Sargoshiyan-Whisper of Love#4 - EPILOGUE updated on Page 101 -26th Aug - Page 27

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Posted: 11 years ago
fabulous story loved it
i loved innocent geet
maan teasing superb
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally ab maaneet ki shadi jaldi hi ho jayegi
and they will be one after a long fight for their love
ab toh geet ke papa bhi maan gaye ki sab log ek jaise nahi hote hai
but the twist u gave took my breathe away aisa koi karta hai kya
but now no worries maaneet r going to get married soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
so he is saved from that incident but who can shot him? Is it DEV???
love maaneet romance before their marriage
& please take care of urself. Updates can wait


P.S. sorry for commenting late. so much is happening in my life plus busy college schedule
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Posted: 11 years ago
such a sweet update! feel better 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
finally
i followed up all the parts i had missed till now
what an emotional roller coaster!
i love this FF and at one point i was too scared u might give it a sad end and i would feel so bad . but im happy u decided to keep us happy 😛

Mohinder was over protective but he wasnt wrong either. but he scolded poor Geet so bad and she attempted suicide Arjun was so supportive and he understood how his little sister was not wrong and also his wife Ria . they both did their role in finally making mohinder change his decision.

Maan 😭 dekh lo phir sam. sub se ziada bura haal Maan ka kia hai is story mei. pehle wo bechara aik jhoot bol k phansa. us k baad Geet k papa se thappadd khaya 😃 apni family k samnay bhi budhu bana , Geet k father ne reject kia , Geet attempted suicide , then the poor guy got shot thank God u posted a jump in next part to their haldi ceremony (present) and i cant figure out yet who could have shot him. but i request. bechary ko achy se khush hua va hona chahie end mei 😉 hahahaha 😆

and take care of ur healthy baby 🤗
waiting for next part but ONLY when u r completely well 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
first thing ... get well soon... we are in no hurry to read end of sargoshiyaan... ofcourse i want a little more 😉 😛 but koi nai... tu bas jaldi se ache se teek hojana...
read previous two updates now... sorry yaar... itne din time nahi milraha ta... and i was feeling guilty that i couldnt comment on last part from so long... but glad that u have not yet updated it... 😃

wasie last to last update me kya twist dala hai yaar... MAAN ko waise gun shot kiya kisne??? me to ek dum se dargayi ti... kahi tum sad ending to nahi liken wali ho... but after reading last part... im happy... 😃

loved MAAN coming infront of everyone n kneeling infront of GEET... n telling to the world... that she is his life... 😳
and in last update loved haldi's part... waise unable to comment in detail...but whole thing was cute... very nice 😉 loved their kissy sessions... 😳
waiting for next so eagerly... n also u to recover back to normal...
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb ...read all the parts in one go...too gud...pls continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
waiting..are you ok yaar..pls update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
when will the tomorrow come please update wating
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Posted: 11 years ago
lappy crushed, n unfortunately i saved the next part on desktop after rechecking it for update... 😕
will take 2 more days to rewrite again... and yes another thing is, I'm still sick so can't sit with lappy for a long time. thts why taking time to write even one part
my BBA final viva is on 13th May guys do pray for my health so that i can feel little bit better at least on my viva day
anyways, i'm posting little bit teaser from last part and epilogue as i've done with all the parts, so next parts will be one after another 😊

Teaser 1 (from Last Part):
Maan keep ogling at her with his big eyes as she was looking not less than an angel in her wedding dress

Geet: Maan, stop staring like that

Maan: my love, my wife, my life, who's going to stop me. let me see you jaan. I couldn't able to do that down there

Geet: But its feeling like you are looking at some fruit and going to eat me

Maan: i may eat you raw tonight

Geet: Then do something na? It's almost half hour now we are sitting in same position. I'm feeling sleepy. and i will throw you out of the room if you don't make this night romantic and make me sleepy

Geet threatened making Maan white in horror


Teaser 2 (From Epilogue):

Maan: fine, I will come home before the sun set down. But jaan, you have to tell me everything, right? I can't just read your minds like those moron authors write down in their stupid idiotic fairy tales type stories.


Geet just nodded while weeping those falling water from her nose, and like always with his shirt.


Maan looked down at her while smiling. He brought her closer and coddled her more closely to him.


Maan: I want us to be 100% honest with each other. You can share whatever you feel jaan, no need to hide your thoughts away from me.


Geet: can I say whatever I feel like?


Maan: whatever and ever you feel like.


Geet: okay... i... well... I feel like a huge fatty whale... and... and a pretty unattractive oldy woman... my back and my feel hurt with this overweight... and... and... and I feel scared to even look at myself on the mirror... and..and...


She started crying, well almost whaling in middle


Teaser 3 (From Epilogue):

Maan's Monologue:

I held out my hands as the nurse placed my baby girl in my arms. She looked up at me and yawned. And she just looked directly at me with her beautiful doe shaped eyes. At that moment I knew we made a bond between us. A beautiful and one of the most strongest bond in the world. On the moment I made a vow that I will protect her till my last breath on this earth. I'd die before I'd let anyone or anything hurt her. And I knew she would always trust me to take care of her and to love her unconditionally as well.


Okay now if anyone interested to suggest any baby pic for Maan and Geet's child, do pm me. i know i will not get good response, still telling as if anyone is interested in it 😊

Edited by Dipti_Sam - 11 years ago

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