MG ~FF~ ILTEJA ~ PART 4 pg/23 || June 3rd || - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
Prologue is very interesting, waiting for story to unfold
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: ...RIDDHIMA...

Nice one
But what that word means :(



prayer😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rockingchahat

I lik it.. plz pm me if possible.
Ty.



i dont send pms rey sorry follow my page on facebook if you canz!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: tanvinangia

RES😆

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Loved the name a lot "ILTEJA" (A prayer)
I cant believe meri story ka Prologue ❤️
Awww!! poor vicky 😆😆 waise gaya kahan vicky.?? Maan se darr k bhaag gaya .??
Australia.?? All live in australia kya.??
Illegal Kaam Geet ko krne mei mazaa aaya.!!😆😆😆
Maan ROCKSTAR .???😲😲
wanna read further jaldi se start krde 😭😭
love u too jaan❤️
waiting to read more..😃😃😃





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Posted: 11 years ago
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https://i.imgur.com/OfIJC9i.jpg



PART 1:

Geet college ke liye time ho gaya ... And you are still sleeping, uth jaa warna shaamat aani hai, tere Papaji ... Rano was about to say something when she saw Geet's room messed up with the posters around. The walls on which she scribbled the name of him madly ... Maan Singh Khurana.



Yeh ladki sudregi nahi, she mentally told herself and took a cloth to clean those walls ... Her madness for this rockstar is just going out of limits and Rano was tired of telling her to stop with her antics. She began to pull the posters to bin them when Geet woke up stopping her mother ... Beeji aise mat karo, I worked so hard to gather them and you are throwing them away.



Tu dur reh, agar tere papaji ne dekh liya na ... toh woh gussa ho jayenge, kal hi toh sab phenk diya tha aur tune wapas sab lagadi ... Rano got irritated snapping at Geet.



Beeji please nikaliyo mat na ... please, she panicked taking a sharp breath. By then Mohinder saw the plight of mother and daughter, Rano dipped her head noticing that her husband was watching her. Geet ran into the washroom fearing that he will lash his anger on her ... Rehne de Rano, this girl will again bring them back ... I am leaving for office saying he left. The only reason for Mohinder and Rano to bear the madness of Geet was that she was really good with her studies and that they have a business which Geet will overtake. Her future will remain secure, they trusted Dev ... Who is the brother of Maan and Khurana's were family friends of Handa's. Just that Maan doesn't involve himself into business for he had career in music.



Aaja bahar tere papaji chale gaye, Rano sighed giving up ... Tu khud saaf karle apna karma, ya ill send your maid, but please let the room remain as yours not some rockstars



Geet rushed out hugging her mother from behind she said, meri beeji gussa ho gayi?? Aapko pata hai maine sapna dekha? Batadon?? She tried to distract her.



Haan bol ... She left to kitchen to prepare breakfast for Geet for Rano knows that her pagli loves her hand made food. Who doesn't love one's own mother prepared food, Geet followed her starting with her story.



Ek ladki thi, bilkul seedhi saadhi ... Mere jaise, uska bas ek hi kaam tha ... Sapne dekhna ...



Bas kar Geet, har din tujhe yehi sapne aati hai, jaake khana khale ... Geet heard the voice from somewhere, she knew it ... It was Dev. She looked at him and ignored his presence ... Beeji breakfast mein kya banaya?? She sat on the chair with attitude, Dev came in to take a seat beside her ... Aunty mere liye bhi bana dena



Haan beeji mujhse jyada inka khaana jaroori hai, toh inke liye banana ... Saying she came out into the lawn. The rain droplets were falling tingling her senses, she smiled pulling her face up exposing her skin to touch her.



Yeh tujhse naaraz kyun hai?? Rano asked as she stood beside Dev and watched her daughter lost in the rain.



Main busy tha Aunty and this girl has a common complaint that I don't have time for her ... Aapko pata hai Shubha too need my time, ek ke paas rehta hoon toh dusri gussa ho jaati hai, karon toh kya karon??



Time dede, Geet will understand ... Shubha is your responsibility Dev aur yeh pagal tujhe kahika nahi chodegi dosti ke naam par, Rano replied sadly worried for him. She knew that her Pagal can anyway survive ... Geet is indeed innocent but she also knows how to live and make her life ... the only lacking point in her was the crazy feeling she had for Maan.



Nahi Aunty, Geet is my friend who colors my life ... Shubha needs to understand my friendship with her,


[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wmTWjT3wG8M[/YOUTUBE]


Mere Khwabon Mein Jo Aaye Aa Ke Mujhe Chhed Jaaye



They heard Geet singing, Rano smiled ... Shuru ho gayi, babaji hi bachaye meri bachi ko ... she went back to serve the breakfast.



Usse Kaho Kabhi Saamne To Aaye


Nahi aayega ... Dev yelled chewing onto the parathas


Mere Khwabon Mein Jo Aaye Aa Ke Mujhe Chhed Jaaye
Usse Kaho Kabhi Saamne To Aaye
Mere Khwabon Mein Jo Aaye



She ran in the lawn dreaming of her Maan ... who is the only person probably she can ever dream either.



Kaisa Hai Kaun Hai Woh Jaane Kahan Hai



Tu jaanti hai Geet ... Nautanki band kar aur andar aaja ... Bukhar ho jayega toh main nahi karne wala teri seva, she didn't bother to listen to him, she just got busy in her own world ... the world of her Maan!!


Jiske Liye Mere Hothon Pe Haan Hai, Geet smiled taking breath


Teri hamesha Haan hoti hai ... Dev retorted


Apna Hai Ya Begaana Hai Woh, she asked her mother


Dono ... He said


Sach Hai Ya Koi Afsaana Hai Woh


Koi nahi hai woh tera


Dekhe Ghur Ghur Ke Yoonhi Door Door Se


Ghoorne ke liye mere bhai ke paas aur ladkiyan hai Geet


Usse Kaho Meri Neend Na Churaye


Tu sona band kar



Mere Khwabon Mein Jo Aaye Aa Ke Mujhe Chhed Jaaye
Usse Kaho Kabhi Saamne To Aaye
Mere Khwabon Mein Jo Aaye


bola na sona band karde nahi aayenge woh teri khwaab mein


Jadoosa Jaise Koi Chalne Laga Hai, Geet came to her room ... she stood mesmerized checking out her favourite picture of Maan



Phir gayab hoja ... Ill be saved from your torture



Main Kya Karoon Dil Machalne Laga Hai, she stood on the bed dancing


Bro se kehde dil kiske liye machalta hai


Tera Deewana Hoon Kehta Hai Woh


Haan teri khwaab mein


Chhup Chhup Ke Phir Kyun Rehta Hai Woh

Tujhse bachke rehta hai


Kar Baitha Bhool Woh Le Aaya Phool Woh

Phir se khwaab


Usse Kaho Jaaye Chand Leke Aaye

Itna mat ud


Mere Khwabon Mein Jo Aaye Aa Ke Mujhe Chhed Jaaye


Tujhe chhed ke zinda rehna hai bro ko??


Usse Kaho Kabhi Saamne To Aaye


Nahi aayenge ... She pushed Dev into the washroom and locked him ... Chillate rahiyo main gayi college.


Precap: Maan's entry!! Dreamy entry😳


this story is dedicated to Taani <3 a happy one coming from my heart hope you will love it <3



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no more pms from me book mark this thread and check for updates by yourself please!!


NEXT PART:

PART 2



Edited by dreamyharika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Awww!
Update was so dreamy n ssuperb 😳😳
Geet's madness for Maan sorry sorry her "ROCKSTAR"
hayeee aisa rockstar ho toh kon paagal nahi ho jayega 😆😆
Geet's dad also know about the madness of his daughter hehehe😆😆
Dev is Maan's brother n Geet's friend hopefully he will paly a role of cupid between Maaneet..😆😆
haye cant wait for Maan's entry..
And the song u chose one of my most fav song and moreover Dev's comments in song were so damn hillarious 🤣
u wont believe after reading update i saw that song video
5 -6 times before commenting i was lost in SRK 😉😉
Phir yaad aya comment karna so bhaag k aayi otherwise joote padte tujhse 😆😆
Loved every bit of update starting itni dreamy hai toh pata nahi aage kya hoga..
i'm going greedy now another update puhleaseee😆😆
Greedy Me 😉
love you for starting my story❤️
Update next soon 😉🤪

Aaj mujhe neend nahi aayegi waise bhi exams ki tension and now toh me in SRK n Maaneet's dreamland..😳😳
Mere khawabon mein jo aaye 😆😆
Edited by tanvinangia - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
intresting concept ..
MSK rockstr ... n geet his dewaaniii ... 😳 😉
love it ...
love the song ..
mere khawabo mai jo aye... 😳 😉 😳
w8ng 4 MSK dreammyy entry ... 😉 😉 😳
update soon..
n i lubbb the banner ... its soo beautifull awesome 😳 😉
Edited by zaidi98 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
maaan is a rockstar
n geet deewana on him
but she is fixed to dev by her family..
his brother..
maans entry
does he knew geets pagapan..
nice part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
awesome update...
maan rockstar...
geet is deewani of maan...
geet's father also know abt geet's rockstar madness...
geet ki shadi dev se fixed hai...
dev is maan's brother
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
awesomeee
maan is a rockstar
n geet deewana on him wow maans entry waiting for next update

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