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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
Maan is such an impatient guy! Dadi is just awesome! Ordering maan Singh khurana eh. Oh my poor geet just cried on first update :( can't wait for their meeting! This ff looks really good! I will check your other works too! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrats for the new ff.
the starting of this ff is good.
it seems to be an interesting story.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I Hate You Means I Love You,

Part 2

Maan and Geet meeting accidently or in accident?

Morning Sun shined high on Hosharpur, Geet jumped from her bed and got ready as soon as possible, her heart was beating high for her friend Veera, she needs to find what's going on, Geet got ready and rushed down and joined the prayer with her family, and she had a smile, after the prayer she got the blessing for her grand pa, "Always be happy, Geet, good to see that you have accepted our decision, I hope you understand whatever we do is for your own good,"

"Ji, I understand, sorry if I hurt you yesterday," Geet said with a smile melting his heart, "No, No dear, I understand your feeling, but your future is so important to us than your feelings, we want you well settled and happy," her grand pa said and Geet smiled up, "I was thinking that, today can I go and meet my friend Veera and come, Maa said her marriage too is fixed, so can I go and see her,"


"No need for that," Breej's voice interfered her words, Breej is Geet's elder brother, and he had crowned himself as the head of the village, and created some rules and he made everyone to follow those, there is a rumor too that Breej had formed an gang, an dangerous gang to see that his rules are followed, and if anyone crosses his rules line, they would have the punishment that's dead, But Geet didn't believe this, atleast she didn't want to believe this, but now she felt strange,

Breej never stopped her from going to Veera's house, as he doesn't allow Geet to others house's, But Veera was Breej's close friend's sister, Veera's Brother is the second in-command for Breej's troop, so Geet was always allowed to go to Veera's house but today, "Why Veer Ji," Geet asked slowly yet scared of him, "why you can't listen without a reason," Breej yelled up, and Geet heart skipped a beat and she stepped back, scared that he would beat her up, which was very common,

"Breej, Veera is Geet's friends, I see no harm in Geet meeting Veera," Her grand pa spoke and Breej turned from Geet, "Actually I had a word with Veera's brother, he said, Veera is not well, so Only, and People are coming to see Geet soon for her marriage and I don't want Geet to get sick," Breej said, shocking Geet, something was very strange, Breej spoke as if he cares for her, that can never happens, Geet was 100% sure that he is not telling the truth,

"Geet, Breej is right," her Grand pa too said, Geet now had an unknown urge to go and Meet Veera somehow, to know what's happening, she thought for a second, "Ok Breej Veer ji, if you say so, I will not go to see Veera, but can I go to my old school, need to get a Certificate from there, just one work left, then I can be in home even," Geet said slowly, "No need, will ask them to send the certificates here even," Breej jumped up,

"But I had to sign some forms for it," Geet said, "What the hell are you going to do with those certificates now, and also now you are going to Get married, so no use with those certificates anyways," Breej said, "No Veer ji, that Certificate is so important, it will be helpful to get the passport too, if I need to go too Foreign," Geet said slowly, "Geet," Breej spoke up, "wait Breej, if that's important, then let Geet go, and ah, Go with Rachi and come back soon," Geet's grand pa said,

Breej didn't argue, he just went away and Geet looked at him feeling successful and smiled and went out with a yes. Geet got ready on her school uniform and went away with her sister Rachi, "Geet di, Golgappa", Rachi shouted and rushed to the Golgappa stand, "Oie, Spicy ones," Rachi said as she took the small plate for Herself and got the Golgappa and started eating, "Oie Rachi, if you are eating Golgappa here, then you will be late to the school," Geet warned her Sister,


"Leave it Didi, anyways my first hour class will be boring, no problem if I go late," Rachi said causally, "Oh Really, if they inform this to Breej Veer ji na, Then it will turn interesting," Geet said and her sister immediately kept the plate down, "Ok Didi, let's Go," Rachi said and Geet stopped her, "Rachi, actually, you go to school, I have some work," Geet said slowly, "work? What work, hey wait, didi you are not thinking of going to Veera di's house, are you? Rachi asked shocked,

"Rachi Please, Veera is My Best friend and I think she is in trouble, so I need to Meet her," Geet explained, "Didi, are you crazy, if someone sees you or if Veera's Brother sees you, than that's all, Breej Veer ji will kill us for sure," Rachi said scared, "Rachi, Please, I will take care of it, I will be careful, I promise," Geet pleaded, "But what if they ask for the certificate," Rachi asked Remembering Geet's words, "Rachi, I had arranged for it, I already call my friend and said her to give the certificate to you, you go and get it and keep it with you, I will meet Veera and will come to the school and can, go home together, ok, please Rachi,"

"Didi, I don't know if something goes wrong, we will end up dead, for sure," Rachi said scared and though for a few seconds, "Ok, But how will you go there, it's quite a distance right, someone will see you for sure," Rachi said worried, "no, I already asked Chotu to bring my Scooty, so will go in my Scooty in the main road and not inside the village, so no one will see me, and will come back soon, ok," Geet said, "Ok, Didi, but be careful," Rachi said and Geet kissed her and smiled big and thanked her and rushed away,

Geet was running as fast as she could and as careful as she could and she was breathing high when she reached her secret hide out, where her little brother was waiting with her Scooty, "Thank you Chotu, you are so sweet," Geet said as she kneeled down and held his face with so much of love, "Anything for my sweet sister," He said with a big smiled and then they both started their journey,


Geet was driving as fast as she could, "Geet di, why in so much hurry, we are in the outskirt only na," Chotu asked seeing his sister, "though we are out of our villagers sight, we still can't risk it, if somebody sees this then that's all" Geet said, and went fast, as she was riding, as truck passed them and took away her dupatta too with it, "hey, wait, my dupatta, Baba ji, hey stop," Geet shouted shocked and started to raise her speed and follow the truck,

"Hmm, does this have to happen now, today, Baba Ji, Help Me, hey stop," she was screaming up,

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"Excuse me, how to get to Hosharpur?" Maan asked as he stopped his jeep before an old man, "Just a few yards, go straight and you will find the village," the old Man said and Maan thanked him and started his drive, the hot sun above his head was making his sweat, "wow, what an place to build an Five star hotel, still can't believe Ms.Rasika took such a stupid decision, I knew girls are bit brainless, but not this brainless, her dad made a big mistake of giving her the power,"

"Whatever, because of her stupid decision I am rounding around this village," Maan thought frustrated, as per Dadi maa's instructions, Maan asked Rishi, his driver to bring his favorite jeep, as his BMW will be dead if he rides it in this village roads, the sun was high and Maan didn't mind it much as he was used to the high heats during his camping's worldwide, Maan was riding his ways through the wheat and corn fields and he had an good feeling and relaxing seeing these things.,

After driving for a while, Maan saw an truck coming opposite to his Jeep, as the road was so narrow Maan had no other go than to take the full left side and give a bit of a way to the truck and so as the truck driver took his full left which was Maan's right, but what they both missed was the Scooty chasing behind the truck, hiding from the view, as the truck had taken the side immediately Geet was shocked and for the speed she was chasing the truck she wasn't able to control the Scooty,

Geet was sure she was gonna have an accident, and closed her eyes tight, so as she did, she turned her right and directly hit on Maan's Jeep and thank god, Maan hit the brake as soon as he saw her and so she only hit on his stopped jeep and trembled and fall and rolled down to the crop ground, she was totally messed up as she rolled down the ground, but she thanked Baba ji as she was safe and she looked at her brother who was also safe and was standing up on the road,

She somehow gathered up and pulled herself on knees and the high sun was hitting on her face and she tried to look up and what she saw took her heart beat away for a second, The Face shining as the hot sun with the sweat on it, the eyes which is burning like a hot volcanic Lava and the expression that could even scare the hell away, he stood before her,


Jalwa

Jalwa

Jalwa

Jismon Ka Hai Yeh Jalwa

Kismon Ka Hai Yeh Jalwa

Shoharat Bhi De Yeh Jalwa

Maksad Bhi De Yeh Jalwa


Dilkash Lage Yeh Jalwa

Mehkash Lage Yeh Jalwa

Nasha Hi Nasha Yeh Jalwa

Maja Hi Maja

Nasha Hi Nasha

Jalwa


All Geet could do was stare and slowly she stood up, and looked at him with courage, "What the hell was that, are you blind?" Maan's rough voice pulled her from her shock, "If you wanna die, go and jump on to a river or well, not on other's vehicles, you idoit," Maan yelled and Geet had enough, somehow his words provoked her anger, but the family she had been from had stopped her from speaking up, the fear of Man was still dwelling in her heart,

"Didi, hurry up, someone might come," her brother voice reminded her of her reason to be out and she turned around and started running away without even taking the Scooty too, Maan got shocked to see her running away suddenly, "Hey," Maan called up but she was long gone, "What the hell, didn't even have the manners to say "Sorry," Just ran away, leave her Scooty too on the road, god, Crazy, stupid, what kind of village is this," Maan roared up irritated,

Maan then went and lifted the Scooty lying on the path and pull it aside, and a small iron piece sticking out near the handle scratches his hand, "Damn," Maan winced pulled his hand from the handle and looked at the scratch it made on his hand and blood was slowly showing up, "God, I just hate that girl, god, please, I just don't want to see that face ever again" Maan thought and went to his jeep and took the water bottle and washed the scratch and jumped in to his jeep and started his drive,

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"Who is it didi, looks new to this Village, looks like a city guy? Geet's brother said as they walked hiding themselves in to the village streets, "Yes, and Thank Baba ji for that, if it was someone from this village na, then the news would have gone to Breej Veer ji and then no one would have saved us" Geet said,

"Yes Didi, you are right, but for a second I was scared seeing him yelling," Her brother said, "Man, what else they knew, other than yelling and shouting and beat the girls, city or village all the guys are same, didn't you see that guy, didn't even have the courtesy to ask whether we are ok, but started to shout at us, I hate guys, they never knew anything other than scaring the weaker ones," Geet said and her mind played her his face and eyes and even thinking about his face gave her fear,

"Baba ji, please don't ever make me look at that guy again, please," Geet prayed and then she smiled big as she saw Veera's house, "Chotu Veera's house, let's go through the back door, it will be safe," Geet said and then Chotu and Geet rushed towards the back door,

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"Excuse, where can I see this village, Sarpanch ji Baljinder Singh," Maan asked as he entered the village, "Sir, you go straight, take the first right turn and you will see the Handa Mansion, that's his house, you can see him there," the guy said and Maan thanked him and went towards the Handa Mansion house,

He saw the big gate and a guy came running to Maan, "Need to meet the Sarpanch ji" Maan said and the guy nodded and opened the big gate for them, "Looks like this family is of some Royal back ground," Maan thought and he drove inside the mansion, he stopped his jeep and looked up, "Hope everything goes well here too," Maan thought looking at the Mansion, and jumped from his jeep,

Precap: Geet's promise to Veera, (Thank you so much for all your love and support dearones, i am so overwhelmed, thank you so much, love you all,,, hope you will like the upcoming updates too,,)




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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Awesome update!!! ... First meeting not so good between them!!! What will happen now???
Waiting for the next update!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
awesome update..
1st meet n fight...
ab kya hoga!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Hi I am new reader nice part geet and veera are brdt friend first meeting of manneet
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
haye opposite view on first meeting
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
nice part
maaneet 1st meet...not on a good note
ab aage kya hoga
Edited by -Mithuna- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
hi thanks 4 da pm n splendid interestin update! Geet wants to go n meet Veera! Finally they agree bt this Brij 😡! Maaneet meet! Maan incensed! Geet runs away! Maan at Handa Mansion! update soon! Well written
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
nice first meet
but what happen to geet frd
hope she fine
hate maan like brij

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