*SAATHIYA* #4 EPILOGUE updated on 28-2-2014 on Page-71 - Page 29

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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update !!

maanya angry on maan for leaving her for a month & maan sad for this ..

finally maan & geet ne manaa liya maanya ..mission accomplished ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely part... finally maaneet confessed der love to each oder... & maanu is really a jr. msk showing her gussa on msk not bad... family moment was cute... nw dey r nw happy family... do cont soon cant wait to read more of it...
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PART - 42 LAST PART

MAANEET'S life is running very smoothly with their angel. They sorted out their all issues and overcome from their problems one by one. Four months passed with the speed of jet propeller. In between Avika learn office work under the guidence of Maan and start working with him. Everything is going smoothly and Maanya turn 1 year old. Her birthday arrived which is not less then a festival for KM ppl,sply for Maan. His Angel start uttering some words and her first word is papa,which delighted him unbelievably. Everytime when she calls him,Maan felt like he won a war. Her melodious voice is like psalm for him. Maan take a day off to spend time with his Angel. Maan is roaming in his balcony with Maanya in his arm. He is spending time with her. Both dont need anyone if they are with each other. Maan showing her the view of outside which she enjoyed alot. Suddenly he noticed some unpleasent view at the main gate. He called his security and he informed him about the matter. Maan cuts the call in anger. His eyes turn dark with rage at sudden. Maan went inside the room,where Geet is adjusting the room as whole room is filled with the dresses Maan brought for her on the ocassion of her b'day.


'Maan what is this? Apne pura room Maanu ki kapdo se bhar diya hai. Yahi haal raha na to bahut jald ek room ko hi iska wardrobe banana padega.' Geet is cribbing but Maan not replying to her.


'Geet ek min.' Maan rosed her to Geet,but Maanu shook her head pacily and wrapped her arms round his neck. 'mera good baby mumma k paas jayega.' Maan coaxing her. He signaled Geet. Geet noticed his tension and take Maanya from his arms.


'maanu come to mumma hum dono Avika bua ko shock karenge.' Geet rolled her eyes and make funny faces to coaxing her. Maanya laughed seeing her mother's antics. She now get ready to go to her mumma. Geet kissed her,'mera naughty baby.'


Maan was in his shorts only so he quickly wore his shirt and lower. 'Maan aap kahi ja rae ho?' she asked confusingly as Maan promised,today he wont leave KM for any reason.


'Geet i am coming shortly. Ek last gift reh gaya hai jo main apni princess ko dunga for her secured future.' He kissed maanya before leaving the room.


'papa umm... Papa', Maanya calling him. She dont want him to go.


'papa coming darling. Bas 5 mins.' Maan make her understand and leave quickly before she start crying.


Maan quickly reached to main entrance and glared the women creating noise there. He clenched her arm and puller otherside of the gate,not want any of his family member saw her. 'what the hell are u doing here Lavaya?' he burst on her. Lavanaya flich off his hands and glared him back.


'how dare you Mr. MSK? You overtake my whole bussiness and ruined me. Just becoz of you i wont even have a place to live.' she accused him for her ruined state.


Maan smirked at her condition. 'you deserve this Lavanya. What do you think k tum meri family sply meri beti ko chot pahuchaogi or main tume jane dunga. No lavanya no. I warned you last time stay away from my family but you wont listen to me to bhukto. Pichhli bar to maine tume jane diya tha lekin is baar nahi. You hurt my whole family. Dadima,Avika Geet and most important my Angel. Tume kya laga mujhe kabi pata nahi chalega. Jitne aansu in sabne bhaye hai na un sabki keemat ab tum chukaogi. Bina paiso k. I bring u on road. Now go and live your burdened life. Yahi tumhari saza hai.' Maan pushed her away and cautioned his guards that he dont want to see her even near by KM. His guards nodded and threw her away from the KM. Lavanya only cursed him having no other option is left. Maan ruined her completely,by overtaking her all properties in just 5 months.


Maan came back inside and Geet staring him suspeciously. He trying to avoid her eyes but Geet clenched his wrist. 'ye sab kya hai Maan? I overheared your convo. Maan Lavanya apki dost hai aap aise kaise kar skte ho uske sath?' She is astonished and want explainantion.


'Geet she deserve this. Tume pata hai Maanu ki kidnapping ki master mind koi or nahi balki Lavanya thi. Maanu k sahare wo hume b alag karna chahti thi or shayad kamiyam b ho jati agr dadima ne sai time pe mujhe pura sach na btaya hota to. Jaise hi dadima ne btaya ki tum mujhe sari baat btane wali thi par mumbai me hui emergency ki wajhse main sunn nahi paya tumhari baat. Usi time main samjh gaya tha ye sari baate aapas me connected hai. Mumbai main dobara woi sab pata karne gaya tha or union leafer ne thodi si sakti k baad sab kuchh bol dia. Usi time maine decide kar liye tha that she should pay for her sins.", Maan told her the whole truth.

Geet is stunned still she showing pity on her. "Maan think once again. Is this right?", she almost try to change his mind.

"Geet no one has a right to harm my daughter. No one. Friendship ki wajhse hi maine last time use maaf kar diya tha but this time she crossed all the limits so no more argument. I wont change my decision." Maan cleared her.

Geet turn silent. She knows now there is no use of argument over this issue,because when things comes to Maanya,Maan wont tolarte mistakes. Both went inside for the prepration of evening.

All servants done there job and make hall ready. Both Maan and Geet also getting ready for the party when Maan hold her from back side and kissed on her neck line. Geet shivered and moaned as soon his kisses tudn more aagressive and passionate. Maan turned her to him and both list in each other's eyes. He leaned over her lucious lios and pecked them. Geet fists his bkazer firmly melting in his touch. Geet also want him to cruch her in his embrace but her mind cautioned her and she reminds Maan too. "Dont worry Geet i am also aware of the ocasssion just want to thank you fir giving me such a precious gift year back." He told with a smile and overwhelemed her. Both's boured in each other till Avika's cough sound broke their trance moment.

"Sorry bhai but your princess is ready and all are wsiting for her." Avika brought Maanya with her. She is dressed up in red fairy frock brought by Maan for the ocassion. Maan took her and left the room without taking Geet.

"Avika dekha apne bhai ko. Beti mill jati hai to biwi ko to bilkul hi bhul jate hai." Geet cribbed cutely.

"Dont worry bhabhi main hu na apko le jane k liye." Avika hold her hand like boys do and took her to party hall.hall is filked with guests. Geet reached to Maan and both cut the cake with Maanya. All blessed and wished her. Whole KM is delighted with the noise and lights. Everyine is enjoying. She recieved many gifts today. After the guests leave Geet make her sleep asshe was very tired. Maan commands the servants to keep all the presents at one place.


Life turn very beautiful forMaan and Geet. 4 years paased and they live happily. No issue is bothering them. Today Maanya turn 5 year old. As usual Maan wished her first. Nothing is changed between them.


Same like before,every year Maan celebrate her birthday with same pompusly parties. He fullfilked her every wish. But this time Maanya keep her wish secreat and take a promise from Maan that she tells later. She cuts the cake and all wished her. Whole hall is covered with gifts.




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When all the guests leave and Maanya was alone with her parents she revealed about her wish. "Papa mumma apne promise kiya tha na. Now i want my gift." Maanya making atmosphere.


Geet embraced her and loved her. " to kya socha meri princess ne?" Geet asked her lovingly.

"Papa mumma mere sare friends k chhote bhai ya behan hai. To aap dono ne promise kiya hai. Mujhe b chahiye chhota bhai ya behan." Maanya told her wish glancing innocently to her parents.

Maan first was shocked,then he composed himself and dragged Maanya in his arms. He took her in his lap and start manupulating her decision. "Aa Maanu aap kya karoge chhote bhai ya behan ka. Aap to khud hi abi kitne chhote ho. Or firr apko pata hai jab apka sibbling aayega na to firr mumma papa apko time nahi de payenge. Sara attention wo chhote baby ko milega. Or wo apke toys tod dega. Apse ladai b karega. Pata hai apko." Maan spoiling her little mind. Geet wouldnt like the way he handling the issue.

"Nai koi bast nahi par mujhe yahi chahiye. I want brother or sister bas." Maanya acts stubbornly and ran to her room. Geet ran behind her and take her in her arms. She coaxed her. Soon maanya slept, but her eyes are wet.

Geet went to her room and argued with Maan. "Geet ye kya tarika hai? Aap kaise handle kar rae hai maanu ko?" Geet is angry which showing through her stern tone.

"Geet maine woi kia jo theek tha. Tumne suna na wo kya maang rai thi. Main uski har wish puri kar skta hu sivaye iske." Maan snap back.

"Kyu aisa kya maang liya usne jo aap use de nahi skte. Maan sirf maanu ko hi nahi,mujhe b ab chahiye dusra bachha." Geet fists his collar and confronts him.

Maan flinch off her hands. "Geet bhulo mat. Maanu k paida hone se pehle hi ye decide ho gaya tha ki hum maanu k alwa kabi koi bachha apni zindagi me shamil nahi karenge." Maan reminds her about his promise he had gave to her before her birth.

"Maan tab ki baat or thi. But now everything is changed. I too want baby Maan." Geet argued.

"Geet ye kabi nahi hoga understood." Maan said strongly.

"Maan kyu nahi hoga. Dusra bachha lane me problem kya hai?" Geet stick with her view.
Maan grasped her arms strongly. "Ek baar bola na nahi matlab nahi." He glared her and breath sharply. Geet too glared him back and he leave her.

"Maan main btau aap darte hai. Darte hai ki apka khud ka baby aa gaya to Maanu k liye apka pyar kam ho jayega kyunki wo apki apna khoon nahi hai." Geet provoked him.


Maan's anger rosed and he hit the wall besides Geet's head to shower out his anger. "Dont you dare. Aaj bol diya hai. Dobara main ye baat nahi sunna chahta. She is my daughter and no one can change this truth." Maan is fuming furiously.


"Exactly Maan. Wo sirf or sirf apki beti hai. Koi b cheez kabi b uske liye apka pyar badl nahi skta. Firr kyu aaj apne use rula diya wo b uske birthday k dinn. Ek baar sochiyega zaroor. Maan mujhe apke pyar pe shak nahi hai par lagta hai apko hi khud pe yakeen nahi hai." Geet taunts him while wiping off her tears. She leave from there in angry mode. Maan is hell confused. He went to Maanya's room an settled her room. He sat besides her head. She is sleeping. Maan bend and kissed her. Her cheeks are still wet due ti her tears. Maan's heart bleeds seeing his angel in pain. He cant bear her tears.

"I m sorry princess. Papa never hurts you. Never in my dreams." He turf off the lights and left the room. When he entered in their room Geet is awaken but seeing him she turn iff the lamp of her side and pretend of sleeping. Maan knows her and her anger. He wont effort much and laid besides her.

Three days passed but Geet is not talkung with him properly. Even Maanya is so upset. She also talking very less with both. Maan heart ached as two important part of his life is angry with him. He seeking for a moment and catch Geet. She annoyed him not giving proper response to his apolozy but he wont give up.

"Pls Geet i know mujhe aise baat nahi karni chahiye thi." He pleads politely.

"Maan mujhe kaam hai." She is moving but Maan stopped her clenching her wrist firmly. He pulled her to him.

"Geet kya main tumhari maafi k b kabil nahi hu?" He asked in a painful voice.

"Maan who am i?" She feels his pain but her anger wont let her calm.

"Pls Geet. Atleast you try to understand my feelings." He is pleading.

"Maan main nahi samjhti. Maan main sab samjhti hu. Par aap kyu nahi samjhte. Maanya or main galat nahi hai. Uska b mann karta hai ki koi ho juske sath wo sab share karske. Maan toys sibblings ki jagah nahi le skte. Main b akeli rahi hu or mujge pata hai kaisa feel hota hai. Bhai behan ho to friends ki b kami nahi lagte. Ek level k baad hum sari bate parents k sath share nahi karte apne sibblings k sath karte hai. Maan please maan jaiye." Geet convincing him.

"Par Geet i love Maanu only. To ho skta hai main us baby ko itna pyar nahi de pau to kta ye us bacche k sath galat nahi hoga?" Maan shred his fears.

Geet cupped his face. "Maan apka mann ek sagar jaisa hai jisme bahut sara pyar bhara hai. Mujhe pura yakeen hai ki hum dono apne dono bachho ko achhe se sambhal sakte hai. Unhe ek sa pyar de skte hai." Geet assuring and calming his doubts.

"Do you think so?" Maan doubted.

"Maan i trust you more than myself." She said with a wide smile calming his all doubts.

Both hugged in anticipation. "I love you." Both confessed and soothing each others pain.

"When you are with me i will definately handle everything." Maan kissed her and she too kissed him back.

Both went to Maanya's room. She is sitting sadly. Both sit around her and start coaxing her. She threw some tantrums but maaneet monified her and promised her that noe they give her what she demands. Maanya's eyes gleamed and she kissed both as a gratitude. Maan make her sleep tugging her under her duvet. Both kissed her and make her sleep. Soon she slept in solace and they turn off the lights.

Maan scooped Geet and both's eyes locked.

"Maan..." Geet's beats raised.

"Chale? Ab Maanu ko diya promise b to pura karna hai. To uski taiyari to karni padegi na." Maan wincked while whispering husikly in her ears and made Geet flushed furiously.

Both reached to their room and kissed passionately before drowning in their world. Their lifes have settled now. Both found true Saathiya in form of each other who covring each other's weakness and compleye their emptyness...


Edited by richadhami - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

part 41

beautiful update
finally maaneet ke beech sab theek hai but maanya is angry with papa for leaving her for one whole month that too without saying anything
loved the eay daima teased maan but geet understood his pain and sadness and helped him to manofy maanya
Edited by gurti30 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely ending of Awesome story :)
loved it a lot yar:)
waiting fr Epilogue :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome ending...will u update epilogue?
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice ending so maan came to know about lavanya and he even destroyed her. now they are happy family and now because of maanya they want to bring another child.



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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful end to a beautiful story😊
maanya wanted a sibling as her bday gift but maan was scared to share his love with other baby but geet made him understand
and that lavyna got what she deserved
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Posted: 11 years ago
aww that was so cute
so he didnt wanna have baby due to his promise to her
well things had changed naa
and geet is right in what she said
you wont be able to love the new baby less
or not pay same attention to manu
thank god she made him see sense
what was he telling manu about the baby man
that wasnt the way to go about
but he was worried for manu naa
ahhh so he did find out about lavanya huh
well he is MSK so of course he would
that was so cute the way manu asked for her present
first time her dad refused as he was didnt wanna pay less attention to both manu and the new baby
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely ending
hope you write an epi..

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