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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111



haan 8 years ke baad she conceived


😊 WOW!!! God bless her...

ye lakshu kahan hei ..??😲😲
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


😊 WOW!!! God bless her...

ye lakshu kahan hei ..??😲😲




patha nahi 10 ke baad aayegi shayad
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hello ji padariye
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aaj main bhi free hoon hubby is still in review meeting
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For banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi....🤗



We need a little tears to clear the Mist in our eyes,
a little assurance to clear the Doubts in our head,
a little hug to nurse our Aching hearts,
and a little rest to carry on Moving forward.

Glimpse ...

Nothing is there to trust, nothing is there to love , a broken base of relation and a misty way to go.
Their heart full of pain , their mind full of hate , an uncertain relation and a long way to go.

Note... This is a fiction. If someone feel that it reflect any other writer's work , then plzz pm me . I'll try my best to keep it un affected ... This is all imaginary not reality so enjoy it . Plz avoid if u find any mistake.













Part - 75



After taking their diner he gave her meds and she spent some time on net and then decided to talk to Maan about d file but her words left in mouth seeing Dadima and Annie at d door.

Dadima: Geet how r u beta ? tumhe laga to nahi jyada?


Geet: mei theek hu Dadima bas hand bandage geela hua tha change ker liya , aap tense matt ho.


Anniie: Sorry Guddu , dono functions per tum prob mei pad gai.. kuch enjoy nahi ker pai. Annie hugged her side way in affection with a hanging face.


Geet: it's OK Annie, don't feel bad , i'm better now.


Dadima: mere bacche ko pata nahi kiski nazar lag gai , be careful in marriage beta , ab to mujhe bhi tension hone lagi tumhari , bas ye shaadi acche se nikal jaye.


Maan was listening everything quietly * he was feeling very bad for Geet and his fingers folded in a tight fist in anger thinking about that b**** Pam and her deeds. He got up and went to his study * took d print out of d tickets and put that in an envelope and went down * he entered in GD room with a stern face and handed d envelop to Pam .


Maan: these r d print out of ur tickets for Monday morng , pack ur bags.


GD: tickets for us but Maan we didn't say to book that.


Maan: i know , but u both r going on Monday, happy journey.


GD: but why?


Maan: ask to ur grand daughter , GN.


He left d place giving an angry glare to Pam.


GD turned to Pam confused.


Maan came back in d room and his anger flew away in d air find d three bful ladies busy in chatting and laughing * he sat near them passing them a smile.


Dadima: Maan marriage mei tum har waqt Geet ke sath rehana , isse kuch nahi hona chahiye , kisi ko eske paas matt aane dena.


Maan gave a smile and nodded in a yes * they talked for some time on function and then bid GN to each other . Maan was observing that Geet was using washroom very frequently in these few hrs * she seemed restless too .


After leaving Dadima and Annie Geet came near Maan and spoke slowly.


Geet: Maan wo if u don't' mind i want to see ur bills file again , please.


Maan: bills file ? ku kya hua , kuch prob hei kya ?



Geet: i find some yesterday that's why i want to check again , please.


Maan: it's OK Geet , ye lo ,, no..no , first sit here and take rest , u r moving a lot and this is not good for u * holding her hand he made her sit on d bed and covered her with blanket . Don't move now.


She gave a sheepish smile and opened d file chewing her lower lip He came other side and got busy in his laptop. Geet calculate each bill thoroughly and wrote down d actual amount in front of d entry. She was shocked at Dev's negligency , it was not d matter of 1 or 2 bills but many have some mistakes in amount and she was sure that it had done in full awareness * She was in dilemma how to talk to Maan coz he became angry on Dev for this loss and his carelessness. Geet wanted to disclose this after Dev's HM and it would be good if Dad talk to Dev regarding this.


She was in thought , got up and went to washroom again * Maan saw her tense and moving again .


Maan: Geet ,, what's wrong with u ? Why r u tense and moving ? If u have any prob then tell me.


Geet: nahi mei theek hu , Maan mujhe aapse kuch baat kerni hei .


Maan: kya baat hei bolo .


Geet: wo Maan , iss co. ka payment abhi rok do , please * mujhe bills me kuch flaws mile hei aur mai chahati hu ki abhi koi payment inhe na ki jaye.


Maan: flaws ? kahan batao .


Geet: abhi nahi , kuch old bills check kiye hei aur kuch abhi baaki hei * aap is co. ki quotations mujhe de sakte ho ? mai do din baad aapko table de dungi .


Maan became alert now and gave her a thoughtful look .


Maan: Geet , prob jyada hei kya?


Geet: hei to , but please keep it with u , let me check first , hmmm.


Maan: hmmm, OK, chalo tum so jao , kal Sunday hei aur shaadi bhi , office close hei to Monday ko hi quotation milegi.


He kept d files aside and switched off d lights * Geet was lost in her thoughts to solve this matter without a fuss because d loss amount became big if she calculate all months loss and Dev wud deffo get a good scolding session from Dad and Maan * In her tension and meds effects she slept there sharing d bed with Maan.


Next day was d marriage day and all were hell busy * d function was at Khurana FH * Maan Yash and Adi was very busy from d morning * Maan was worried for Geet also and calling her after every hr . He instructed her not to come out from d room and he would be there in afternoon .

He came , got ready and then helped her * she was looking very beautiful and he was adoring her * They came down and Dadima blessed them .


All got ready for d marriage and first they went to Temple to take blessing from god but Geet didn't come out * Maan asked her to come but she refused with lower eyes * Maan was surprised why Dadima and Annie didn't force her to come and Giving her Prasad with a smile after coming out . Geet was with Maan in his car and all were in their respective cars. Pam was not coming out in front of Maan . Maan was curious about Geet's weird behaviour from last night .


Maan: Geet kya hua tumhe , kuch prob hei kya?


Geet shyly: nahi to , essa kuch nahi.


Maan: Geet tum raat se pareshan ho aur ab bhi temple nahi gai sabke sath , kya hua?


Geet: wo esse hi bas , koi prob nahi hei.


Maan becoming ridged and annoyed : Geet tum mujh se apni baat share ku nahi kerti , ku chupati ho ? mai pooch raha hu to batati ku nahi apni prob jab ki saaf dikh raha hei ki tum tense ho , kuch chupa rahi ho .. bolo kya baat hei ?


Geet too became annoyed with his pestering and glared at him .


Geet : aap ko janna hei meri prob ?


Maan: maine Hibru mei bola kya ab tak?


She rolled her eyes * opened her phone , Google something and placed d phone on Maan's palm ... lo padh lo meri prob . She turned her face to look out from d car window cribbing him under her breaths.


Maan read d matter opened on d phone's screen and bit his lip in embarrassment .. shit * she is in period and looked at her from d corner of his eyes but next min he was reading d whole matter with a naughty smile taking full interest .


He was with her and taking care of her all d time * everything was beautifully arranged for d marriage and guests were enjoying and praising d couple * maximum guests went back after Jaimala ceremony * now d time of Pheraas. Dev and Meera were sitting near d havan kund surrounded by family members . Maan was sitting with Geet * d atmosphere turned sacred with d chanting of mantras by d Pandit and everyone was got busy in that * Maan and Geet felt a nervousness in them * Geet felt a warm touch on her hand and looked at that * Maan held her hand in his and interwined his fingers with hers * she looked at him awed but he was looking at d fire of hawan kund , very calm and composed .


Maan knew that she was looking at him * to make her realise his desire he pressed her hand and caressed that with his thumb. This lil gesture filled Geet's heart with warmth * her eyes moistened but her lips adored with a smile * all d time of pheras he was holding her hand tightly and listened every mantra carefully * at last when Dev put vermillion on Meera's partition and tied d mangalsutra in her neck ,Maan took d advantage and kissed on Geet 's hand lowering his head a lil. * she shuddered .


Precap - realising d depth of their relation .


Part- 76

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3869514/mg-ss-the-mist-thread-9-updated-pt-80-pg-125-7th-jan?pn=63






Sorry for mistakes.

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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rashmivaish

aaj main bhi free hoon hubby is still in review meeting



chalo aaj yaha gappe maarthe hai
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mujhe laga ki GD will ask Pam something
No problem
OMG Maan got embarrassed after knowing her periods but later he went naughty to read that fully
I m happy that Maan realised the sacred feeling of marriage
Hope all will be fine soon

agar tum uss Sam ko wapis nahin laayi to
mujhe lagta hai ki wo wapis aayegi
hai na😆😆
agar aisa hai to Im waiting
I want to see her getting insulted by Maan like he did with Pam😃
Edited by rashmivaish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow ... rashmi... kya baat hain...special hello to u dear

i forgot to ask... dhoom 3 dekha? kaisa hain?


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