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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: goldenmoon

pain zyada nahi hua hai na???aur fever kaisa hai abhi




fever kam huwa par TT injection diya dr ne uska pain aur leg ka pain hai
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

hi priya ,,,,😊

hw r u doing...??aaj aogii,,??



Hi lily...🤗
aa gai...😛
lakshu ka note padha..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: goldenmoon

pain zyada nahi hua hai na???aur fever kaisa hai abhi

priya wat happened?
sab theek hai na?
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Posted: 11 years ago
jhappiisss yaro:)
but Hello Hi Bye Bye:)
ghar main guests hain:(
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111




fever kam huwa par TT injection diya dr ne uska pain aur leg ka pain hai


😲 oyee kya hua kiddo ko..??
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sona-rai

jhappiisss yaro:)

but Hello Hi Bye Bye:)
ghar main guests hain:(


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sona-rai

priya wat happened?
sab theek hai na?




hi sona
bas badi ko 5din se fever tha aur aaj hospital se aathe waqt chota sa accident huwa hubby choti aur badi ko

hubby aur choti ko kuch nahi huwa bas badi ko toe may kuch jyaada injury huyi hai aur knees may bhi kharoch aagayi thi
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sona-rai

jhappiisss yaro:)

but Hello Hi Bye Bye:)
ghar main guests hain:(



lo yeh aagayi aur gayi bhi😆😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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For banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi....🤗



We need a little tears to clear the Mist in our eyes,
a little assurance to clear the Doubts in our head,
a little hug to nurse our Aching hearts,
and a little rest to carry on Moving forward.

Glimpse ...

Nothing is there to trust, nothing is there to love , a broken base of relation and a misty way to go.
Their heart full of pain , their mind full of hate , an uncertain relation and a long way to go.

Note... This is a fiction. If someone feel that it reflect any other writer's work , then plzz pm me . I'll try my best to keep it un affected ... This is all imaginary not reality so enjoy it . Plz avoid if u find any mistake.












Part -- 90



They were in d plane and she was sitting resting her head on his shoulder * Geet was very nervous * Maan passed his time reading a book then he too slept holding her hand in his * they woke up when they heard d announcement for fastening d belts coz d plane was going to land . The honour of d hotel sent a car to receive them and after 1hr they were in a very beautiful hotel * their room was very luxurious * they went to freshen up and had their BF .

Maan: Geet what do u want 1st shopping or want to go to see d city?


Geet: Maan i want to see The Grand Mosque , it's d most beautiful mosque in d world.


Maan smiled and nodded in yes .. OK, get ready.


Maan informed at d reception counter to arrange a cab for sight scene * they came out and sat in d car * d driver was a South Indian and he wished them in hindi ... Namaskar , Dubai mei aapka swagat hei Sir.


Geet : tum Indian ho ?


Driver : yes Ma'am , i'm from Kerala.


Geet: good fir to hume kaafi help ho jayegi .


Driver : Grand mosque dekhne ja rahe hei to be careful ,,, wahan aapko kaftan aur Hizaab pahanna padega , sir ke liye prob nahi lekin aapko full cover hona mangta , wo aapko milega wahin enterance per.


Geet: OK, thanks , yahan kaafi strict rules hei.


Driver : ji ma'am, and No PDA ( public display affection ).


Maan and Geet looked at each other and smile .


Driver : at night u can enjoy d cruse sailing in sea .


Geet: Ok , thanks.


They reached at d Mosque * Geet and Maan were amazed to see that beautiful structure of art.


They visited d Mosque and that took their 3-4 hrs * after that Driver took them some nearby sites and dropped them back at hotel * he gave them some good cruses names . man asked Geet if she wanted to go on cruse and she willingly agreed * Maan came at d reception counter and told them to arrange their seats in d best cruse and informed them. Both came back in d room and Maan informed Geet that he had a meeting in d morning with d owner and some of famous businessmen of Dubai .


Geet: meeting , aur mai yahan bore houngi .


Maan : nahi , bore nahi hone dunga , apna iPad lena aur apne IF ke maje lena , raat mei net nahi kholne dunga ,,clear.


Geet: OK , fine.


Maan got their booking in a cruse for d eve and he told Geet to get ready .


Maan gave her a naughty smile and said: so ,isse mei apni 1st dinner date samjhu Geet ?


Geet bit her lower lip and blushed * he came back to her very close that and encircled his arms around her waist * he nuzzled in her nape * she shuddered and her breath struck in her throat * she felt a pit in her tummy and her knees turned jelly * Maan too was lost in her and to quench d thrust of his dry lips he placed them on curve of her neck and gave a wet kiss * she gasp , turned and hugged him tightly * her breaths were uneven and he could feel d soft fleshy pressure of her mounts on his chest .. Geet , he groaned * he held her tightly and showered wet kisses on her shoulder, neck, jaw line and earlobe ... Maan ,,, hmmm . .. Maan ,,, jaan,,, mai gir jaungi .


Maan chuckled and kissed on her cheek : maine pakda hei na , nahi girne dunga , kya hua ?


Geet: kuch - kuch hota hei tummy mei .


Maan: mujhe bhi , its love .


Geet lifted her face and looked at him dazed ... Love ???


Maan: hmmm.


His phone buzzed and broke their lovey dovey moments * he looked d screen showing Dadima's name * he whispered Geet to go and change and replied d call * he came in balcony and talked to Dadima and then YSK

Geet got ready and came to him * he was mesmerised seeing her * she was in a saree and sleeveless blouse , open hair , minimal make up , very simple and elegant * she felt shy and lowered her head unable to bear his intense gaze . He compose himself and came close to her ...Prefect , chalen.


The Cruse was d best and was awed seeing that * d whole ship was decorated with lights and flowers coz of New Year * she held Maan's arm in excitement .. Maan it's beautiful .

Maan: u like it?


Geet: i love it.


He smiled and they entered in d ship through a jetty * their table was booked and d attendant took them there * Maan ordered juice for Geet and a beer for him * It was a big hall and there was a big stage for live music and dances * in an hr d hall was full of couples and visitors. Maan ordered dinner all Geet's choice .


Geet: Maan ordered something for ur choice also.


Maan: Geet , wo mujhe bhi pasand hei , relax.


Their dinner served and both were enjoying that with lil talk and watching dance and music * after few min d group changed and d new group came to performed there and started their dance * a girl was dancing with some boys and girls .


Maan's hands stopped at his place and his eyes were fixed at d stage * Geet noticed his reaction and followed his gaze , first she didn't recognised but after few sec she too got a shock * her expressions also changed at once * there was she ... Sam dancing on stage on peppy hindi song and smiling at people ( some Shekhs ) * Geet looked at Maan and placed her hand on his arm .. Maan.


Maan looked at her * his eyes were red and jaws were tightly clinched * he was boiling in anger * she shuddered seeing him like that * pressing her hand on his she whispered in cracky voice .. Maan ,,, please . He closed his eyes and left a deep sigh to control his anger * Geet was caressing his hand looking at him painfully * for Geet it was also unbearable * she gave him a glass of water and he gulp that without giving her a look * after few min he felt relaxed and placed his hand on Geet to assure her that he is fine now * both gave an understanding look to each other * Geet nodded in a NO and he blinked at her positively .


The danced was ended and d dancers changed for next item * Sam couldn't see Maan and Geet bcoz their table was near d glass railing lil away from stage * Maan excused him for washroom and went out from d hall * when he came out in corridor he caught an attendant , gave him a tip and sent a msg in green room * he waited in lone part lil away from there * he was looking out in d sea through d glass placing his both hands in d picket * his face was tough and eyes were blank .


She came there dressed in a diff outfit for d dance ,, a colourful lahanga with a deep cut choli ( no dupatta) and very dark make up ... Yes sir , is that u who called me here ?


Maan turned : yes it's me , Hi ,,, nice to see u here ,, very good place for u .


Sam was stunned to see him there right in front of her * she was looking at him with wide eyes and opened mouth * d beads of sweat appeared on her forehead * she froze at her place .


Maan: so miss u got what u deserve . He gave her a sarcastic smile twisting his lips .


She was numb and looking at him motionless * whole past rewind in her mind * how she ran away from d marriage and emptied his account and fetched lots of money then her twisted journey to Dubai * meeting with Rahul * who first made her to dance in his dance troop * there he was enjoying with her making her fool to introduce her in a movie but that was a blunt lie * after 2 months they had a fight and he threaten her to left * she didn't know anybody there and decided to keep quiet * as her habit she trap a rich Shekh and spent some time with him and snatched some money* he brought her in his private home * from there she saw d real world * Rahul's dance troop left for another city and he didn't bother to contact her * she lived in that Shakhs luxurious house for few days but got bore * he was using her and paying her but she was not allowed to go out * after few days she left that place but she didn't have any place to stay * went to that place where she lived with Rahul and his troop but they had left * she tried to contact Rahul but he refused to talk * she lived there for few days and soon she was in lack of money * now she had only one option to request Rahul and live on his terms coz she didn't have much money and any hope in India to survive . After that she was dancing in his troop and staying with him . They performed in big hotels and cruses in Dubai and other cities of middle east.


Maan's words broke her chain of thoughts .


Maan: d people like u deserve only bins , ( He smiled) i'm very happy and thankful to u that u ran away at d very right time and we were saved . Thank You so much , u got ur beautiful life and i got my happiness * one more thing don't think to look at my city bcoz if i saw u there , u would be behind d bar for stealing my card and fetching money and many more accessions which police would make against u * u r safe from Maan Singh Khurana's wroth if u r here * enjoy d life of a s**t , u deserve this .


Precap" some beautiful Maaneet moments ...

Part - 91





Sorry for mistakes.

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