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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111




hi dona


sona (foxyangel) tere baaremein pooch rahi thi abhi bhi wo thread par hai


Hi priya...🤗

kab tak ho dear..??😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: goldenmoon


kon se thread pe hai di???




new one my naught little fiancee
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


Hi priya...🤗

kab tak ho dear..??😆





hi babie

time fixed 12 tak😆😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


Hi Dona...🤗

kal kahan gayab thi..??


ha di asusual mera headache migraine ka issi liye kal nahi aayi
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Posted: 11 years ago
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For banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi...🤗


Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.





Part - 9





Day by day Maan became silent and cold * he was living a robotic life and Dadima too was regereting * both shared meals and talk but on business matter and on Dadima's health * he avoid every personal talk.

Dadima ordered Adi, sent him HP to take back all d land from Darji and appointed other person to look after their property * Darji tried to convince Dadima but she refused outrightly * She can't accused him bcoz she and Maan wr too equally wrong and shared that crime leaving Geet to die there on d road. Dadji and Brij felt insulted in Pind( community) and cursed Geet for all this lose and insult though they wr very influenced but coz of this many questions raised at them.

On the other side Geet settled in her hostel and got busy in her studies * now she has to live her life all alone in a new city * many times d dreadful memories disturbed her sleep and she got up with a jerk and shiver * she tried to occupied her mind with work and study to avoid those thoughts * after her classes she work in a office as part time job which made her busy as well as giving her monetary help * some time at weekend all met at Arjun's house which was in d same city * Meera and Prem came from their hostel and Geet from her * Arjun's GF Annie was from New Jersy but she worked with Arjun his newly set business and some time she too joined them * after his MBA Arjun worked in KC for few months but soon he started his own business and now he was doing 3-4 contracts for KC which they sublet to other co. Arjun had his own house in San Fransisco * all spent very enjoyable time together.


After 6 months...


Geet's 1st sam was going to over and after that she had to vacate d hostel * Prem was going to India and Meera joined Arjun for few days and then she too would go to India to meet her parents * there was no question of Geet to come India so she has to make some arrangement for her in US * she didn't want to burden on Meera who already did a lot for her * Geet decided to join full time job for these days so that she could live in PG * without work she couldn't survive in this costly city * At weekend she talked to Arjun regarding this * Arjun knew her capabilities and she was like his kiddo sis Meera * he assured her that he would help her and she could live with them but Geet was reluctant inwardly for this .. Kab tak dusro ke sahare jeeyegi ? Duniya mei akele hun to akele hi jeena seekhna hoga.


Before sam leaves Arjun gave her an appointment letter of his Co. * Geet's stream was ECE and she was perfect for Arjun's Co. and he needed new staff for his new project of a very big corporate building which was a venture of KC in San Leandro's business distt and for all Elec set-up Arjun had d contract. Now Geet's one prob was solved and for other she had to try herself . The temp office was there in d building and she had to work there * now she was thinking to shift in San Leandro coz of her job * before one week of leave she went to visit at site office with Arjun, Prem and Meera * It was less than one hr journey over all and this a bay city but by aeroplane it took hardly half an hr * Geet was awed it was a very big corporate building * Arjun described them all his work in short though Geet did her summer training and last 6 months internship in a good co(rapid metro) but here in US everything is very diff , and advanced . She was looking everything with interest coz she had to start her work from next week. She decided to search for a accommodation after joining d work on net and with some local ppl's help who worked there on site.


A week passed in a blink and Geet left d hostel and came to Arjun home for time being * Meera and Prem wr coming next week * in weekend Geet explored d city , did some shopping and arranged d house * She surf on net also to get some knowledge about d nearby area of her workplace and finally d 1st working day arrived * that day she accompanied with Arjun and he introduced her to his staff and described his site incharge to help her * d encharge was an Indian from Bihar pure Brahaman(Pandit) Pandey , a bachelor and stayed away from girls* Geet liked him very much though he was lil tough to handle but he was very sincere * some staff wr from diff culture * she settled in her cubic and started her work to study d desines , plans and layouts of d building * it took 3-4 days to get all d major and minute things of d work and now Geet decided to visit d site where she had to inspect d work * right now they have to get ready d sample floor.


It was last day of week and Geed had planed to search a place for herin weekend * she can't live like this for long * Meera was coming on Sun and it was very difficult for Geet to persuade her* with d help of Pandayji she got few addresses to contact for PG and on Sat she decided to visit them * Arjun was busy in his meetings and Geet and Pandeyji wr at site.


She was feeling a restlessness since morning and night was also very disturbed * some time she felt very lonely and wanted someone close to her with whom she could share her worries , happiness and pain * someone who could console her when she wake up with fear and cocooned her giving her a feel of protection but it was her destiny that she had none * some time this loneliness kills her and irritated her * it was going hard for her to concentrate in her work with this restlessness .


Meanwhile in d other part of d same city a soul was suffering , tossing and turning in d bed * he woke up with a pained face looked around and left a sigh * this is not new for him * from last many months he got up like this * he freshen up and went to gym for work out, came back, got ready , took his BF and went out * his life was running on same pace like a machine ,, no emotions and no happiness ,,, empty heart , blank eyes and minimal talk but his taugh frame and hard look made many hearts restless and their nights sleepless . he was totally aloof from world but his mare appearencs boost d young hearts of girls * he was a dream man for girls but he gave damn .


He entered in Arjun's office for d meeting and all eyes turned at him * females forgot to blink and males felt envy * he went to reception desk and informed about his meeting with Arjun * d drooling secretory hardly controled herself and replied.


Sec: yeeesss siirr , h h hhee iss wai waiting for u ssiirr ,, th this way plzz...


He nodded his head in disappointment and moved towards d cabin * seceratory informed Arjun and he came out from his office to receive him.


Arjun: Hello MK , nice to see u , come in plzz.


MK: Hello Arjun ,,,, same here .


Unknowingly he scanned d area around him then went in and got busy in discussion .


Precap --- I don't know what my readers want ?😆

But a heart is restive...


Part - 10


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3914735/mg-ss-the-torment-thread-2-updated-pt-14-pg-128-17th-feb?pn=50

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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
dadi ne sab kuch wapas leliya daarji aur brij se ab kya faida yeh sab karne ki.guilt dadi aur maan ko chain se jeene nahi derahi hai. good geet got job and trying to settle down with the help of her friends but still her nightmares are haunting her
Edited by priya111111 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago




Pata chal raha hain ki tune cheating ki...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -indu-





Pata chal raha hain ki tune cheating ki...😆




🤣🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago




Cheating karne ke baad itna khush yahi hote hain hana...😉😆

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