SS - Yearning Love : Deleted and no more updates on IF - Page 17

Originally posted by: Rajshree12

Superbbb prologue di..
lovely concept..
Geet is dancing in the bar just bcoz she will get money to feed herself & the other person..but who is tht???
Pari..Geet's frnd...is tht pari???
Maan has lost his love...but why??..& why he got wild after remembering pari??..is pari responsible fr Geet's condition???
Eagerly waiting fr nxt update di..

Originally posted by: mani24

di I just have no words for this story coz di am guaranteeing 1000% ke this story is gonna another EPIC just like my all time EPIC L&H & DL di u just made me cry wid this first update😭 it was so heart wrenching di sachi😭 geet kisi ke liye na chahte howe bhi she has to work as a bar dancer aur di geet is wid tht girl in kolkata aur jahan woh ab kaam ke liye aayi tht person is the nastiest one😡 jo use nandita ke naam se bula raha tha😲 aur di I so want maan to beat this dirty man black & blue ha😡 aur di just coz of her geet had to agree aur phir she wore the most skimpy dress aur came out to the bar aur di hated when some people were trying to touch her aur she was just doing all this for her 😭 aur doosri taraf maan is madly searching for his geet not knowing ke she's has changed her name jiski wajah se use dhoodne main mushkil ho rahi hai lekin he's vowed to himself ke he will get her back to where she belongs tht is wid him phir woh chahe ya na chahe👏😊 aur di then he drifted to the past where he for the first time met her aur tht too in college when she came wid her frnd pari aur coz of pari aur her parents geet got admission in one of the best aur richest colleges in india aur pari was her BFF tht time geet was crying coz her dupatta got torn in pari's car aur seeing geet's tears pari was broken too but promised her ke she will get the same dupatta aur phir yahan tak kaha ke agar tu phir royi to I'll die aur hearing tht geet got angry but tht was the time maan fell in love wid her 😳 lekin di jab he came to present he was wild thinking abt pari😲 aur di why do I feel ke geet ke dur jaane main pari ka haath hai😲 par di ur pagal baby dying for the next update di jaldi se dena coz after this first update my mind is just filled wid my this story di😳

Originally posted by: dancersqueen

awesome... who is the other person????

Originally posted by: preeti555

awesome part
geet struggling for job but atlast got it
maan thinking about past
in past geet looks so naive and innocent

Originally posted by: Desigirls12

wow lovely emotional heart winching update.. te way geet searching for job and te way she got one as bar dancer and te way she wants to take tat job coz for her was lovely emotional.. te way geet felt disgust seeing te place and te way mr.roy taking advantage of her condition making her to dance in his tunes was lovely heart winching.. te way my maan searching his geet and his pain and guilty thinking he te one push her to such state was lovely emotional... very emotional starting. i love te update

Originally posted by: shalinimaaneet

poor geet money ke liye wo bar dancer ban gyi
aur wo kiski bat kr rhi hai ???
and who is nandita ?
aur maan geet ko dhoondh rha hai?
confusing and intresting
wating for nxt

Originally posted by: manikka

wooww...

tht was awesome start...there is a secret past...and m will be waiting for tht past to be revealed...i think geet has a baby for whom she is ready to do anything...

Originally posted by: sessy

its true that there are a lot of basta**s like roy in the world who wants to take advantage of girls like geet.feeling very sad that geet is doing all this against her will for money.hope maan finds her soon.

thx for the update,loved it

Originally posted by: punam2712

GEET IS IN TROUBLE AND MR ROY KNOWS IT

THAT IS WHY HE IS TAKING ADVANTAGE OF HER

POOR GEET

BUT WHO IS SHE WORRIED FOR

MAAN IS SEARCHING DESPERATELY FOR GEET BUT IS UNABLE TO FIND HER