Originally posted by: maanland
superb dear
again a mindblowing and heart pounding update
love ur intro poems dear
oh the man selfish for his loved ones THY NAME IS MAAN
he did everything for geet
and geet calling him selfish
how we fail to see the other side of the coin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
😕😕
but now everything clear
so so relieved
Yash is truly amazing
perfect as the third person in this love triangle
all understanding all loveful caring everything
this story of urs can be very well adapted for a hit Bollywood movie
with all the correct ingredients and the most promising debut
Gurmeet and Drashti as lead pair😳😳😳
oh oh getting off track
what do I do
ur description make me visuliaze them in each and every frame dear
and how in middle of such serious confession between yash and geet u could come up with the line
what do u think I am geet
and geet' s answer
a doctor
hilarious it was dear😆😆😆
wonderful portrayal of geet's emotions👏👏👏
be it with dev or yash
and then geet running towards her maan
superb superb dear
only one thing was missing
the song
TERI DEEWANI ...
so apt for this situation
and then coming to the bandrastand
and all her thoughts
lovely yaar
liked ur take how we cant keep everyone happy
and when one is not happy he cant make others happy
great yaar
I think it's simply because we will give to others only that we already have
if we don't have happiness we cant give it to others
loved maan's parting kiss
and the reason for a hanging tale
WO AFSANA JISE ANZAAM TAK LANA NA HO MUMKIN
USE IK KHUBSURAT MOD DEKE CHODNA ACCHA
👏( lines from an old song )
u know dear I am not at all angry with u for stopping at the wrong moment
bcoz I want to cherish each and every moment of their togetherness all their emotions
when they will come face to face again and when geet will confess
what would be maan's reactions
everything
and when u write it becomes so spcl so real
in this update u very well penned geet's dilemma and her acceptance her wrong choice and everything
so I want to read their union in detail
so it's better in the next part
so we can enjoy each and every emotion of maan and geet
thank u so much for such lovely update
though it's holi time now
but in the update it's Diwali
but for our maan and geet it would be both colours of love and light of happiness
waiting for the next part eagerly dear
and thanks so much for ur reply😃
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