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Posted: 11 years ago



I will not tell u to post any alternative ending because then it will look forced...but I am certainly not happy with the way Geet was scared of Maan but still living with him and then so easily she forgave him...and he termed themselves as best couple...

agar Daadima and Naintara waqt par sab kuch nahin batati then he would have killed Geet and if Rakshak may have not get his senses right then he would have killed Dev...fir kya hota...Maan se achcha to Geet ke liye Rakshak tha...he loved Geet more than Maan...

first Maan compared Geet's love with a mere piece of jewellery... this was the first insult of Geet's unconditional love...then he started doubting her that was the biggest insult of their relation...and then he tried to kill her and Dev that was biggest insult of humanity...

I am really very surprised how can Geet forgave him...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 11 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm! Awesum end! She forgives him! They have a daughter! all ends well! thanks 4 a superb SS
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Posted: 11 years ago
It won't a forced ending.Bcz I myself had thought of an alternate ending.Maaneet fans want a happy ending.personally I also prefer happy endings.So I wrote a happy ending.But story wise lots of readers felt that there should have been a separation.That's why I asked u.
Expect an alternative ending soon.

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I will not tell u to post any alternative ending because then it will look forced...but I am certainly not happy with the way Geet was scared of Maan but still living with him and then so easily she forgave him...and he termed themselves as best couple...

agar Daadima and Naintara waqt par sab kuch nahin batati then he would have killed Geet and if Rakshak may have not get his senses right then he would have killed Dev...fir kya hota...Maan se achcha to Geet ke liye Rakshak tha...he loved Geet more than Maan...

first Maan compared Geet's love with a mere piece of jewellery... this was the first insult of Geet's unconditional love...then he started doubting her that was the biggest insult of their relation...and then he tried to kill her and Dev that was biggest insult of humanity...

I am really very surprised how can Geet forgave him...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

It won't a forced ending.Bcz I myself had thought of an alternate ending.Maaneet fans want a happy ending.personally I also prefer happy endings.So I wrote a happy ending.But story wise lots of readers felt that there should have been a separation.That's why I asked u.

Expect an alternative ending soon.


Jasmine many years back i have seen a Hindi movie name I don't remember but that story is still etched in my mind...the plot was in Muslim background...a girl fall in love with a boy and then with family's consent they get married...slowly after some time conflicts started in very very small issues...and then boy gave her divorce...she went away...after some time he realized his mistake and asked her to marry him again but then they can't marry directly...they has to go through Halala...a goon lived in her neighborhood...he was very rude and don't have any room for emotions and love in his life so they decided to take his help thinking that as he don't have any feelings he will easily divorce her and then they can get married again...so girl married that goon... after marriage that goon unknowingly started changing his ways...stopped his all bad doings, started loving her, taking care of her...and then when she asked he although having loved her decided to give divorce for her happiness...then she realized what mistake she was going to do...she is asking divorce from the person who loved her so much that her happiness meant everything for him for the person who took her love for granted...she then told her former husband that she will happily live with her present husband who love her unconditionally...I loved this movie too much and wanted same ending for this story of urs...
but it is the decision should be made before...not like playing with story to satisfy everybody...now after reading present end of ur story I don't want to read another ending...


Edited by 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Many of my readers said that Maan needed a punishment.So I'll go for an alternative ending
Infact Imyself had decided 2 go 4 an alteratve ending b4 m readers said so.Hope u'll read it.U r free 2 criticize me.

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Jasmine many years back i have seen a Hindi movie name I don't remember but that story is still etched in my mind...the plot was in Muslim background...a girl fall in love with a boy and then with family's consent they get married...slowly after some time conflicts started in very very small issues...and then boy gave her divorce...she went away...after some time he realized his mistake and asked her to marry him again but then they can't marry directly...they has to go through Halala...a goon lived in her neighborhood...he was very rude and don't have any room for emotions and love in his life so they decided to take his help thinking that as he don't have any feelings he will easily divorce her and then they can get married again...so girl married that goon... after marriage that goon unknowingly started changing his ways...stopped his all bad doings, started loving her, taking care of her...and then when she asked he although having loved her decided to give divorce for her happiness...then she realized what mistake she was going to do...she is asking divorce from the person who loved her so much that her happiness meant everything for him for the person who took her love for granted...she then told her former husband that she will happily live with her present husband who love her unconditionally...I loved this movie too much and wanted same ending for this story of urs...
but it is the decision should be made before...not like playing with story to satisfy everybody...now after reading present end of ur story I don't want to read another ending...


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Posted: 11 years ago
Anklets:Alternative ending

Due to public demand I have written another climax for this SS.
Geet was always sitting in her room with fear.Maan felt upset.

He went near her.
She moved backwards in fear:Don't come near me.I am scared of you.Go...
Maan felt upset.
G:You will kill me.
Maan embraced her suddenly:No dear.No one will kill you.
She was shivering.




Suddenly seeing him close to her she pushed him and ran out.
He wept.
M:I deserve this.

Later again Maan went to Geet.
She was scared:Don't kill me please Maan.Don't kill me.

She cried.
Maan caressed her face:No dear.I will not kill you.You are my life.I don't want to lose my life.
She fainted in his arm.He was shocked:Geet...wake up.
He carried her in his arms.

He looked at her:Geet!Wake up.


He placed her on the bed.

He caressed her head with pain:Geet!


He sprinkled water on her face.Slowly she opened her eyes.She saw Maan resting his head on her feet and crying.
He looked at her painfully:Will you forgive me Geet?
He held her hands:Geet...I promise you that I will ever hurt you again.
Looking at him painfully slowly Geet moved her hand from his hand.

G:Maan...you are you apologizing to me?Can I ask you something?Would you have apologized to me if you had not known the truth about Vikram?
Maan was silent for a moment.
G:You would not have apologized to me now if Vikram had not been exposed.Right?
Maan couldn't open his mouth.
G:If Naintara had not come on time you would have killed me.Right Maan?
Maan was lost for words.

G:If I had tried to kill you,would you have forgiven me easily?
Maan's lips shivered:Geet...
G:No.No man can forgive his wife if she tries to kill him.Then why do men expect women to forgive their husband easily?
M:Geet...I know I don't deserve pardon.But still...please forgive me Geet.
G:Ok...I am forgiving you.
Maan was relieved:Thanks a lot Geet.
He embraced her in happiness.But she was emotionless.
M:I am so happy Geet.I am going to give you a surprise gift.
But Geet's face was still dull.
He took an anklet from his pocket.
M:Geet...You lost your anklet.It was stolen by Naintara and now it is with Meera.Never mind.Now onwards wear this anklet.
Maan tried to tie the anklet around her feet.
Suddenly Geet moved away her feet.
G:No Maan.I don't want your anklets again.
Maan was shocked.
M:Geet...
Geet's eyes were teary.
G:Why do you always confine our love to a small piece of gold Maan?Does love costs only lakhs?For me love is priceless.Please don't put yourself down again by comparing our love to anklets.Last time you said these anklets were the symbol of our love and losing these anklets means losing our love.Then when the anklets were lost you stopped loving me and ended our relationship.Tell me how will I trust you again?How will I live with you peacefully?
M:Geet!
G:For you love is only jewellery.That's why you doubted me when somebody showed you some fake proofs.I made a mistake by leaving my father for you thinking that your love is priceless.I want to correct my mistake by returning to my father.

Maan was shocked:Geet...You said you forgave me.
G:Yes Maan.I forgave you.Because I can only forgive the people who apologize to me.I loved you,so I forgave you.But it's not easy for me to forget everything that easily.Because I am a woman whose husband tried to kill her.I am not courageous enough to live with a husband who attempts to kill me listening to others.What if again you try to kill me if somebody brainwashes you?I can't take any risk.Because now there is a baby in my womb and I don't want to lose my baby.
So I am leaving.
Maan was shattered:Geet!No...You can't leave me and go.

Without listening to him Geet packed her bags and left the room.Maan followed her and held her hand.
M:Please don't go Geet.
Geet's eyes were full of tears.
G:Please don't stop me Maan.

Geet walked away.
She saw Savitri.She burst into tears hugging Savitri.
G:Please forgive me Dadimaa.

S:No need to apologize Geet.Because you are right.Anyone in your position would do the same.All the best Geet.
Shedding tears Geet left the Khurana Mansion.
Maan cried loudly:Geettt!
Savitri became upset.
S:Your deeds are backfiring you Maan.

Maan kept crying.

After 5 years...

It was Naintara and Arjun's wedding reception.
Finally Naintara found her soul mate.
It was Savitri who supported her to remarry.

Dev and Meera looked happy together.
They are a happy couple now.

All were happy except Maan who lived a lonely sad life.
Maan's eyes fell on the couple who was wishing Arjun Naintara and the little girl who stood with them.
Maan was shocked.They were Geet,her husband Rakshak and a little girl..Palak.
His eyes got moisted with tears.

Maan went to the washroom.There he saw Palak washing hands.
M:Beta!
She looked at him and smiled.

Maan walked to her emotionally and caressed her.
Suddenly he heard a loud voice from behind.
"No".
Maan turned back only to see Geet burning in anger.
G:Stay away from my daughter Palak.
Maan's heart was torn.
M:Geet...Palak is my daughter.
G:No.I won't allow you to call her your daughter.You are the one who tried to kill me when Palak was in my womb.That time you didn't care for her.That time if you had killed me,Palak would not have seen this world.You are a father who tried to kill your own child.Tell me what right do you have to claim her as your daughter?
Tears fell down from Maan's eyes.
G:Palak has a lovely father now.Rakshak.He is 100% better than you.He did many mistakes.But that was only to get me.When he realized that Vikram was trying to create misunderstandings between me and you he suppressed his love and corrected his mistakes.He tried to mend our relationship.To be frank I owe my life to Rakshak.He gave me a second life.He trusts me.I am sure that he won't kill me even if he doubts me.He may divorce me letting me live my life according to my wish,but he will never kill me.
Maan couldn't control his tears.
Rakshak came.He stared at Maan.
Maan couldn't open his mouth seeing Rakshak.
Rak:Maan...
Geet was worried.

Rak:I wanted to meet you for a long time.But Geet didn't allow me to.Since God brought you before me I want to ask you some thing.Why did you stop our wedding and marry Geet Maan?To kill her?You got an innocent wife who loved you unconditionally.Seeing Geet's love for you,I realized my mistakes and tried to sort out the problems between both of you so that Geet would be happy.But what did you do to her?
Maan was weak.
Geet was tensed about Rakshak's temper.

G:Rakshak...Why are wasting your energy and spoiling this happy occasion by fighting with him?We came here for Naintara.She is the one who saved my life 5 years back.Because of her I am alive now.We greeted her,we wished her and could be with her in her happiness.Now let's leave.
Rakshak tried to control his anger.
Geet looked at Maan painfully.

Rakshak took Palak in his arms.Geet held his hand and stared at Maan.
Then 3 of them left together.
Maan stood still shedding tears.

The End



Edited by jasminerahul - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
So much painful part.. 😭 But Maan deserves this.. Geet is right at her own place.. How can she live with a person who did try to kill her n her child..? yeah.. Rashak was really 100 times better than Maan...liked it too..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
She is right you know
What if you did the same again
God I loved this scene the most
She forgave him
But of course couldn't forget
Can you really if in her place
I doubt it
So she left to go back to her father
Married rakshak and is now happy
And he paid for his mistakes
That was sad but so right too
Double endings cool

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Posted: 11 years ago
their happy ending was superb
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Posted: 11 years ago
alternative ending
geet is right
any woman won't stay with that man again
fabulous

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