ya jeeu ess baat se enhe kya lena -dena ? Ab kya chahatey hei ye log ? Babaji kya karun mei kuch samajh nahi aa raha ?


She was walking go and fro in d room in tension * peeped from a corner and he was still there * she came in kitchen and prepared her meal , did some household works and ate her dinner * she got d call from Arjun and he asked about d meeting * Geet informed him about d approval of desines and then talk on some more topics * after that she called Meera and both chat for long * she tried to divert her mind but her eyes went at window now and then * she switched off d light and again peeped out and left a sigh , he was still there * she settled in d bed and tried to sleep but sleep was far away from her eyes * her whole past rewind in her mind * she was all alone here , away from all * she was not affecting anyone then why she is in this mess again * she didn't know when she slept lost in her thoughts and her sleep broke with a thundering sound * she got up with a shiver in her body , this thundering and rain reminded her that fateful night * remembering something she got up and came near window * she tried to see on d road in d heavy and find him there like before ... Babaji!! Ye chahata kya hei ?Though his presence was making her angry but she decided to talk to him at least with that she could get some hints of his intention * Geet wraped herself in a shawl , took an umbrella and came down * she knocked at d car door angrily * Maan slided down d glass and find her there in rain .


Maan: Geet , tum bheeg jaogi , barish mei ku aai bahar?

Geet:what r u doing here ?

Maan: I want to talk u .

Geet: why?

Maan: plzz Geet , once.


Geet thought for few sec and spoke: gadi gate ke samne park kero aur ander aao.


Maan parked d car and came out , she shared her umbrella and came up in d house. Geet gestured him to sit on d sofa and went in d kitchen * Maan scaned d room and waited for her * she was back in five min with a hot mug of coffee and forwarded at him * he took that quietly with lowered eyes thinking that she still showing her care and concern .

Geet: so come to d point why do u want to talk to me ?

Maan: Geet months back I heard that ...


I'm dead ,,, she cut him in between with her cold words .

Maan nodded in yes.


Geet : bilkul sahi suna tha tumne , wo Geet marr chuki hei aur jisse tum dekh rahe ho wo ek Anaath( orphan) hei * aur tumhe mere bare mei janne ki ku jaroorat padi ? India mei un logo ko informe kerna hei kya ki Geet jinda bach gei ,aa ker maar dolo , Ku ?


Maan: nahi essa nahi hei Geet , plzz trust me.

Geet: TRUST aur tum per!!! ... Cut this crap and come to d point , what do u want and why r u here at this time?

It was very hard for Maan to make her understand his side ,, she never trust him.


Maan: Geet agar tum jinda thi to ku chupaya ye sach sabse ? sab yahi jante hei ki tum ab ess duniya mei nahi ho .


Geet: esse tumhe kya ? mei jinda hun ya marr gai esse tumhe kya ferk padta hei? Tum jo chahatey thy wo ho gaya baki sab se tumhe koi matlab nahi hona chahiye , ye mere jinda hone se tumhe bhi takleef ho rahi hei ?ab to shayad news de bhi di hogi India , Ku ?

Maan: nahi Geet , tum galat samjh rahi ho , maine kisi se kuch nahi kaha hei ? Haan Dadima ko bataya hei .


Geet : tum nahi to tumhari Dadima hi sahi , wo bata dengi * ho to tum sab ek hi . Geet came close to him and spoke venomously ... ek baat acche se apne mind mei bitha lena MK , agar India mei un logo ko meri jinda hone ki khabar mili to mera jo hoga so hoga lekin usse pahale mai tumhe Jaan se maar dalungi ess baar , yaad rakhna ... I'll kill u with my bare hands . Meri zindgi mei aag lagane wale tum ho * uss din apni khushiyon ke liye tumne Geet ke liye maut likh di thi aur wo marr bhi gai uss din * ab usse marra hua hi rahane do yahi sabke liye accha hei * ab jao yahan se aur mere samne matt aana kabhi , I hate u . tears roll down from her eyes.

Maan looked at her painfully , he wanted to know so many things but Geet's anger stopped him * he understood that she never share anything * he was her culprit and can't force her * she wanted to hide d truth of her whereabout and still had d fear of her life * she was doubting at him also and never trust him * when he didn't move Geet again told him.


Geet: leave MK and don't try to cross my path * it is better for u to think that i'm dead.

Maan stood up halfheartedly and went out giving her a painful look * d mystery about her death and her life remained disclose * only she could solve this but she was not agree to talk * he came back KV in mid night and Dadima was sleeping in a sitting position on sofa * he sat on floor near her feet andkept his head on her lap * Dadima woke up with a jerk feeing d touch on her body and started her questions one after another.


Dadima: Maan , kahan thy aap ab tak? Aap to Geet se milne gaye thy na? wo mili?

Maan: Dadima, mili bhi aur nahi bhi , samajh nahi aa raha ki usse jinda dekh ker khush houn ya usse marra hi samjhne ka dukh manau ?

Daima: ku , aap esse ku bol rahe ho , wo jinda hei ye khushi ki baat hei , ab ye to dukh nahi hoga na ki humari galti ki wajha se uski jaan gai * galti to hune ki hei lekin ab ye to khushi hei ki wo sahi - salamat hei .


Maan: but she doesn't want to disclose her reality , she still has d fear of her of her life and doubt us .

Dadima: fear? But why? And why she is doubting on us ?


Maan : she fears that we can inform her so called relatives that she is alive and they'll try harm her again * she threatened me not to disclose this truth that she is alive and living here . Dadima plzz kept this truth with u otherwise she'll leave this place or it could be harmful for her * I want her here , infront of me and i'll try to know about her . Dadima we didn't help her that day but we can do now and dadima agreed.


Precap --- Maan is eager to know about Geet ...


Part - 14


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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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yeh kam hai geet ki outburst aur thoda hotha tho bhi teek hotha wo ussi ka layak hai iss baar no mercy on maan
Edited by priya111111 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


😛 Hi priya aaj nyt mei kaise..??
love to see u dear...



aaj night shift hai ko change huwa 12 tak rahoongi
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Originally posted by: priya111111

hi babie, dona chup kyun ho tumdono

😛 Hi priya aaj nyt mei kaise..??
love to see u dear...

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update😊
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Originally posted by: priya111111

hi babie, dona chup kyun ho tumdono



😲 priya.. siggi ko kya hua..??
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Originally posted by: singh24



😲 priya.. siggi ko kya hua..??





kuch aur daalna chaha aur old one save nahi kiya tho wo chala gaya😭
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hello ji raat ko chatri lekar kyun aayi ho?
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Originally posted by: priya111111



hello ji raat ko chatri lekar kyun aayi ho?



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😊 new trd kahan hei..??😲

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