MG~ SS~The Torment -- UPDATED Pt 6 / Pg 111/ 8th Feb. .............. - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lakshu,priya,;i;y.mauaa,dona,indu,rasmi,sona N mona..🤗


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hello babiedi,lilydi,lakshmidi,mauaa
missing u priyadi

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: singh24







Lakshu,priya,;i;y.mauaa,dona,indu,rasmi,sona N mona..🤗



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Posted: 11 years ago
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For banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi...🤗

Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.





Part - 1





Dadima and Maan landed on Delhi Airport in a hot day of July * Dadima was happy to see her home town but her loving G son Maan was fuming with anger inwardly * he was here only for his Dadima to whom he can't deny anything . She is d only support and a shadow for him who is saving him from every hardship and heat of this cruel world but this time he was in a fix * Dadima who never denied him for anything turned down his wish to merry d girl he loves from last two yrs. Dadima didn't like his extra mod GF coz of her drinking , smocking and high parting habit but for him these things r common in US culture and high society life * in his school and college max students used to of these things and in his business circle these things r common but who argued with this old lady who is stick to her morals , culture ans with d promise of his late son and DIL.

Before coming in India he tried his best to convince her Dadima for Sam but she outrightly rejected her and said that he has to fullfil his late parents wish to marry their friends daughter .. Geet.


He was annoyed and couldn't think for any girl except his love Sam * he said to Dadima that what would happen if that girl denied to marry me or what would u do if she love some one?


Dadima gave him a clean chit that if Geet denied for d marriage she won't force him and he would be free from his parents' promise but Dadima was deadly sure that Geet won't turn her down, she would respect her parents promise.( after meeting with an massive accident Rano died at d spot and Mahinderwas on death bed * he called his childhood friend and his wife Ritu * they flew down at once from US * in Army Hospital they met with Mahinder and seeing his condition Yash and Ritu promised him that Geet is their would be DIL and their responcibility * after completing Maan and Geet's education they would tell them)


Dadima knew about it and she informed Darji too about their son's wish * he too was happy with this alliance , for him and Brij it was like .. kill two birds with one stone. Darji was d care taker of Yash's property in Hoshyarpur after leaving him for US and now they were d most powerful jamidaar of d village coz they shared half of d profit from Yash's farms , 2nd he didn't like Geet coz Mahinder married Rano secretly who was an orphan and she was also in defence with Mahinder. Dadrji hated Rano and didn't allow her to enter in Handa Haweli but after Mahinder's demise he was forced to look after Geet to maintain his respect in d village * most of d time Geet lived in hostle and came for holidays * in that period Brij didn't allow her to go out * he too hated her but after knowing from Darji that Savitri Devi wanted Geet for his G Son his greed and dirty mind started planning * Maan was Khurana's only Son with unlimited wealth and with this marriage their whole property of village came in his grip which wd make him a powerful person of that Pind(village) * for him money and power is d main thing and he could do anything for this .


Dadima and Maan reached in Hoshiyarpur ans satyed in their big Haweli * Dadima had her own plans and Maan had his own * in eve both went to Handa's Haweli and met Dadrji and his elder son and DIL * Darji was fully agreed with alliance and wanted that girl away from his sight ASAP.


In d morning darji ,Bril and his parents informed Geet to get ready properly and when she asked d reason Brij's maa told her that her father's friend family is coming to fix d shaadi for their son who r settled in US. In heart Geet felt happy coz she too wanted to go US for further study and for that she cleared d GRE and got d good score * Rajji teased her and hugged her lovingly saying ...Di aap mujhe bhi apne paas bula lena higher study ke liye * Geet hit her playfully and then hugged her back .


Geet was in her room when Dadima and Maan came to meet * Maan was planning and boosting himself inwardly * after some time Geet came with Rajji and sat there with lower head after touching Dadima's feet * Dadima was touched by her simplecity, beauty and her etiquette * she praised his son's choice * after some talks Maan voice out his desire to talk to Geet alone though Brij didn't like this but he didn't have any option and kept quiet getting Darji's signal * Rajji brought Geet and Maan on terrace and left from there winking at Geet * Both stood quietly for few min and then Maan broke d silence.


Maan: listen miss Geet , I don't want to drag d talk so coming to d point i'm saying that I don't want to marry u , I love my GF and won't leave her but I can't deny and hurt Dadima and she is obstinate to this alliance * u won't get anythis from this marriage so I advice u to denie it right now .


Geet: this is ur prob then why don't u walk out and said clearly to all that u love some one else ?


Maan: Dadima said that if u denied then she won't force me and allow me to go for my choice * I don't know u and I 'm in relation with my GF so there is no use of this marriage , u won't get nothing from me coz I wont leave her and if u denied then all prob solved , so plz turned down this proposal making any excuse . I'm nothing to u and u r nothing to me so find some one else of ur choice .


Geet: but if I denied my family felt bad and ur Dadima also .


Maan: they r just ur relative and v r nothing to u , be practical and think for u and ur happiness * if u think u got lot of money after this marriage that I could give u with out marriage * I ...


Enough mr Khurana ... She cut his words ,,,, keep ur money with u , I have enough for me and u r right here u r not fit for me , i'll refuse to marry u .


She felt disgusted to talk to this selfish person who is only thinking about his happiness and what is d use of this marriage if he loves and in relation with some one else.


They came down and entered in d living hall * all eyes turned on them * Geet stood with a lower head fumbling with d corner of her dupatta while Maan was delighted on his succus .


Precap--- d wrath ...


Part - 2


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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow aaj iska bhi updtt milega,,,👏


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: LILY111144


🤗 Hi lily...
oyeee tum daily chupke se ku bhaag jaati ho..😲😲

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Posted: 11 years ago
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maan kko humesha pyar karne k liye ye chudail hi milti hai kya😡
geet khus hai ki wo apni study k liye US ja payegi shadi k baad...
maan khid mana nahi kar sakta selfish kahika...
usski dadima dadima wo unhe mana nahi kar sakta...
aur geet ka kya wo apni poori family ko mana kar sakti hai 😡😡😡
geet ne achha jawab diya maan ko...
geet's family grrr
bt agar geet na karegi to brij aur darji usska kya haal karenege??!!

Edited by goldenmoon - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: LILY111144


kya lily di chupke se aakar post kar k bhag jate ho😆😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

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yaar kal mom ki tabiyat kharab ho gayee thi,,, so hv 2 run 2 doc ,,,

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