THE LOCKET (17) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 13

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



hameshaa nahi kar sakthi na... i think they are not so clear... bas chalega!! u dont think so?


😊 du kya kal..??SR pic..
kitne chahiye..??
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aditi_2010

Awesome!!!! loved the update to core...the way Maan marched in but still did not fail to notice the scratched paint showed his keen observation and i loved his self thought about the children.the way you described geet teasing maan was really cooI could almost imagine watching maan fuming. I loved the short interaction with maithili. love the bond between the two. also the way you depicted their passionate encounter in tying the dori or at the apartment... I could almost have died of maan thud but the horrifying precap brought me back... the precap is interesting and am waiting for you to update...overall just too good and loved it😊


Thanks Aditi. Sometimes I debate about whether to give a precap or not. I did that even this time but I figured it was time to get back to the story so i stuck it in.


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: punam2712

AVI THANKS FOR THE PM AND PW


FIRST THE SONG AND THE VM
THIS IS MY MOST FAV SONG - I FIND IT VERY HOT
AND TO SEE A MANEET VM ON IT MADE MY DAY
WHAT A ROMANTIC UPDATE
MAAN WENT LIKE A LION OUT FOR THE DOE
BUT SEEING HER PLAYING WITH THE CHILDREN - HE JUST FELL MORE IN LOVE WITH HER
AND SEEING HER INTERACT WITH OTHERS KNOWS HOW SPECIAL SHE IS

LOVED THE IDEA OF BOTH OF THEM SPENDING TIME TOGETHER WHERE THEY COULD EXPLORE THEIR FEELINGS, THEIR LOVE AND PASSION FOR EACH OTHER WITHUT DISTURBANCE
NOW EVEN GEET WANTS HIM AND EXPRESSED IT TO HIM
MAAN HAS WANTED AND WAITED FOR HER FOR 5 LONG YEARS- HE DESERVES SOME REWARD



Thanks Punam. I was waiting to use this song😆
This moment seemed right.

Glad you liked it.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24



throw flower emoticon Oyeee avi.. padh liya...
Thanks...🤗
Hyeee me love maaneet moments...😳
Naughty Maan...😉

Glad you liked it
Thanks Babbie🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg you are planning to kill us
am sure of it now
aise doses dengi naa toh sach mein most readers like geet shall be going sharam se pani pani
no really
so he just couldnt catch a break could he
and be just her
hell no he couldnt
but finally gets to be with her
and boy did he take full advantage of the fact
awww isnt that so cute of him
well can we blame him for wanting to meet her
even she was dying to be with him
and then she provoked him bad move for sure
but it all worked out didnt it
well course it would with our deewana maan
boy we cant expect him to keep his hands off her not when she is finally going to be his
too much temptation
but we all know he would never make her too uncomfortable either
she too wants to be with him feel him just is too shy to go about it
loved their lunch date man so cute
what was that in the end
more headache for the thakurs i hope not
cheers for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago


u didnt tell any thing about this😒
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



u didnt tell any thing about this😒


ab kis baat pe bhadak gayi?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1


ab kis baat pe bhadak gayi?



thanku waali pic notce nahi kiya😭
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



thanku waali pic notce nahi kiya😭


Yeh wala?

So cute.. 😃

Aisse shout kar ke?😆

mujhe toh chumma wala thank you pic chahiye..

when she kisses his cheek in the fake snow 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1


Yeh wala?

So cute.. 😃

Aisse shout kar ke?😆

mujhe toh chumma wala thank you pic chahiye..

when she kisses his cheek in the fake snow 😳



i was in naughty mood 😆

tumhaare liye wo chaaho tho banaaoo

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